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Maud for New Element of Laughter 2016
Just pointing this out, since a friend directed me to this passage/chapter... You're saying the same dang thing twice. It lessens the impact of the reader making the connection, as well as the fact that you're TELLING us instead of SHOWING us that they're related due to the similar habit. Just a small nit-pick, though. Not nesc. something you have to change or edit, just figured I'd point that out.
The Elemaud of laughter strikes again!
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
17:29_8/17/2015
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You're right. I should fix that.
Some destroy others with swords, some with words. Looks like Maud took a few levels of Bard.
Come on, maud... That's what makes it so funny!
I admit it, I laughed. Mind you, I laughed when Maud said "livestock zoning guidelines and practices," so take that as you will.
Lol
Hehehehe, this whole chapter was funny.
Nice job.
Ha. (Sad that has run out of things to say)
6329671 me too.
Ah the simple one liners gets em every time.
'2 ponies walked into a bar, you'd think one of them would have seen it?'
I would have gone with the more direct "penis," which is always a sure-fire laugh, tbh. Still pretty funny, though.
I have tears running down my face
It wasn't really funny. Pinkie wouldn't think it was good comedy, she probably heard better from Boneless which would probably have been something Cheese had come up with. I wonder how the Pie family will react to having 2 party ponies in the house.
Stahp it
I can tell a little hater ran through the comments and disliked a bunch of them. It's nearly as funny as "genitalia"
"Not a rooster". You, sir, are a god damned genius. I also love the idea of Maud just showing up with curls and everyone around knowing she just got laid.
I am literally dying with laughter. Now if I can only stop giggling and make it to the next chapter...