(Not a Fairy Tail crossover picture gave me an idea) Victor a creation of science a man with little knowledge of the outside world thinking of it only as a distant dream is given a chance to be part of a new world and a chance at a life
Why are there spaces between the last word and ending punctuation in quotes? That shouldn't be there. It should read "word!" Or "word?" Not "word ?" Or "word !" The spacing just makes it look weird and is kind of distracting from the work.
Despite the poor English, I find this narrative enjoyable. Keep up the interesting work, and I wish you better luck in editing future content. (EDIT: OMC!!! I CAN COMMENT ON THINGS AGAIN!!!)
OMG "chit chat you little kit kat" "sun butt" this was hilarious!!!! I laughed so hard and loooove the cover picture!!!
5449984 Thanks glad you liked it and found it on face book thought it looked cool so it gave me an idea for this story
Nice start, looking like a great story!
5450023 Thanks hope you enjoy the coming chapters
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The moment i saw the cover art i said to myself, i can't wait to read this!
Very good start to the story. I saw the pic and thought this looks interesting. And it is very interesting. Keep up the good work.
Great story! Great thing to read. Also, can you send me the cover picture in the chat box or something. Great picture and better idea!
I'm liking this already
Do you mean Earth?
Why are you deleting my comments?
Why are there spaces between the last word and ending punctuation in quotes? That shouldn't be there. It should read "word!" Or "word?" Not "word ?" Or "word !" The spacing just makes it look weird and is kind of distracting from the work.
Despite the poor English, I find this narrative enjoyable. Keep up the interesting work, and I wish you better luck in editing future content.
(EDIT: OMC!!! I CAN COMMENT ON THINGS AGAIN!!!)