A magical mishap sends Spike into the corrupted world of Mareth, trapping him there for one full year, separated from his friends in a body that isn't entirely his own. Will he last the year with his sanity intact?
I'm a little disappointed to learn Spike lost his muzzle (Puffy, pouting lips on a muzzle? Hot.), but the rest of the changes are interesting, and I look forward to seeing what effects this literal crystal heart will have on him. And to learn that the golem he fought is not even the finished state... Now I'm curious as to what a fully developed golem is like. I also find it refreshing to at last see that there is at least ONE creature more interested in killing and eating instead of reproducing in the new Cave Driders. Even if the chapter was short, I look forward to the next; and any OTHER feminine changes Spike will have.
5848596 Well, consider that the item he's using is for turning the user into a human-like creature. That includes human face. I wasn't completely ready to get rid of his scales yet, but it made sense to me that he would become less draconic from eating more of these gems.
5849223 ''Eat gems like a dragon = Become less of a dragon'' To me, 'that' doesn't make any sense. If anything, those magical gems... which I REALLY doubt a human could eat -_-... should make him MORE of a dragon, not less.
It's like if I was eating raw bloody meat... and it made me more of a vegan ?
Love the chapter, keep it up! I'm dying to see where this goes! :DDD
New enemy type, good stuff, though I think spike would be a bit disgusted by the actual crystal hearts.
AT LAST! I really love this story, and was getting worried.
o.m.g this is a thing how long has this been up
I'm wondering what followers/lovers/slaves you are going to bring into this?
Woooooo it updated!! Love ya:) I hope some more chapters are on the way, but no pressure, dear. Take your time to make them good.
Nice to see you're continuing this story.
Quick spelling mistake to point out as well
Is spelled 'Drider'
Other than that, looks all clear to me.
Have a smile
Moar
I'm a little disappointed to learn Spike lost his muzzle (Puffy, pouting lips on a muzzle? Hot.), but the rest of the changes are interesting, and I look forward to seeing what effects this literal crystal heart will have on him. And to learn that the golem he fought is not even the finished state... Now I'm curious as to what a fully developed golem is like. I also find it refreshing to at last see that there is at least ONE creature more interested in killing and eating instead of reproducing in the new Cave Driders. Even if the chapter was short, I look forward to the next; and any OTHER feminine changes Spike will have.
5848419 Fixed, thank you!
5848596 Well, consider that the item he's using is for turning the user into a human-like creature. That includes human face. I wasn't completely ready to get rid of his scales yet, but it made sense to me that he would become less draconic from eating more of these gems.
>It was a literally crystal heart.
-a literal
5849223 ''Eat gems like a dragon = Become less of a dragon''
To me, 'that' doesn't make any sense. If anything, those magical gems... which I REALLY doubt a human could eat -_-... should make him MORE of a dragon, not less.
It's like if I was eating raw bloody meat... and it made me more of a vegan ?