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Marina Stars


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Two strangers dance after a chance encounter on a mysterious night, kept secret only by the masks they wear.

Written for Day Seven of Fluttercord Week 2022: Free Day

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This was incredibly interesting to read. The shift in perspectives was well executed as well. I appreciate how much care was taken in concocting the right mix of information-gathering and remaining unknowns. Honestly, despite the fact that this was written specifically for an event, I feel like a continuation of this story would be extremely interesting. However, it's not my place to say whether or not there will ever be one. Nonetheless, I want to compliment your amazing work and the interesting story you've chosen to tell.

Ooh, I love a good first meeting when they don't know each other's identities! This was a good read, with well-executed shifts in perspective. The two of them got to know each other enough to form a small connection, but there's still enough mystery to imagine the various ways they could meet again and interact in the future...

Enjoyed this. :heart: :upvote:

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