A New Day

Discord doesn't know what to do. He knows he has feelings for Fluttershy and wants to tell her everything, but after the Tirek fiasco he doesn't know how to face her. When he runs into Fluttershy late one night, the truth bubbles to the surface, whether he likes it or not.

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taterforlife

taterforlife #1 · Feb 15th, 2015 · 6 · ·

...Please write more. I beg of you. This was exquisitely beautiful. Your Fluttershy is so close to the canon one, remarkably so. And you had her pretty much lead the whole thing without making it unbelievable. For instance, you had her lick his lips first, yes? Most do that and make her seem like some daring, secret erotica-loving Pegasus who is secretly a whiz in bed. But you kept her shy and sweet, but confident enough to comfort Discord and make sure he knew that he was loved dearly and deeply by her. Wow. This is definitely getting an upvote and a favorite. I'll probably be reading this six more times this week.

It's pretty much exactly how I imagine these two in a romantic relationship, and I simply adore all of it. Don't change a single thing.

JaelynPotons

JaelynPotons #2 · Feb 16th, 2015 · · ·

5629964 Thank you sososososososososooooooo much!!!!! That is the best compliment I think I have ever gotten!!! I'm so glad you enjoyed it, and it makes me so happy to know that you liked it so much to take the time to write me such a wonderful compliment!

Pinkie13Pie

Pinkie13Pie #3 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This is pure poetry! I love the way you described the scene around you! It is perfect, and I definitely recommend this to everyone who loves FlutterCord. Thank you Ma'am or Sir for being such an AMAZING writer! Oh, and the way you let the scene play out; perfection. This is truly extraordinary and just. wow. wow wow wow.

amazing, you are. KEEP ON WRITING! please

JaelynPotons

JaelynPotons #4 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

5631811 Thank you very, very much!! I'm very glad that you enjoyed it, and thank you so much for taking the time to comment!! Any input is so wonderful!!

Frazzled Pony

Frazzled Pony #5 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Oh, this was so cute. Well done.

Kinda find it a little too much with the "I loved you since we became friends." Mostly because I find love growing much more believable than love appearing immediately, even if the characters only recognize it later. I'm a fan of love developing along the path of: "somewhere along the way, we fell in love. Then it took a while more to realize it and even longer to confess it."

Still, that is a relatively minor nitpick. I enjoyed reading this, so, good work again.

5629964 Hi Taters Should have expected you to spot this. Stop reading, start writing

JaelynPotons

JaelynPotons #6 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 2 · ·

5632983 I get where the whole "I've loved you since we were friends" thing would bother someone. I am also one of those people that believes love should grow and be tended to. Except in Fluttershy and Discord's case. Discord hasn't had a real friend in a thousand years, and when a beautiful and kind pony like Flutters is the one to befriend him, it just makes since that he falls in love with her... and after all, love is chaos is it not? I guess that's why I had it like that, and why I had him say "I just didn't know what it was until recently." Thank you so much for your input, I love getting constructive "nitpicks" as you say.

MissytheAngle

MissytheAngle #7 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 1 · ·

Ahh, that was just too cute! And the writing allows for a clear picture in my head; love it!

You'd think one would get tired of seeing a similar premise being used multiple times for Fluttercord fics involving the Tirek incident (love them as we may, it's a common idea used a lot, and while there's absolutely nothing wrong with it, we still see them more often than not these days) but it still feels fresh because you add in a small theory of him sort of knowing something will go wrong. So he helped them in any way possible before the inevitable. I'm tired of those ridiculous "it was all an elaborate plan," so this was a relieving new idea.

Twilight Sparkle KAPOW

Twilight Sparkle KAPOW #8 · Feb 16th, 2015 · · ·

Oh my gosh....this was so....beautiful....you made me cry sad and happy tears! I absolutely loved! this! I wish there was more! I absolutely love Fluttercord, and this story just made me love it way more than I already do! Which I'm 100% crazy or this ship!!

taterforlife

taterforlife #9 · Feb 16th, 2015 · 2 · ·

5632983 ~I don't know what you're taaaaaalking abooooouuuuut~

JaelynPotons

JaelynPotons #10 · Feb 17th, 2015 · · ·

Aaahhhhh you guys are just too much!!! Thank you so much for all the praise, I sincerely appreciate it!!

socky_dude

socky_dude #11 · May 5th, 2015 · · ·

officially one of the cutest fluttercord fic's i have ever read!

Scooter Dracon

Scooter Dracon #12 · May 29th, 2015 · 1 · ·

DAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THE FLUTTERCORD FAN DEMANDS A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sinatzeek

Sinatzeek #13 · Aug 28th, 2015 · 1 · ·

This was a really cute story. I really liked the sweet moment they had just before the kiss, well done with the explaining and nice details. Hope you will make more with these two.

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