Does Twilights ultimate defeat at the hooves of Nightmare Moon mean the end of daytime in equestria?
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1407376 umm... thank you
looking forward to the next chapter
1411354 thanks
1411415 Success and thank you for confirming that i was able to set it up right. I was trying to make it semi interesting and I'll try and not let you down. a bit of the action is starting in the next chapter or two. question though is their any way I can make the transition from the future timeline to the past timeline (1st and 2nd chapters) smoother and less confusing?dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Vinyl_sad.png
cheers
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You did just fine making the transition smooth. It was just a little confusing because all the sudden, there's this new Prologue, and there are these new characters taking on the mane 6's roles. It just threw me for a loop is all.
On a another note, I have a question. I originally found this story while looking for MoonLight strories. Is that where the romance tag comes from, or is there another reason for it?
And for the record, A LOT more then semi interesting. Just saying.
1421819 I already know whats wrong with it what i need is someone to point it out so i know how why and where to fix it along with what needs fixing. this story is jury rigged as much as I can get it without bashing my head into the keyboard in frustration.
Ooh, interesting idea. Nice twist on the first episode.
Well written as well. I'll start reading more when I have time!
(Funnily enough, a small event in MY story is kind of similar! XD)
1738975 really, which part?
Either you forgot that Twi calls herself Glimmering Wisp now, or Zecora knows more than she lets on. And considering Twi's lack of response, I think it's the former option.
3041255 Right fixed.
So far, I'm a bit bored. There's no much going on, I skipped most of this and the last chapter without missing much at all. It'll probably get better later on, but the pacing needs some work. If you ever get free time and have writer's block, you can always spend your time revising and editing these couple of chapters.
This story seems very interesting, although I'm not really much for the foreign creatures and such. Just not my thing.
Alright, so these lizard folk are Irish, then. Odd choice with Ireland's nigh proverbial dearth of reptiles.