Six wakes up in a mysterious forest with Emile and there......alive he must search for he comrades that fought with him on reach but on this new world can Six make new friends and find his team?
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God damn do you know how to spell?
Your spelling and overall sentance pattern isnt that great. The story itself is a fantastic idead, and the details were flawless, sich as the firebase name and the Spartan III's. Id be happy to edit, because Id love to see this go on. However, my schedule allows me to be act on a week-on week -off basis. Anyhow, keep writing. With tour permission Id like to edit these and get them to you next week. PM me and let me know!
Not quite as detailed as the last chapter, but still good. Forgot to mention: this is the last night of my week on, so itll be a week or so before I can get back to you.
It's not everyday you find something that perfectly grasps the kind of things that creates satire.
I dont know what to say, I mean plot is okay but the things you have with Emile and six is just I dont know
Marine Corp. Raider basically I decided that Emile and Six could have been friends on Reach maybe I don't know. Mobiius I do know how to spell I just need an editor and I think a may get one so....yeah
good story.
Give me the fucking pen so I can edit this shit. YOU GOTTA GIVE US SOMETHING TO WORK WITH MAN.
shit's about to hit the proverbial fan...
AGAIN
Alright. A few things. 1: You need to fix your grammar and slow down on the typing. You're skipping words. 2: Six didn't talk very much, and he sure as hell didn't swear. So keep that down.
That's all
I like it, I really do, but pal, you NEED an editor, badly.
Bookwormbrony I agree 100% with you but I'm waiting for a response from sombody just glad people like it and the only complaint I get is grammar and stuff about the need of a editor and this is my first story
Oh God... a dead Spartan with a loaded rifle having a nightmare on an unknown planet... someones gonna die!
Who said it was unloaded?
He fought well him and the other Spartans. I never thought the end of reach like that until now.
I can help with the editing. I'm not the best my self, but I can notice mistakes when I see them.
Yeah dude. you need an editor. i CAN help (not exeptionally good with gramar) but i can fix and spot mistakes most of the time and you need all of the help you can get.
i now have an editor but the person does not get on much almost like me so yeah.
Not being rude or anything but you need to work on you grammar a little bit
Sorry but for Irony's sake:
the "Main 6" and "6"
Thank you for the 5 seconds of your life you wasted reading this
D-Did Six just...APOLOGIZE!?!?!? SPARTANS DON'T APOLOGIZE!!!
Yes they do get over yourself and he wasn't doing cause he wanted to lunarprince 369
And to ettisara I didn't think about that so thanks and also it is more like four seconds the only time I wasted five was when I listen to my friends bitch about something
I would love to see Six kick shinning ass in the next chapter
Hmmmmm mind if I steal that idea thebatman
So he somehow bass a birds eyeview of one of the most deadliest ships in the UNSC and it is heading towards equestria while it is being chases by a massive fleet of covenant... well nice to know you equestria!
I never said being chased just that there was a covenant fleet i decided it is like the infinity so there are two ships that massive in size
Work on your grammar Jesus Christ this is unbearable to read.
Troll
FUCK YES YOU DID IT
Interesting i like it
MASSIVE GAPING PLOT HOLES
If you have evere played the halo games you would know there are plot holes
So, Johnson is alive, i'm okey with that.
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metion 1 or 2 pls, i seem to ignore them :S
Emlie S-666 ???
that is not his service tag
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TO BAD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
this is so awesome!
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You have no idea
2215815 Keen!
this story is good why so much hate though, 26 dislikes?
2268442grammar most likely, people just haten how I set up the story all I know is if I've got people enjoying the story I'm gonna keep writing thanks for the favorite
a couple of spelling and grammatical errors, make sure to re-read it
why did you say prothean
2391776 been awhile sense i played Halo 4 sorry i got it wrong been busy.
there's quite a few mistakes in this, but it's readable, just makes it a bit harder
a few grammar and spelling mistakes, you could definitely use a lot more commas in your story