Does Twilights ultimate defeat at the hooves of Nightmare Moon mean the end of daytime in equestria?
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Yay First btw great chapter look forward to the next one
can't wait for the next one! oh, and am i the only one that's still bothered by rainbow being brainwashed? because i'm still holding out hope that 'fluttershy' and her freaking mutts get their butts handed to them by a very angry rainbow dash, and possibly twilight as well, if they try the same thing on her too.
Finaly a fluggering update! Thank you!
Now that that is out of the way, great chapter and pleas update more comminly plz.
4568266 Sorry had more rl difficulties more like I had the rear Axel shaft of my bike stripped of it's nut and almost drop a wheel on me. Would have broken my Arm again and have to ask my sis to put it in a sling, luckily I took it to the shop before it Gave out.
Anyway fun times And I'll try and bump my update schedule back to once a month at the latest.
4568953 thank you. And to be honest, i started reading this thinkig it was a twiluna fic.
Never been so happy to be wrong.
I feel kinda responsible for the slow update here, this took far too long for me to look over.
No offense, but the last few chapters have been 'Mime running against the wind.' Although I'm sure there was a point to it. Still, glad to see the story seems like it's going to start moving again.
4585064 I completely understand, I honestly should have figured out a way to speed through those parts but I couldn't and My editors couldn't help in that regard, anywho next chapter is going to be a bit more fast paced and an actual chapter like the Rainbow and Fluttershy chronicle. No more journal entry's.
Pacing gets a Tune up when the chapter Pets and discoveries comes around, thats when I actually start writing for real. I apologize for the shittily written earlier chapters. I was pretty much a new writer then.
4565484 When was Rainbow brainwashed? Maybe I overlooked it but I have no memory of any brainwashing taking place here.
4914923 with the timberwolves. they spared, she lost, they brainwashed and raped her, then made her forget that it happened.
4914946 It's more they gave her an addiction to their spunk and beings through ingestion of their lubricant nectar medium.
4986311 it becomes way more readable in later chapters which I realize isn't much if the reader doesn't know how the story gets to those points. however when I do get to it those sections will be explained and written out along with a major plot change to make the entire scenario make more sense.
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Ahah, yeah, I suppose commas are betters, my bad.