Four months. Four long, devastating months Fluttershy can't even bear. It's been four months since the murder of the chief of police of Manehattan, Chief Thunderlane, Fluttershy's father. And now, just as she's about to go and research the case of the magic dealers the Shadowbolts Inc., she is now responsible for the care of one of the most dangerous criminals in all of Manehattan, Discord. Yet, with Discord's keen intelligence on the organization and its members and with Fluttershy's interrogation skills and persuasion, they are determined to stop the organization from spreading even more dark magic and find Fluttershy's father's killer, or in the process, die trying.
A Fluttercord story, as well as it being my first story on this website so if there are any mistakes or if it's taking an extremely slow start please tell me and criticize me if you please. 
*Sex tag due to it having suggestive themes but having no actual sexual contact or explicit actions.
Oh. My. Luna.... That was amazing! I can't believe you haven't written before... Gosh, I can't even think of any criticism to give... you truly have a gift... continue!
5618813 Awww
Thank you sooo much and I'm so glad you like it already~
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In all honesty this isn't my first piece of writing but I'll take the compliment anyway
Oh wow! You've definitely caught my attention!
Amazingly awesome start. I can't wait for more!!
More.....more!....MORE!...
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Must have Fluttercord... *waits patiently for next chapter*
It wasn't too long at all, it was perfect. That chapter and first interactions were fantastic. I was squealing the whole time
5706629 Aww thank you soo much~
It was pretty well written, barring a few grammatical errors. Pacing was good, too. But I'm not too keen on the concept of Discord being a rapist and a skeevy pervert, though, especially if it's going to be swept under the rug for the sake of shipping, you know?
*dreamy romantic sigh* Oh, Fluttercord...
5706666 I understand completely. In all honesty, even though this chapter is up, I will make a few changes in it; that part also went up in my mind as soon as I put the chapter up as well. It's just since I haven't posted in like a week I needed to put it up. But thank you anyway for the critique, I greatly appreciate it~
This is awesome!! The chapter wasn't long at all and I'm glad that it's longer than the others. I was squealing at the part when Discord is checking Fluttershy out! The only thing I didn't like was that one of his crimes was rape, but I was able to ignore it. Very good chapter and I can't wait for the next!!
5707162 Good to know!
In any case, I'll continue keeping up with this fic since I like the premise enough. Detective stories are neat.
Shouldn't the sentance be?
I feel sorry for putting that in my comment.
I don't really like to do this sort of thing… you know point out writing errors.
5713871 It's alright, but thank you anyway. I gladly accept any comment that will help with my writing. Hopefully that was the only mistake hehe~
Gosh....this chapter was so good that I read it AGAIN!
5726816 Well I'm glad you like it so much hehe
This is so far one of the best stories I've read so far on this website! Keep it up
THIS DESERVES SOME MUSTACHES
I loved this chapter! Although I didn't like some of the crimes Discord had committed I don't think it mattered that much but I did have a question; is this an anthro story? I don't mind if it is or not I was just curious because ponies don't usually wear clothes on casual days (unless it's like a hat or something or they're like fancy shmancy ponies or something). Just wondering but other than that I absolutely love this book so far!!!
5761434 I'm glad you like the story, and to answer your question: if you think it's an anthro story, it is. If you think it isn't, it isn't. Whatever you perceive it to be, it is. In my opinion, they aren't as much being anthro, but ponies who stand on their hind legs, but that's how I see the story. And the reason for them wearing clothes, it just sort of gets the story to flow a bit. I'll soon add a blog about the story and a background for any further questions that you or others may have. But overall I'm glad you like the story and will try to post the next chapter as soon as I can!
...Discord, don't play in the toilet. Seriously, that's my only complaint about this chapter.
Aside from that, AWESOMENESS I LOVE UPDATES!
AAAHH!! New chapter! i'm so happy! Very good chapter, I loved it!
Luv dis story.
Yes! new chapter time to read.
New Chapter!
"Yay" Hope there will be more Fluttercord in the next chapter. Can't wait for the next update. 
Victim!? I don't like the sound of that.
He wouldn't hurt Fluttershy would he?
I can't wait for the next chapter!!
OMG i screamed at the top of my lungs when I saw a new chapter. Thank you so much, I can't wait for the next one! Please update soon!
OK i did not read this yet but by the Title im exited!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This is actually more interesting than my Law class!
...I said that like I was surprised. DUH, this fan fiction is better than my Law class!
Oh my gosh! This is so exciting!!!!!! My nose is practicaly in my phone and my heart is pounding! I love this! I can't wait for the next one!
I don't think theres any need to rewrite this chapter. It is really good and I loved it!
You thought you did bad? Are you kidding me??? This was awesome!!!!! But now I'm worried of what Discord will do....
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Aw thank you guys so much~
I don't know why I thought this was bad, maybe it was my little knowledge of trials and such, but nonetheless I'm glad you enjoyed it and that I probably don't need to redo it except fix errors
THAT. WAS. AMAZING. I can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter!!!!!
One word describes this chapter....
AWESOME
Another amazing chapter! Thought that's not a surprise.
I'm so loving this story ^-^
YAY ANOTHER CHAPTER!
This was awesome! I really liked that this chapter expressed how everyone was feeling about the situation. This story is awesome and I wish I could like it more than once! SQUEE! I'm so excited for the next chapter!
GASP!
I think my heart just imploded from Fluttercord!
...it demands MOAR
This story is so GREAT!!!!!!!!!!
wow that was in intense but awesome chapter
I love the interaction between discord and fluttershy and cant wait for more!
Amazing. Cannot wait for more.
5879542 Aww thank you so much. I really don't even know how I come up with these ideas, sometimes boredom can take a person to places they didn't know existed (Also movies, books, fanart, and fanficions help with the cause too). And I know with work, you can also write like the way me or many other fantastic writers can write. But nonetheless I'm glad you really like the story~
NO! BAD CHOICE OF WORDS!! *smacks face with hoof* NO CREAPYNESS AUTHOR!!!*smacks face other way with hoof*
Yay happy to see an update n it was an awesome chapter can't wait for your next update
*Squea*
5746237 2manly4meh
5773832 no its more like *insert sexy music*
Can't wait for next chapter.
OMG!!!! I loved this whole thing <3 Haha, what on earth inspired this? Please, please continue
I can't wait for the next chapter…. and I hope you will read my first work once it is done 