Does Twilights ultimate defeat at the hooves of Nightmare Moon mean the end of daytime in equestria?
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Hey, remember when I said I was confused about what was happening? It may be because it's 4:02AM but all that I understood in that chapter was that Fluttershy went shopping and Rainbow got into some beastiality (if that's even possible when dealing with ponies). Oh well, I want a muffin
2056778 Gah it makes sense. oh Celestia why. I tried to write a simple seven page, three thousand and five hundred word chapter. using a synapses of one page five hundred and forty two words. but instead I get a frigging 20 page monster just over ten thousand words, developed just over a month and a week. Three bucking weeks after it's original due date. dagnabit. anyway
on a happy note did ya like the chapter? and if you did, what did you like about it?
cheers
2056801 I should probably be sleeping but I'm coherent enough to recognize that there weren't any grammar errors that I could see. And to be fair I was already confused.
EDIT: I was typing this, forgot what I was doing, then remembered.
2056814 Well at least I did something right this time.
but what is with the long bucking chapters seriously I shouldn't be able to make them.
anyway cheers
Edit: anyway Would you mind pointing out where the mix up is, or which chapters it is in? I'd be greatly appreciative.
2057883 indeed. Though honestly it could have been worse, Celestia could have been caught in the blast.
Another great chapter! Was definitely worth the wait!
2058046 thank you I'll try to start on the next one soon and get it done before the first of next month. but no promises.
2058606 Thank you I'm quite flattered you think of her that way. Oh she is still the same anxiety prone book loving twilight we all know and love but her pain and worries are blunted under months of meditation and training.
Dumb question but ...
Timberwolves? or Changelings in a different form?
or is it a secret?
2059468 Timberwolves definitely you'll find out exactly in a few chapters.
2059477
Thanks, i don't like changelings ... alot ..
although this does give a new meaning to and
2059505 i'm not understanding you're second part. sorry
could you please explain it?
2059515
heheh sorry
I do not read a whole lot of clop (rarely and by accident) the timberwolf scene made and kinda dirty ....
2060993 ah ok I got ya. thanks for the honest answer. Did I do good pointing out the clop scene? or was that a bad Idea?
2061000
I honestly think you did good. The sex tag has always been there (AFAIK) so in a way a clop scene was expected but it did not happen till chapter 9 so in another sense it came out of nowhere (pun not intended ) IMHO giving people warning that the sex was finally happening was a nice thing to do.
Some people refuse to read clop and occasionally miss out on a good story. You gave them a chance to read the story without having to skim parts they would find offensive. Skip the dirty and get back to the story as it were...
I Love the story (especially the Awesome Twilight you created as i have said before) and the clop was actually very well written.
I hope i have actually helped instead of just rambling at you at 1 am in the morning.
Good Luck , may the upvotes and favorites flow like spring rain
2061128 thank you and you're comments like many of the others I have received have been a little something to be extremely grateful about, and push me to actually work on my next chapters rather than sitting on my bum.
yay update
so, fluttershy is a changeling here? some kind of hybrid?
seeing as she detects emotions and flashes her eyes green?
2125629 Do you really want to know?
oh and thanks for the fave
2125713 I... I don't really know...
And you are welcome.
2126137 then you'll be finding out in a bit once the appropriate chapter rolls around.
Let's see how many of these I'll find in this chapter.
Well, only one. That's good.
Also, we finally get a notion of why exactly Fluttershy was basically accused of being a witch in her first town. Now I can't wait for more exposition on that.
Also, I'm curious as to what becoming a queen of the timberwolves entails exactly.
Changing KILL IT WITH FIRE
surely there's a better word choice than using invaded twice here no?....