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misskoifishpony


Hello Fluttercord Fans and shipper fans alike! My name is MissKoiFishPony, but you can call me Miss Koi or Missy:) I love My Little Pony, I love to write, I love Fluttercord.

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Takes place right at the end of "Make New Friends But Keep Discord". When the music starts to play, Fluttershy and Discord dance at the gala. However, there is great magic when two powerful magical beings share in each other's joy.
Cover art by LoveLizeSwe

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Comments ( 43 )

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I'm so glad that you like it, and thanks for the favorite:pinkiehappy:

With our forces combined! Lol ^_^

I thought it was so cute and fluffy and steven universey with them combining and all.

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Haha lol forces unite!:D I'm so glad that you liked it and thank you for reviewing and reading it:heart: Did u like my Fluttercord creation and her design?

The tenses keep changing, but overall a sweet story! It's nice when an author lets the reader decide for his/herself how the exact ending plays out. That fluff though!

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Wow! Thank you so much for reading my story, it means so much to me to have you read it:raritystarry: I'm glad that you liked it and it's fluff:pinkiehappy: What did u think of the Fluttercord fusion? Same here, I like it when endings, at least for one shots, that are perfectly open ended.

6029531 the fluttercord fusion...a bit cheesy, and the explanation seemed rushed, but hey; I'm all about dat cheese.

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Haha lol I'm glad that you liked it despite the cheesiness:twilightsheepish: Yeah, I could explained that whole how and why they did a little better, huh?

6029550 well...I completely understood the concept, but it could've stretched over more than just a few strands of dialogue.

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That's true, it could have gone on a little longer.

Wow. You literally made Fluttercord. The concept is fresh, I'll admit. There are some spelling and grammar issues, but not enough to distract from the story. Just a quick view with a beta should be fine.

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What does quick view with beta mean? Did you like the story and Little Miss Fluttercord?

My first reaction to the title: "Heeeeey, that sounds familiar." Then:

Soon, the two beings transform into shapes of pure white light.

Oh my god! Haha, I couldn't stop grinning. This was pretty darn cute.

I will say something to explain this further would've been nice. Even if it's mentioned in the comments, ehhh, I'd like my say, heh. The fusion itself could be understood just fine; but how it works in this universe and if it's been done before would be some recommended background. Unlike Steven Universe, where it's been seen before "Alone Together," this is possibly the first time they've seen or heard this. So it brings up a few questions: has this happened before? Does this sort of magic differ from everyone else? And can anyone do it, if their love is strong enough? I get why you chose this idea - Alone Together is one of my favorite episodes - but since this universe is different from that, there are things that should be clarified.

I do like the sound of the design, though. It doesn't just sound like a mix-match of Fluttershy and Discord, but something different. A few colors other than white could've added a bit of inconsistency to Fluttercord--better to match Discord--but that's all I can think of.

Cute!

As others have said...there are some tense and grammatical errors but those can be fixed.

The Smooze belting out songs like Sinatra made me crack up. :D

This is so sweet!!!!!!
I love Fluttershy and Discord!
And Alone Together is my favorite episode from Steven Univers!
This is an Epic combo!

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Haha lol I'm glad that you liked the Steven Universeness and the cuteness of my story:twilightsheepish: Thank you for reading and leaving such a great review:twilightsmile: Same here, Alone Together is one of my favorite episodes in show...in the list of so many:twilightoops:
I like to think that no couple has ever done this before and it's only for Fluttershy and Discord due to not only their strong bond but their magical abilities. I mean, we're combining the magic of the Lord of Chaos and The Element of Kindness. They have the potential of performing a great spell together and something no pony has ever done before. The magic they're using for this is love magic, and like love in the real world, it comes in different forms. So Shining Armor/Cadence love spells will be different from Fluttershy's and Discord's along with every other couple because each relationship is different. Each creature has a different kind/amount of magic and it depends on how the couple feels. For Fluttershy and Discord, they felt so close and in sync and happy with one another that they just naturally...well...fuse with one another. Every couple in love magic expresses their relationship differently, there's no set standard. For Fluttershy and Discord, they express their love by becoming one and creating a harmony with each other. Sorry if I didn't explain this better in the story.
Yay! Glad that you liked her design because I'm quite proud of it myself:) I made her all white to represent the purity and innocence of their love. But yeah, she could have used a bit more color.

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Yay you read my story and u liked it/thought it was cute!:yay::heart: Thank you! Haha lol same here, I thought smooth singing Smooze is funny too:derpytongue2: I can see the Smoozenator being a singer:raritywink:

*cough* *Cough* Steven Universe Reference

6030002 Just have somepony proofread it.

6030365 Oh no, it's fine. I got what was needed to be known from the story, thankfully (as this isn't meant to be a world-building thing and that's okay, lol). On the contrary, the story itself is perfectly fine. I enjoyed it as a cute little shipfic. I simply think that that could totally be an interesting story idea in itself, so I couldn't help but be curious. After all, love has been shown to be a powerful weapon, so just imagine the Lord of Chaos and an Element in love! But of course, this story isn't about just that idea, so it's no biggie.

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I agree, the idea behind this kind of magic would be good world building and a wonderful story idea itself. As much as Steven Universe inspired me, the concept of fusion and applying to our favorite couple was truly the inspiration for this story. Maybe I should write a story solely dedicated to that...or:pinkiehappy:...maybe you or one of my readers can tackle this topic too. Wink wink, nudge nudge:raritywink: Oh good, I'm glad that the story was explanatory to you and enjoyed as a shipfic:heart:

Wait...why were they a girl?

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It's part of the Steven Universe and plus...why not make them a girl?:raritywink:

6032323 okay. Nothing to do with Discord occasionally being feminine, i.e. wearing a dress, having eyelashes, etc.

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Although that can be another reason too why it's female.:pinkiehappy:

That was adorable! I absolutely loved that little shipfic, it was so cute and just, OMG MY FEELS!!!! EEK! I just, Ugh it's too much! :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: just adorable

Aww, that was cute. That whole fusion thing was a bit weird though. (But I'm not really familiar with that show you mentioned so I guess the references are kind of lost on me. *shrugs*) Did like the bit with them separated again at the end.

Oh, and one more thing: Ha ha, singing Smooze.

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Dear Sharkie,
Thank you for taking the time to read my one shot and leaving me a review both on my fanfic account and on my Fimfiction account:) You're too sweet. I'm glad that you liked it despite the weird fusion and the Steven Universe references. I highly recommend you check out the show, I think you'll like it. Even though it's in the middle of it's second season, but each episode is 15 minutes long, so it should be easy to catch up on. But you don't have to watch it. Haha lol same here, singing Smooze was one of my favorite parts. Haha well, I couldn't just let them stay fused together forever, they had to separate. Anyway, you're awesome and have a good one!

6037908 No problem. Happy to review. I'll probably check that show out sometime. (Whenever I get my lazy rear in gear when it comes to watching TV episodes.) *chortles* And regarding this story, you can never have too much Fluttercord fuel, but I think the singing Smooze kind of stole the show.

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Haha lol, oh you're not that lazy girl:raritywink: Besides, we're all lazy in our own special way:heart: Indeed, you can never have too much Fluttercord fuel:pinkiehappy: Haha lol, I can imagine The Smooze being the singing type:rainbowkiss: You know what they say: it's usually the quiet ones who are singers:trollestia:

Looks at cover pic...
"..." :rainbowhuh:
1 sec later...
":derpyderp2:"
another sec later...
"OMG SOMEONE USED MY DRAWING!!! MOM, MOM!"


Haha sry :twilightblush:

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Oh my goodness, hello!:pinkiehappy: I'm so so sorry that I used your picture without your permission. I don't have a deviantart account, so I had no way of communicating with you. I didn't know that you had a Fimfic account. I deeply apologize. I know how important art knowership is.
Did u enjoy my story?

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Haha, it's okay that you used my drawing :twilightsmile:
I acualy thought I would die when I saw that you used it x)
And, well... After I reed the fanfic I feelt kinda stupid for drawing the dance pose wrong.. :raritydespair:
Haha, But I did enjoy the story. Even if it was confusing with the whole "Becoming one thing" :twilightsmile:

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Phew! Oh good, I'm glad that you were flattered by me using your art for my cover art :twilightsheepish: You didn't do the dance pose wrong, your picture is beautiful the way it is:heart: Don't change! Sorry about the whole "becoming one thing" was confusing, but thank you for reading and enjoying my story:twilightsmile:

Fluttercord is best ship... SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!:fluttershysad::heart::pinkiehappy::yay:

Fusion is just a cheep tactic to make cute ships cuter!

The story was lovely, and full of fluff! There was one thing that peaked my mind though... As fluttercord, they talked to themselves so I just wondered what a random pony walking by would have to say to that. Hmm....have a nice day, Firebrace Out!!:yay:

This is so cute! A fusion, named Fluttercord! First story like this, also It's just so simple. One thing though, when they talk back and forth, I found it a bit confusing, but the giggles helped me.:yay:

I liked it, but I was a bit disappointed when it turned out to based on the Steven Universe episode... Sorry... It just bugs me.

Comment posted by peace corps general deleted Apr 8th, 2017

I feel a sappire and ruby moment here:pinkiehappy:
But over all I loved the story!!

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