Does Twilights ultimate defeat at the hooves of Nightmare Moon mean the end of daytime in equestria?
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Update WooHoo!
yay for unexpected updates! yay! whens the next one due?
nice this clop scene was brilliant
makes the wait and the blogpost withe the scene cut worth it^^
i hope seeing the 2 again and seeing the 2 nailing twi again or better yet twis visit at the hive (that would be the chance for something big and you would probably use the chance;) )
3032153 no one really knows, anyway working on it.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
3032176 we'll see![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
so good to see a new chapter ^^
I really like the personality you wrote in the changelings, smart, and open for some propositions, but cautious, and able to survive without draining ponies dry.
3033836 Thank you.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
~had more but it was gibberish.~
3039997Thank you for the large comment. and I'll try and respond to the best of my capabilities.
Would it help to say that the main guard was a standing force, and paid by the council to do their bidding,and of the main guard only thirty percent were actually hoof picked and hired by Celestia?
greyed out rainbow. could you give me a good wording for it?
yea you know what can you help me edit the parts a bit when you have time later?
other than that yes sunny is rarity, and from what we saw of the show, she was drawn to what looked like a rock and from the discord episode she went a little crazy when she wanted and was denied something, anyway that will be explained a bit latter after a bit of rock breaking of course.
As for Raindrops... well basically she is a nimpho version of Rainbow Dash but I'll define her more when that scene comes.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
however for now I'm a long ways away from Ponyville about six or seven chapters depending on distractions and such and unexpected detours for explanations.
there are still a few chapters that will need to be fixed after I get to the nightmare scene and they will probably have to be shattered to pieces then used as parts for the replacement chapters and they will be bad but those chapters are in the beginning of the story so don't worry about the rest of the story being bad, anyway I hope the rest of the story finds you well.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
3040488 thanks for the Critique and Fluttershy's story has yet to be explained but will be in time.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
And the test is to see if you have enough magic and are memetically capable of opening the magic resistant egg(basically follow the really simple directions.), however Twilight actually used real magic on the egg to transform what was inside making The baby dragon. However the egg didn't open in time to save Twilight from failing the magically capable portion.
Oh and that's one of the major problems with having perfectionist parents with high standards.
3040639 no problem if you wan't to help We can pm the editing and you can help me on the source content otherwise just Tell me what you liked. and your thoughts.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
3040822 ok I suck at Rhyming anything else that's new?![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
3042199 Second person to say no nsfw on the breast feeding. once I get a third I'll remove the tags.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
Well considering that Glimmering Wisp is the librarian and that Fluttershy, Rainbow Dash, and Gilda are some of the towns more prominent residents, Raindrops would be prudent to pay attention to their habits also She's friends with Lyra and Lyra likes to talk.
3042354 It's just that she was able to identify the manticore at night(it IS night, right? With NMM being back and all). I can understand her knowing about Fluffle Puff, but I'd expect there to be more manticores and I wouldn't have thought that Lyra would give a detailed enough description. But that's just me being nitpicky.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
3042371 the Equestrian moon is pretty damn bright at night, almost makes the day unnecessary, just saying.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
3042517 I forgot about that.
twilight forgot to take her samples mentioned in the prior chapter
Just a question here. How old are Twilight, Dash, and Flutters at this point in the story? You keep calling them fillies, but they're pretty sexually active, which is getting into foalcon territory. Now, I'm not against foalcon, far from it. But this is something that's been bothering me since Dash's scene with the timberwolves- actually, it's been bugging me since Twilight's breastfeeding of the drake (which, by the way, shouldn't be listed as NSFW unless sex or erotic play is involved). Also, last chapter, you mentioned that the corridor was 70 meters long. That's over 210 feet long. You may want to revise that number.
Now that clop scene was... intense. I like it.
Is it just me, or is Twilight able to make these bargains rather too easily? I'm beginning to think that Glimmering Wisp will become one of the 'stars' that aid Nightmare Moon in her escape.
3266454 thank you! Someone else noticed the foalcon too! That's been bothering me since the breast feeding scene. I think I remember seeing somewhere that this is about two years after they got their cutie marks, which would still put them as fillies.