A magical mishap sends Spike into the corrupted world of Mareth, trapping him there for one full year, separated from his friends in a body that isn't entirely his own. Will he last the year with his sanity intact?
5932160 The logic behind that was that the gems contained the magic spirits of the beings they came from, ifrits. What the 'player' (if this was an in game item) was meant to do with them is stare into them or something, absorbing that spirit and turning the gems into useless hunks of glass basically. Spike, being a specific breed of dragon, eats them to gain the same effect. Basically, he was becoming an ifrit.
Also, thank you for catching those mistakes, can't believe I let those slip by.
I'd still like to see Spike's reaction to either starting lactating, becoming a squirter, having the 'your pussy is now slick and ready to fuck, and always will be' that you get after squirter w/ succubi milk, or having a massive growth to his testicles (Gro+) and/or cum production (Marae's gift - profactory; fera's boon - seeder)
Spike is growing stronger and it is awesome. Still I hope he meets the champion and tries to fight him/her, only to met curb stomped. And then when he's at the Final Stance, he/she will still beat him.
In short I can't wait for the champ to show up, and please don't make him weak just so Spike can look badass. He did take down a 'perfected' breed of Salamander and Harpies, which in all means should have crushed anyone under their heel. So Nice story.
Moar
I will never be able to emphasize enough how much I love this fic. It is by far my favorite clopfic to date.
Though just a nitpick: during the sex scene with the perfect golem you alternate between male and female pronouns for Spike.
5931697 Thanks for the catch, I think I fixed them all.
>"You... shall be... assimilated!"
-The Borg, it's everywhere !
>She literally burst, shattering into millions of tiny shards.
-A bursting crystal ''condom''... Huh. Nice touch.
>doing nothing bet giving
-but
5932160 The logic behind that was that the gems contained the magic spirits of the beings they came from, ifrits. What the 'player' (if this was an in game item) was meant to do with them is stare into them or something, absorbing that spirit and turning the gems into useless hunks of glass basically. Spike, being a specific breed of dragon, eats them to gain the same effect. Basically, he was becoming an ifrit.
Also, thank you for catching those mistakes, can't believe I let those slip by.
I'd still like to see Spike's reaction to either starting lactating, becoming a squirter, having the 'your pussy is now slick and ready to fuck, and always will be' that you get after squirter w/ succubi milk, or having a massive growth to his testicles (Gro+) and/or cum production (Marae's gift - profactory; fera's boon - seeder)
Spike is growing stronger and it is awesome.
Still I hope he meets the champion and tries to fight him/her, only to met curb stomped.
And then when he's at the Final Stance, he/she will still beat him.
In short I can't wait for the champ to show up, and please don't make him weak just so Spike can look badass. He did take down a 'perfected' breed of Salamander and Harpies, which in all means should have crushed anyone under their heel.
So Nice story.
5937883
Hm... interesting... I hadn't thought about them fighting...
Welp. This is a thing that will probably happen now.
Really cool encounters, and quite well written. You should team up with Fenoxo and the others, your creations would look great in the game!
How was things in this story not added in the game