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Ummmmm, ok. Let's see where this goes!
Dang, son!
Not sure where it's headed from here, but I like it!
The only thing I can say is...
Dammit, Kudz.
You had my curiosity, but now you have my attention.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
I am afraid to say he's boned.......because it might come true.
I'm so-so on this interpretation of Twilight Sparkle. While I might be able to understand the banishment, in reality this is a direct failing of her as the Princess of Friendship/Magic, both interpretations of that. Obviously, a lack of learning control is a major theme, and Twilight herself had surges when she was younger again because of lack of control. She should know that merely telling him to use no magic whatsoever is not a solution at all.
Is there a reason she is tagged in this story? I assume she'll be showing up more later to justify it, since otherwise it's basically a cameo.
I'm going to assume this is basically a wandering clop plot after that buzzkill of an opening. His magic is very weird after all, and will always do the most amusing thing, even if it's at his expense, since no one else is around. Especially so now.
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Twilight Sparkle will in fact be a regular semi-regular character. But I cannot say more because that would be spoiling stuff.
No. This is not a clop fic.
http://www.fimfiction.net/blog/488697/so-the-weed-has-sprouted
Read that to understand what is going on.
Eventually, there will be others around. This will be the story of Tarnish trying to find his place in the world, growing up, learning to live with his own magic pranking him and others, and then making peace with himself.
And Twilight Sparkle will actually play a significant role in this story... and I really want to tell you how, but that would be spoiling it.
Welp. That's what he gets for invoking Murphy's Law, I suppose.
I am now traumatised
Part of me keeps wanting to think Discord had a lovechild in the past that he never knew about.
Not possible, but certainly plausible in my mind.
I look forward to what else can go wrong.
That is one hell of a way to start your life and a banished pony... Getting molested by a manticore
Well this is an interesting way to start off my morning but in any case I look forward to seeing where this goes.
... OK then XD You spelled thicket wrong m8, just thought I'd point that out. Uh, let's see... From my understanding of your blog, the audience is supposed to give suggestions as to where the story goes, and atm I don't see any of that in the comments :/ Just, "I can't wait to see where this goes". So, I guess I'll take a shot at it.
He probably wants to get cleaned. So, he can either stumble across the mirror pool, or go to the river. He could maybe... Have an accident at the river that causes him to be swept further away from Ponyville.
Is this kind of what you were looking for?
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In time, as the story develops a bit more.
Tarnished Teapot, did you recover the saddlebag that was tossed aside?
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You mean the one in the manticore lair?
NO WAY... I got out of there before she changed her mind.
Tarnished, where are you exactly?
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I don't know. On the road.
Tarnished, are there any edible plants nearby that you know of?
Tarnished, is the effect of your magic permanent unless dispelled, or does it fade over time?
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(Author) That's not the sort of question I can answer.
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It fades over time.
6012877 Because it's irrelevant to the story?
Or because it's VERY relevant and thus a spoiler?
Tarnished, since your magic fades does that mean the manticore will eventually want you as a meal rather than as a friend?
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Because it becomes too meta. The story will be told when I release a chapter.
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Yes, which is why I must be going.
Suggestion for Tarnished:
Keep the musk on until you've safely exited the forest since it seems effective at repelling predators.
After you're safe, find an isolated body of water to wash off. If you try to approach anyone beforehand you'll just scare them off.
I wonder though, that manticore was awfully quick to find him after he was banished.
I find it beyond coincidence that she just HAPPENED to be there, attacking so soon after Tarnished was alone.
Also, Twilight seemed a bit out of character, but not in writing. More specifically, like she was following a suggestion from someone else, i.e. get Tarnished banished to fit in someone else's plan.
Because Tarnished has a point, the Mane 6 have inflicted a lot of damage and they weren't banished.
For the tl;Dr crowd, I think there is more going on than we can see.
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Tarnish's magic makes ponies behave funny... go figure.
And Twilight was behaving funny...
6013033 Ah, I didn't realize his magic had a passive effect.
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Think of it more as a residual effect leftover from when he surged.
Okay, interesting enough to follow. Not sure if I like it yet.
Mostly because I had one of those "the typo...the typo..." sort of horrors in my head the whole time.
"Mayhem" in a legal context is a LOT worse than in a general context. The google dictionary (first one that popped up and since it's accurate enough...) says "the crime of maliciously injuring or maiming someone, originally so as to render the victim defenseless." The shorthand definition I picked up in criminal law class was "the guy chops off your arm." All I know is if anyone actually HAD 191 counts of mayhem...forget banishment, that's an execution worthy, (or "truck him off to Arkham Assylum" worthy) amount of criminal activity. Jason Voorhees would be proud.
So, yeah, I'd change that.
Ha! i just realized Tarnished Teapots intitals looke like the crying meme face T^T
I think there is an 'and' too much.
You know, the Manticore's scent being all over Tarnished is somewhat a blessing really. Most other predators lower on the food chain than her will stay the hell away from him until he gets cleaned up. Sorta like how that one kid in that Jurassic Park Movie that shall not be given a number used T-Rex Piss to keep other lesser Dino's away.
Most fitting
Any story that starts with the protagonist being raped by a womanticore has my attention, if not necessarily in a good way. This'll be one hell of a ride, I can tell.
6470184 But it brings the Big One!
*blinks several times*
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*blinks again*
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*blinks slowly*
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Alright then... Hahahaaha xD
This sure was... an interesting start XD I felt bad for him for being kicked out... then he got... funtimed by a womanticore... lordy lordy.
Well look at it this way TT... who else can say they lost their virginity to a manticore of all things?
Poor sane peoples
Well... That's a start. That's got to suck loosing virginity to a Manticore.
...huh.
Well considering Tarnished smells like Manticore and sex, basically everything is going to stay VERY far away from him XD. Going near him, as far as they know, means going near a female Manticore's property. He's the safest he could possibly be really
Also like first day out and he was raped by a hulking monster. Damn XD did Tarnished Teapot shit in your cereal or something?
So instead of helping him both twilight and celestia banished him from both ponyvile and canterlot that a dick move and they should be ashamed of themselves
I can't believe I missed this the first time I read it. Tarnished's magic seduced the Manticore. She would normally kill and eat Ponies, not mate with them. It saved his life -- though not the way he would have preferred to be saved!
Hmm, Venenum Iocus? seems good, better read the first story first though.
*reads first chapter*
...
Who the heck needs hope?
Well I can see that for TT is going to be the universes punching bag. Poor TT my heart bleeds for you man. Yes I know that I'm really late to joining this band wagon but I'm invested into Gosling's story and I'm tired of missing out on all the hidden context in his story. Well looks like I have a lot to catch up on so later
-BFBL