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hmm... well, you definitely need to work on that grammar, for that I suggest reading alot.
I'm somewhat good at writing something without a grammar-nazi breathing down my neck about it, and that's only because I read so often.... the pacing feels a biit forced, but just a tad, so not really a problem there... consructive criticism aside, I simply love the plot you've got here, even though I've only read the first chapter so far.
One favourite - because I can only fav a story once
. It is my gift to you, author!
2576593 Thanks and I'll work on the grammar maybe
What is this a crossover of?
2708984 Movie called Reign of Fire pretty good film
so....... Spike, compound fracture. just gonna leave him in a pile of flaming ash
Huh a killing machine and a virgin princess well keep it up kind sir or madam I like where this is going.
3331264 I will but I don't know what to do next sex or wake up the next morning
3331842 well if there is sex then good bye virgin princess! Lol Go kickass dragon!
3332838 yeah the dragon is pretty kick ass
I will read this later...but I'm sorry about this but I think it's necessary because this reminded me of it
EDIT: I am so sorry, I thought it said 'ring of fire' not 'Reign of Fire' I am so sorry *bows in apology*
3461487that's ok I do like that song though Johnny Cash is good
3461790alright then
So wait... (Hasn't read yet) the dragon that Christian Bale killed with the magnesium tipped crossbow bolt... Is now in Equestria?
3461923 yep please don't hate me
3461959 oh i wont. That isn't my style.
If I'm interested, I comment. If not, I go look at something else. You, sir, have interested me and I will definitely give this story a look.
3462031 Awesome glad I interested you
I actually enjoyed this. Looking forward to more.
3462124 thanks trying to figure out what to do next chapter and I do tak some suggestions
mooooooooooore!
3471635need time school has been draining me
Interesting. I look forward to the next chapter.
Pretty cool, keep going please!
Awesomeness!
Awesome, Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever that may be
Awesome.
Cool ending
Did you put a xenomorph (one of the aliens from the movie "Alien") in there?
3911257 Hey Vladimir.
4764064 yes you did.
4764064 huh?
2709569 It was my favorite "live action" movie with dragons in it.
Is there going to be a sequel.
5092318 Good question
This was amazing. Thank you for making this fic
Imma call 'im Levi for short. Reminds me of AoT/SnK
I stared at the title singing the Attack on Titan OP 1 Song: Guren no Yumiya