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I like where this is going.
To Tarnished Teapot:
Hello Tarnish, nice to meet you. A small question - were you born in Ponyville? What about your parents?
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I was born in Ponyville. My mother's name is Pinny Lane and she's a professional bowler. I don't know who my father is, but I suspect that he might be part of the bowler crowd.
She was in Canterlot for a tournament when I was banished. I never got to say goodbye.
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Ouch, that's harsh. How was your relationship with her?
You should write her a letter as soon as possible. She'll be worried sick, even in case you weren't that close. I'm sure she will be happy about a piece of paper she can hold onto.
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We didn't talk much. She never told me who my father was... and she was always gone. These things put a strain on our relationship. I suppose she had to pay the rent somehow. We didn't get along, but saying goodbye might have been nice.
Hmm.... I can't really think of anything to suggest etc.
Keep a look out for water I guess XD
Good luck m8
Tarnish, how did you get your cutie curse? In a moment of a surge or else?
onward to new adventures! hopefully there won't be diamond dogs on the road...
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I sneezed.
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For Twilight, having her horn go limp, get covered in blue spots, and rendering her magically inert is maiming.
For Spittie Pie, being only able to spit and beatbox as a form of communication is maiming.
"Pegasi not flying, unicorn magic failing, and earth ponies losing their strength," is what Twilight said.
Is a pegasus who can't fly maimed?
So far he is quite a nice character. A walking sod's law/murphy's law/walking apocalypse. Makes me wonder what happens if he touch a poison joke. Does he become normal or turn into something worse?
For some reason i feel like he could be useful for the law enforcement, since he is able to screw abilities just with his presence,thus confusing the criminals.
And a question for him: -Why did you started your journey to the everfree and not to go on a safer path? You are only banned from Ponyville and Canterlot, you could go just about any direction instead of the everfree forest, and get a much more enjoyable trip
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Tarnish: I never went into the Everfree... what are you talking about? I followed the southern road that lies along the border.
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My bad, i thought manticore's natural habitat was in that forest, so i assumed you went there
I could see our wayward adventurer getting hired by a Casino in Las Pegasus.
He's basically a bad luck magnet, with a bit of refinement, he might be able to tune that into a talent for moving odds where he wants them to go.
Provided this is a story where Bucky hasn't blown it up yet of course.
6014384 If he touches poison joke everything stays normal. The poison joke is a part of his talent and nothing can stop that.
Tarnished, can you find a place to wash?
Even if Dodge City is a rough-and-tumble place, you'd be better off not smelling all smelly.
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(Author) Give him time...
Well, this is certainly intriguing. Definitely looking forward to seeing where this goes.
Tarnished, did anypony (or Discord) ever try to help you control your magic?
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Tarnished: Discord told me I was special and encouraged me to use my magic as much as possible. After I accidentally zapped him and turned him into a model citizen, he stopped speaking to me and avoided me at all costs.
6017122 I feel bad for the poor bastard.. cant use magic because shit goes bad and when you hold it in and it finally explodes you get bitched at.. lol Couldnt twilight just used some sort of geas? or some sort of magic inhibitor?
Man oh man, this poor dude xD hahaha, ohh... I shouldn't laugh... but its too damn funny.
Awesome job man, awesome job.
Friggin sneezes.
Slake? Do you mean sate?
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no hon, slake is for thirst and sate is for hunger
the English language is a strange beast
("quench" is also for thirst, but not hunger. ~*~ the more you know~*~)
Alrighty then. (Also it now occurs to me I may well have read some of this ages ago, and simply put it back in my "Read later" shelf after the events of the first chapter.) I know I'm extremely late to the party, and maybe a bit necroposty, but;
Holy shit. TF. Even knowing he eventually gets past all this regardless, how is his life so shit?
Raped by a manticore, starving, injured, and completely without possessions or means to support himself. All within a day of being thrown to the wolves.
What the flying flip was Twilight thinking would happen, banishing him with no resources to call on, economic or logistical assistance, or help, only his saddlebags? No putting him in touch with social welfare or charitable organizations? Giving him a bloody wilderness survival guide?! She was sending him out to die or be homeless, begging for change to feed himself. There's "needs of the many" and then there's sending a young man out into the wilderness to die. All she gave him was empty platitudes, worthless pity, and a edict against returning to Ponyville or visiting the capital, with it being strongly implied that he was not to contact any ponies at all, as he would inevitably be thrown out by them even quicker than the Princess of Friendship did.
Venting, despite this being far too late to matter, since I'm pretty appalled at Twilight's actions and lack thereof.
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There are actually very good reasons for this.
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Aye, your stories always seem to. Still doesn't make sense to me at the moment unless she wanted him dead, and Tarnished should likely be homicidally resentful of her for the rest of his life, not friends with her later on. It just really sounds wrong when Longhaul says he should be grateful for the opportunity, and he seems to actually becoming to believe that,
And a few more chapters in, he's on drugs and has had his leg broken in the middle of town, and now being taken off to be lynched... Bloody hell. The Weedverse's mantra is "positive growth" right? I've gotta try harder to keep that in mind.
(As I'm sure you've noticed from my comments, one of my flaws is a tendency to get a bit absorbed in "righteous indignation" at injustices. I jump to that mindset pretty quickly and easily. It's really just noise though, so long as things are explained or resolved eventually I'm happy. Though sometimes I quit before that happens in the particularly bad cases where a tragic ending seems inevitable. Which this is not, as I know the mantra and at least some of the future for Tarnished. Just gotta choke down the indignation and wrath and power through till the reasoning arrives.)
(I've been taking this slow to try to avoid that tendency and avoid necroposting on a long finished story. May have to put myself on a ban on reading multiple chapters in one sitting.)
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5 years too late but many laws have more to do about intent versus result. Homicide versus manslaughter is a great example. Mayhem is deliberate, while disturbing the peace doesn't necessarily require intent. Kandagger's definition uses a very specific word that delineates this, the word which is "malicious". Malicious describes intent, I doubt Tarnish was malicious in his actions. This means it's more akin to negligence; as he knew his talent was harmful but did nothing to remove himself from harming others.