A magical mishap sends Spike into the corrupted world of Mareth, trapping him there for one full year, separated from his friends in a body that isn't entirely his own. Will he last the year with his sanity intact?
5863152 Or you could just have it be SFW by having Spike wear clothes or have a censor bar covering anything. Just because the story is Mature doesn't mean it can't be SFW.
I like the idea of expanding the land by adding a beach; sure, the game centers on one continent, so of course the mist must conceal everything beyond the shores. And go figure anything that nears the shallows picked up some of the corruption. The introduction of the Mimic Crab certainly is a cool addition, and I'm interest to see what sea life your going to come up with. And as for the plant, I'm more curious as to what Spike will end up growing than the NPC, she was one of the ones that weirded me out. Spike's racial power is a cool touch, too. I look forward to more, good sir, as I'm enjoying the surprises thus far.
Heh... I was checking things on another website, and found an interesting picture kinda ''related'' to what's in this story : https:// www. furaffinity.net/view/14906294/
5966582 Yes, quite nice. However, please keep in mind that NSFW image links are not allowed. And that image is quite NSFW. I don't want anyone getting in trouble here.
5966801 I must say, I never 'quite' understood the logic behind allowing, on 'X or Y website', the MOST GRAPHIC depiction of sex and brutality (some things even *HIGHLY* illegal, in some countries)... in words... But an image is- OOOOOOOOH- that's too much (with frowning face). Yeah, ''1 picture = 1000 words'' and whatnot, but that's still generally dumb, when someone think about it for more than a second.
Sigh. But, yeah, whatever... I guess you're right.
5974857 Personally I have no problem with it either. And I seriously doubt any child with a parent who actually cares about this sort of thing would allow them on here to see it. However, rules are rules, and I don't decide what's okay here. For instance, this story was almost banned because Spike is the main character, and originally he was normal age before he went to Mareth.
Underage sex is not allowed unless they are still in their cartoon form for whatever reason. Then it's perfectly fine. But the moment you try and make them just a bit more human, they have to be completely adult or it is not allowed.
Hypocrisy I say.
But anyway yeah, just in case the mods take issue with it I would say edit that comment to get rid of the link. I've had images be taken down for less reason than that picture.
I am well aware now that there is already an NPC who is a plant you grow, although I only learned of this yesterday while this was an idea I'd had since I started this fic.
Ohh, could this be paving the way to some milky goodness?
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...Now I want Spike to find an Epic Level mimic crab and tame it so we can make jokes about the Luggage.
(If you don't get it, dig up The Colour of Magic and read it. Trust me.)
looks good so far, can't wait to see where this goes
5863152
Or you could just have it be SFW by having Spike wear clothes or have a censor bar covering anything. Just because the story is Mature doesn't mean it can't be SFW.
5934224 ...and I suppose things balance in the end, since a chapter later gems doing the opposite are introduced.
A treasure-exchanging mimic ? That's certainly something quite new.
I can't recall ever hearing about a similar 'type' of mimic like this one before now.
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>It was then that he saw a massive, scaled tale
-Like a shark 'tail', you mean ?
5942186 This made me think much more of the Luggage of Rincewind, in the Discworld games.
5945163 Actually, I apparently never actually called it Bat City at all. It seems it was always Cavern City.
5944685 Thank you.
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I didn't actually know there were Discworld games. But yes, that was the Luggage I meant.
I like the idea of expanding the land by adding a beach; sure, the game centers on one continent, so of course the mist must conceal everything beyond the shores. And go figure anything that nears the shallows picked up some of the corruption. The introduction of the Mimic Crab certainly is a cool addition, and I'm interest to see what sea life your going to come up with. And as for the plant, I'm more curious as to what Spike will end up growing than the NPC, she was one of the ones that weirded me out. Spike's racial power is a cool touch, too. I look forward to more, good sir, as I'm enjoying the surprises thus far.
And here i was wondering when CoC would be crossed over like everything else. Good show.
Maybe Spike should have paid attention to the messages on the ground around that chest...
...Now I remember why people tend to ignore those.
Heh... I was checking things on another website, and found an interesting picture kinda ''related'' to what's in this story : https:// www. furaffinity.net/view/14906294/
5966582 Yes, quite nice. However, please keep in mind that NSFW image links are not allowed. And that image is quite NSFW. I don't want anyone getting in trouble here.
5966801 I must say, I never 'quite' understood the logic behind allowing, on 'X or Y website', the MOST GRAPHIC depiction of sex and brutality (some things even *HIGHLY* illegal, in some countries)... in words... But an image is- OOOOOOOOH- that's too much (with frowning face).
Yeah, ''1 picture = 1000 words'' and whatnot, but that's still generally dumb, when someone think about it for more than a second.
Sigh. But, yeah, whatever... I guess you're right.
5974857 Personally I have no problem with it either. And I seriously doubt any child with a parent who actually cares about this sort of thing would allow them on here to see it. However, rules are rules, and I don't decide what's okay here. For instance, this story was almost banned because Spike is the main character, and originally he was normal age before he went to Mareth.
Underage sex is not allowed unless they are still in their cartoon form for whatever reason. Then it's perfectly fine. But the moment you try and make them just a bit more human, they have to be completely adult or it is not allowed.
Hypocrisy I say.
But anyway yeah, just in case the mods take issue with it I would say edit that comment to get rid of the link. I've had images be taken down for less reason than that picture.
Really cool idea with the MCrab!
5966582 That picture fits perfectly
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So I'm expecting/hoping that plant will grow into something like this:
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And keep a eye out for my ideas that you can use for your story. I will PM them to you.