woo, looks like you got it past the mods! gonna read to see what changed. unless not much changed?

5741395 Like I said in the forum, I had to change it so that mentally Spike was 18 years old in Equestria before he became physically 18 in Mareth. That's the only major change, but there were a lot of little touch ups I added as well.

Ni~~ice

Can't wait for him to get knocked up by imps and minotaurs.

By the end of that year spike is going to be able something like this off

Because that would be awesome

Wow just wow

I personally hope Spike gets a harem while he's there. particularly with Ember, Kiha, and Helia since they're all reptiles.

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Eehh...

Like I say in the description, I'm actually going to avoid using the canon characters. They interact with the Champion from the game, who is also in the world somewhere. Yes, I may reference them, but I'm actually more interested in trying to come up with my own monsters and characters to fit into this world. I want to have this taking place in regions that the Champion doesn't explore, or have Spike run into characters the Champion doesn't meet. Since this is a big world, and what the Champion experiences in-game shouldn't be taken as all the world has to offer.

Thus I'm trying to make things that I think would fit into the world. You'll see what I mean soon enough.

"Rarity, that beautiful gem... Rainbow Dash and AJ with those firm hips... and Twilight..."

Really mate, Really?

5742393 Oh, I didn't see that. I mean, I imagine you'll probably be using some of the same species like succubi and imps and stuff, though i'm not sure what else you could use since the game has a very wide variety of anthros and monstergirls. Speaking of which, where would Spike go? I've played the game a lot but i don't know of any places that the Champ couldn't go.

5742393 any romance at all? I have no idea what champion anything is so what am I expected to see spoilers don't matter to me

5742511 Keep in mind. World that corrupts everything, even your thoughts.

I mean heck, in the game, your character, the Champion, is pretty much guaranteed to have dreams about returning home and banging their own parent.

Notice how right after that bit's done, right before the end, he realizes how fucked up that was.

5742543 I can't say too much because spoilers, but I will say that he is currently in a cave, and I have enough ideas for two or three chapters taking place in here alone. And then there could be parts of other environments that maybe the Champion hasn't explored.

We will be seeing some of the classics, for sure, but again, I want to try and keep things mostly original, because to be honest I am terrible when it comes to writing pre-existing characters well. However, I can write my own characters just fine, since I know them in and out.

5742622 Oh, there'll be romance, for sure. I plan to give Spike some followers later on, can't say too much. However, if you haven't played the game this is a crossover of, Corruption of Champions, then... well, I guess you wouldn't really need to worry about spoilers, as there isn't really much story to it to spoil. It's mostly smut. Like this story will be. All you need to know is that this is a world that corrupts and perverts things.

5742928 then should you put a romance tag? And since you said smut and corruption tell me there would be no NTR-netorare?

5742928 Anddddd just like that BOOM I'm interested imma hold off the fav until next chapter to see how this develops and imma look up this champion thing to get more background info

I like very much
This is the begining of what could be an epic adventure story! I would like to see another chapter of this.

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Just got dond reading the first chapter and I just can't wait to see how the rest of it will turns out.
And after reading the part where Spike was checking himself out I'm guessing anthro!Spike looks like this:
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Or this:
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I hope to see you do original take on some of the encounters, like having Spike encounter a demon spirit that can possess others being's privates likes Exgartuan and he permanently possess Spike's penis thus making it grow huge to the point that his sheath can no longer hide or hold his new huge penis which resulted that his penis is now always out in the open for all to see and now Spike have a travelling companion that he can't completely control. And/or have Spike meet an anthro she-male reptile likes Roxanne Poisontail maybe a close relative but instead of having a drinking contest where the prize is sex Spike would make the game more interesting by upping the stakes by having the loser becomes the winner sex slave forever and Spike wins the drinking contest due to his dragon immunity alcohol thus winning a recruit to his growing harem/hoard. Maybe meet a female gargoyle that is similar to her and Spike recruit her to his harem/hoard. I would like to see Spike goes to a city/village that is full of Minotaurs of both sex a maybe some she-male Minotaurs. As you can see I'm very excited about the potential this story could have and to see what you will do with it.

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I'm glad you're excited by the potential! That was the idea behind it, do things that you haven't already seen in the game itself, as that's something I feel takes away from my enjoyment of a lot of CoC based fics. It's all stuff that's already there. If I wanted to read about the main character doing it with Amelie, I'd play the game, for the umpteenth time. With this, I want to explore the world without just showing off the stuff that's already been done.

And as for what he'd look like, something of an inbetween of those. He wouldn't be huge like the first one, but he'd still have more quite a bit more muscle to him than the second one.

5742990 Again, there will be romantic elements with some of the characters I have planned out, much like the game.

Just a heads up for both this and the game it's based on, there is a lot of perverted transformation material in this, things that can lean towards very specific fetishes. In the game it's mostly alright since you can choose which fetishes you experience. However, in here, there's less choice since it's whatever I plan out for him. I may allow audience participation in some parts, but for the most part I'll be doing my own thing.

And in regards to netorare, I literally had to look that up. And no, there's nothing of that sort here.

Ahhhh oh my god a COC crossover but booo not using any canon people like the gargoyle or the horsewoman from the city, ive played it before

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I will read this if it's the second one. Tired of all the Spike power trip fics, it'd be nice to see him trying to survive Mareth as a sexy boi for once.

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Weeaboo talk for cuckolding. Like that one scene between Amily and Urta, only the result is meant to be more soul-crushing and usually winding up with the guy being dumped rather than turning into a fun threesome activity.

So either Mareth has gotten even worse (Champ got distracted by all those character plots probably) or Spike just isn't as mentally strong as our champ. Spike lasted about ten minutes before he needed to fantasize about Twilight, while the champ took ten days... and only had it in their dream.