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I accept your lack of apologies for the river bed pun, and make none of my own for laughing at it
Maud, since it was touched upon in this chapter, what is your favorite choice for field rations? I assume canned fruit, but of what variety?
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Maud: Canned fruit is too sweet. I only ate it because I knew I needed to be hydrated. It was a practical choice. Personally, I like oatmeal, but it has been too hot to eat oatmeal.
Ms Pie, what is your favourite kind of gem?
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Marble: I dunno... I think I like topazes.
'damp' and 'dampness', intentional?
River bed! Ha
Just ask a Kelpie, when you work the pony making bone in a body of water you NEVER have to sleep on the wet spot!
Tarnish: What kind of stuffing do you like best in your ravioli? My favorite is spinach and cheese.
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Tarnish: Does anybody know what comes inside of canned ravioli? I have no idea what textured vegetable protein is or hydrolised soy paste.
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Tarnish: That's fair enough! I guess it'd be better to ask what 'flavor' you like best?
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Tarnish: What flavour is Chef Coltardee?
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Tarnish: Fair enough again! Let me change this around a bit, then. What's your favorite food that could work as trail rations?
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Tarnish: Hmm, trail mix. With lots of dehydrated dried fruit.
Whew, what a read... Family went on a beach trip and reading this under a coconut tree, on the sand is fucking amazing.
Now I'm back with Internet. First thing, I feel the mirror lacked the foreshadowing you usually have in your stories. I would complain that Twi was a little out of character, but I later learned she was under the influence of Tarnish's magic. I'm a little sad the clop wasn't around, but I understand the reasons, and none the less it's still a great story. You made an impossibly wonderful character out of emotionless Maud. And I gotta say, "the main protagonist gets raped by a she-maticore" is a damn good hook. I didn't even think of leaving the story after that! Though the story kinda started downhill more or less the rest of it made me have that warm feeling, you made the bad things like drugs and prostitutes sound like a good thing and used that to twist the story around, I like it though. At first I was a bit reluctant about Pinny, but you somehow smoothed her out as a character through the story. Same with the pie family, and still everything turned out well oiled.
It's pretty coincidental that I just turned 16 a few days before I decided to give The Weed a read (hey, that rhymes!), though equines do age differently, but I still feel funny about it.
I think I can relate to Maud, I do have difficulty showing emotion sometimes. And my parents tend to get mad about that, calling it disrespectful. I have to pull my facial muscles for them sometimes.
And now! Behold the typos I have found in my journey!
The typos I found were mostly by the start, and they may already be fixed now, since I just downloaded the story two days ago.
Oh, and you can expect some art soon, The Weed definitely needs some more art.
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What is wrong with Longhaul?
(Since QA is constantly on...)
Hey Maud, before you confirmed this relationship...
Have you ever sneakily sniffed around Tarnish's hat just to smell his scent?
If I was interested in another person with a hat, I'd secretly inhale said hat.
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I think I accidentally corrected it...
In the chapter:
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Maud: No. But I did secretly keep a rock that he sat on.
(chap 76) Heh, I used to find rocks looking just like that near where lived during high school. Vermont's got some interesting rock formations and fossils all about.
Frigging awesome chapter, ahhhahahha, I want a hug... I always need a hug handy... or is it huggy?
Nice job!
He grabbed Maud around her middle and pulled her closer. He felt himself being pushed back and he offered no resistance, falling over onto his back into the cool, clean water.
I am having trouble understanding the imagery of the part where he grabs Maud around her middle to pull her in. Are they standing up on their hind legs, allowing him to grab her and pull her in close like a human would? Or are they side by side were he can reach around her middle. Or perhaps sitting with their rumps down and facing each other. that would allow for him to grab her around her middle and for her to push him back.
I know it's a little thing, but it's throwing me for a loop trying to picture it.
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Keep reading the paragraph. They were sitting.
[Sitting in the shallow water beneath the stars, Tarnish puffed out his barrel, feeling proud about his find.]
Found it. Can't believe I missed it. Thanks
I'm loving everything about this. And you found my secret fetish. I gem hunt in the Appalachians as many times as I can. I have a box dedicated to gemstones from a geode I dug up from my grandmother's house to quarts bricks the size of my head to fossilized wood chunks. I have about sixty-two percent of these stones and it astonishes me how much you study for your stories. You go all out with your work and it shows in your quality.
P.s. Augite can be a real bitch to find.