Life it has many curve balls thats what Shades father Six told him the day he left for the UNSC training camps. Shade took those words to heart on every mission and through everyday life its helped him in many cases but one day on a 'milk run' mission Shade is thrown the biggest curve ball in his life.....
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Bro shiz iz gettin crazy
I like it, you just need to re-read and edit this. Lots of grammar mistakes
I like it, you just need to re-read and edit this. Lots of grammar mistakes
Yay good job!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
4451802 thanks
Hmm... Chapter ended... Make another chapter, I want to keep reading this story. (In other words I like this... just create more)
4455217 Glad you like it trying to think of something to do next
Love it. But you need to start a new paragraph when a new character is speaking, it gets really confusing when you don't
Like the story but make them longer pleas
4618005 I know and I'm sorry but I think of words in my brain and then when I go to write its like yeah that's all I got
O………ok
Well................that escalated quickly
4619472 Yep
yo mean "si vis pacem para bellum"? if you want peace prepare for war
There's plenty of grammar errors where you write I without the capital
Still a good story :)
4620161 Crap thought I got it right will go back and fix.....................aweful part about all this is I have a pic on my phone that says it the right way guess I wrote it down to quickly
great story bro i like here this is going
4909525 thank you mr.inator
wow, Blueblood realy got a bit light off, anyways good chapter
4910949 Just wait my friend just wait
YES indeed
I look forward to this!
take all of my yes
5/5
EXPLOSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5044835 Good Idea but not yet
But explosions?!?
5047917 They'll happen and they'll be Micheal bay big !
Ok. No seriously good job so far. The first halo story you made was great. Though short. But you know I enjoy a great story. Like all day every day. Oh and don't get
'd before........... oh no. Noooooooooo.... 
5047957 Thanks I have trouble when I'm getting them started but when I do I try my best to get the ball rolling at the moment i'm concentrating on this and Fallen.
(Garbled transmission)*
5048047 Don't worry explosions will happen two chapters for this story and the next chapter in Fallen already have the set up for that
Well then. My anaconda don't...... my anaconda don't. My anaconda don't want none less you got explosions!
I like it but pleas wright faster next time pleas
Thus but a flesh wond
5309487 let the man work, some people just need some time on these.
5316417 thank you my friend but please wait I have no access to an internet connection with my laptop and won't be able to continue till next week I've already started on the next chapter but it takes time and I'm very sporadict when it comes to writing
5316484 i understand, and i can wait. Have a nice day, and hope your doing good.
5316496 I'm doing good thanks for asking and understand have a good thanksgiving.
5316511 you to
5316511 hah thanks giving was like nine weeks ago man. I'm so lonely. Please help.
Still some grammar and spelling mistakes here and there. Would be best if you re-read it and correct it before someone other than myself picks up on them and gets shitty.
Are you going to be continuing this?
5316511 we have hope, human. please do not kill this fic.
Update plz. If you need an editor I'll do it.
Is this story dead?
wheel i know it was heading this Darin and i can only can't what to see where it heads next
the thing about nuclear devices that no one understands is that a conventional explosive will not detonate one. they can be destroyed via blowing them to pieces.
Wat da hell.