A magical mishap sends Spike into the corrupted world of Mareth, trapping him there for one full year, separated from his friends in a body that isn't entirely his own. Will he last the year with his sanity intact?
Number one: you proved in your story "scootaloo gets cocky" that you know how to write sex so i dont know why you say you dont...
Number two: this is a great story and the more the merrier, however i understand that you (like me) have a life and things to tend to, but please, write more of this...
5754924 O h, don't worry. I plan on keeping this going on a fairly regular basis. It's been a long time since I've had this much inspiration to work on a story, and I'm sure as heck not dropping it yet! I'm riding this inspiration for as long as I can!
Ok so.....I was interested to see what Coc was all about so I downloaded the game now I'm REALLY lookin forward to see how you pull this off
Number one: you proved in your story "scootaloo gets cocky" that you know how to write sex so i dont know why you say you dont...
Number two: this is a great story and the more the merrier, however i understand that you (like me) have a life and things to tend to, but please, write more of this...
5754924 O h, don't worry. I plan on keeping this going on a fairly regular basis. It's been a long time since I've had this much inspiration to work on a story, and I'm sure as heck not dropping it yet! I'm riding this inspiration for as long as I can!
>His eyeteeth fangs had grown
-That sound horrifying... also, I suppose there's an error there, yes ?
...aaaaaand, apparently Google says 'eyeteeth' are a thing ? For real ? That's one dumb way to call upper fangs, if you ask me.
I think that phrase should be slightly re-worded, for a nicer read.
...eyeteeth... Damn whoever gives those weird names of body parts.