Does Twilights ultimate defeat at the hooves of Nightmare Moon mean the end of daytime in equestria?
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Finally got around to this eh? You need to work on the grammar though... I noticed about three errors in the first two paragraphs, one of which was in the first sentence! Also shouldn't the title be "A small goodbye", not "A small goodby"?
2805463 I was searching for editors but No one volunteerd. and I suck at self editing.
Thank you for the input though.
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If you want I could give you a hand later, on my iPad so not now, but keep in mind I'm not the best at all things grammar & spelling. Talk at some point? We've had a grand total of one Skype call after all! Now, to go back to my reading... Stopped mid chapter to read the update, lol.
2805485 so yea wen your ready contact me over skype mine is on.
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Weeeeeeeell... It's 1 AM here, so I don't think I'll be on anytime soon. What's your timezone, we can find a time that works for both of us.
11:18 Am here.
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Not what I was asking for, I meant timezone like GMT or something... Didn't notice that you replied because it wasn't a reply, reading other stuff. We should talk in PMs from now on though, don't wanna add too many comments to this now, do we?
I noticed a couple of times you put "twi" instead of "Twi".
But still glad to see this story isn't dead!
2806243 Well theirs still a few updates left to put in today.
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Edit1: thank you for letting me know of that little mistake I'll fix it immediately.
Shouldn't Twi use her false name instead of her birth name to avoid attention, and so that nopony will remember the incident in canterlot?
2806657 alright where is it. She should be using her false name but I can't always get it right. can ya show me the paragraph or sentance the mistake is in?
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2806684 thanks
Edit: Fixed.