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Yay more of this story has come haza
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2, and happy to see this is still going, I really like this one so far
2, it's easier to write and you could have more cohesive dialogue, also good chapter
So when will Second Chance: Polar coming?
I think 2.
1: It will take longer to write yes, but it will give you time to flush out the details and conversations where they don't feel forced or rushed.
2: It give your mind a chance to think on it further and plan ahead for future chapters.
3: it is funny to watch people scream about cliffhangers.
4: There is no number four. I blame pinkie pie. Which is not a bad thing. After all, what fun is there in making sense.
Ps. Pinkie Pie, maybe for once you should plan something instead of relying on the author to do everything. You broke out of your story to tell at us off for a false prediction with spicy food and the hospital. If you can do that then maybe you could narrate a date chapter. Maybe be the narrator of one of the date nights or interupt the author while he is telling the story to give a little side information or something.
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When is he next chapter coming out ?