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That was a lovely chapter on so many levels. The way it comes together is just beautiful and leaves some very nice warm fuzzies behind.
This whole story so far has been fascinating to watch play out, but this chapter stands out as better than the usual high bar.
Kudos Kudzu.
'Watching the stars' is a nice periphrase.
Such a sweet chapter.
Whoa, whoa, stop. You can't just say something like that and leave it there, Pinkie.
I need a name here.
Honestly, the story probably could've ended here and it would've felt perfectly complete for it.
Awesome chapter dude, awesome chapter! And awesome party 8D
6345960 Bob... her special somepony is named Bob...
Kudz! Stop abusing that poor word.
6295115 soon they will not just be watching them, but flying high among them..
6832542 Which one? Snoot? Teapot? Bored expression?
Curse thee, Kudzu!
I may never hear the phrase "watching the stars" again without it being a euphemism in my ears!
Other than that, Loving all this so far
Okay, I had serious doubts after/during the first arc.
I'm now fully on board.
This is lovely, with just the right amount of sincere sap sufficiently built up and characterized to not be cloying, and interspersed with genuine trials, troubles, and sadness. All eventually making the sweetness all the more powerful when it arrives.
You've also alleviated my indignation towards Twilight pretty much completely. Tarnished's magic can be insidious, subtle, and corruptive, though through no fault of his own.