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OMG "chit chat you little kit kat" "sun butt" this was hilarious!!!! I laughed so hard and loooove the cover picture!!! :rainbowlaugh: :pinkiehappy:

5449984 Thanks glad you liked it and found it on face book thought it looked cool so it gave me an idea for this story

Nice start, looking like a great story!:twilightsmile:

5450023 Thanks hope you enjoy the coming chapters

Comment posted by YbJ deleted Jan 1st, 2015

The moment i saw the cover art i said to myself, i can't wait to read this!

Very good start to the story. I saw the pic and thought this looks interesting. And it is very interesting. Keep up the good work.

RD and AJ : not cool
THIS FIC : SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO COOL :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by YbJ deleted Jan 3rd, 2015
Comment posted by GMP deleted Jan 3rd, 2015

he didn't sob or wail he just silently cried closing his eyes he felt the tears slide down his cheeks.

.....you better make it good or else.

I was redirected here by the Blocked and Deleted club.

Well then. That escalated quickly.:rainbowhuh:

"Fluttershy correct (she nods) okay consider it a small repayment for letting me stay at your house...........adding this and any help you may need at your house could be my rent to you till I can get settled and find a job."

first off, i cannot understand this statement but i will do my best to fix it.

"Fluttershy, Correct?" She nods. "Okay then. Consider it a repayment for letting me stay at your home... In addition to this, any help you may need could be my rent to you until I can find a job and get settled."

First, if he was a lab experiment, why/how does he know what a job is, much less rent?

ugh. reading this just begs for attention. Please either get an editor or let me help. the story is good but the grammar is horrid.

Dear author, I am almost done with my edited version. I did not change the story, simply edit out unnecessary information(which i did not find that often) and made the paragraphs make sense. i will privately message you the version when it is done.

I hope you plan on continuing this

He began to cry.

Didn't see that coming. Looks like that brought back some bad memories.



Moar :yay:

Okay get the whole alternate universe and dna dragon thing, but honestly it dosent feel like it deserves to be a dragon fic. To me, it just feels like one of those dumb anime fics where supposedly they are half something but just really have just ears and tails, something of a cheap costume and little to no creativity. I know its not your art but concept is still the same and lacks true character.

I like the pic, but why is it of Natsu?

5480312 Found it on facebook some guy posted It like it tried my best at cropping the pic

5481178 soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo-

(Looking up at him, she easily dwarfed Victor by a good two feet and from what she could tell, he stood around 7'' 4 in height )

If he's taller, wouldn't he dwarf her?

Nice cant wait wait for the next :pinkiehappy:

More please.

5485197 I SHALL FIX THAT.............SOON.....................in three months..............maybe later. But seriously I didn't mean to put the s Victor is 7' 4"

5485900 Thanks I try just hope I can keep the likes coming in

5485907 I'm sure you can and will. Just keep doing what your doing and have fun.

BUT I will give you this warning IF you even put a toe out of line WE will seal you like Discord do you understand ?"

This guy got overwhelmed with a rope and a pegasus....and all she can think about is to threaten him with their most powerful weapon? :facehoof:

Not the best behaviour towards someone that has yet to show the slightest sign of being hostile /a threat.

I hope the Princesses are different.

well so far so good but the clothes are in fact a fairy tail rip off except the shirt other than that boom best thing ever.

5485907
Nevermind. I read description and retract question. Man, I'm an idiot sometimes.

5564173 We all have those moments *puffs bubble pipe*

Love it so far

Do you have a link for the cover pic

5662360 Not really just found it on facebook from one of the admins

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