A magical mishap sends Spike into the corrupted world of Mareth, trapping him there for one full year, separated from his friends in a body that isn't entirely his own. Will he last the year with his sanity intact?
OH THANK GOD! He's not going to be a little fem-boy for the entirety of the story.
He's not going to be a little fem-boy for the entirety of the story.
not going to be a little fem-boy
The author leans in and whispers into the commentators ear. "He still has a pussy, and he's gonna use it. He still has breasts, and he has no desire to get rid of them. He was never a femboy to begin with. He's a full-blooded herm, and he's staying that way. My word is law here." The author fades into the shadows dramatically, chuckling to himself as he tries to look ominous.
5850607 Bah, even if he's a futa, I just don't want to 'see' spike as overly feminine and shit. Seeing as the flame emeralds seem to enhance masculinity (at least, that's what I got out of it, I don't think there was anything that increased THAT while not affecting masculinity), I don't think he's as feminine as he was before. Dragons are powerful creatures! Go forth, spike! Yours shall be the dick that pierces the heavens!
I'm wondering when he's gonna get some companions with him... heck, maybe have the smooth golem be his personal slave for (as she says) defeating her and marking her as his own... but anything's fine with me, really... long 's he got plenty babes 'round 'im
Wow; I like these changes, and I even got my wish to know more about the Crystal Golems in that they eventually grow smooth and more intelligent. And the Fire Emeralds sound REALLY epic to me, a great way to show two completely different forms of magic blending into one. Though if that was a more refined golem much like the Vampire Bat Gremlins are more powerful because of demon taint, does this mean the golems grow even more refined and powerful? I'm curious as to their origin and why it seems they need to capture other creatures to refine more of themselves. It's also pretty cool to see even they have a gender barrier, males being much more well... Blocky, maybe isometric? I dunno, so I'll just wait for the next chapter.
5850607 This was a interesting chapter. And I like the concept of the Crystal Golems and if you want I can pm you some monsters ideas. So Spike now is a dragon-like Amazonian futa but with a more feminine body shape with a little more muscle then a normal female. I like it!
5854568 Yep, that's the basic idea behind his design right now.
And you can send me ideas if you want. Just know I make no promises (and if this is about Gideon's bestiary, I looked into it, not what I'm looking for at all.)
5854787 I wonder how Spike would handle the "Your vagina is now slick and ready to fuck, and always will be" that the succubi milk gives you in the game after becoming a squirter, now that he has a vagina that he didn't have before.
If the fire rubies deepened his cunt, one would think that the fire emralds, with their boosted power and possibility for more TF's, would make his cunt more moist...
Are we going to see more sex with the bat queen? Also, when will Spike start making his harem hoard? :3
5850326 Give it time. We'll be seeing more sex next chapter hopefully.
Love it. Continue et NAOW! NAOW! Because it's amazing. owo
OH THANK GOD! He's not going to be a little fem-boy for the entirety of the story. C'mon spike,
BE A MAN!
Also, dragon fire OP
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The author leans in and whispers into the commentators ear.
"He still has a pussy, and he's gonna use it. He still has breasts, and he has no desire to get rid of them. He was never a femboy to begin with. He's a full-blooded herm, and he's staying that way. My word is law here."
The author fades into the shadows dramatically, chuckling to himself as he tries to look ominous.
I'm sorry no I'm not.5850607 Bah, even if he's a futa, I just don't want to 'see' spike as overly feminine and shit. Seeing as the flame emeralds seem to enhance masculinity (at least, that's what I got out of it, I don't think there was anything that increased THAT while not affecting masculinity), I don't think he's as feminine as he was before. Dragons are powerful creatures! Go forth, spike! Yours shall be the dick that pierces the heavens!
5850607 futa spike for full story? Excuse me while I go favorite this 80 times
I'm wondering when he's gonna get some companions with him... heck, maybe have the smooth golem be his personal slave for (as she says) defeating her and marking her as his own... but anything's fine with me, really... long 's he got plenty babes 'round 'im
PS 5850607 YES! Herm ftw
Wow; I like these changes, and I even got my wish to know more about the Crystal Golems in that they eventually grow smooth and more intelligent. And the Fire Emeralds sound REALLY epic to me, a great way to show two completely different forms of magic blending into one. Though if that was a more refined golem much like the Vampire Bat Gremlins are more powerful because of demon taint, does this mean the golems grow even more refined and powerful? I'm curious as to their origin and why it seems they need to capture other creatures to refine more of themselves. It's also pretty cool to see even they have a gender barrier, males being much more well... Blocky, maybe isometric? I dunno, so I'll just wait for the next chapter.
5850607
This was a interesting chapter. And I like the concept of the Crystal Golems and if you want I can pm you some monsters ideas. So Spike now is a dragon-like Amazonian futa but with a more feminine body shape with a little more muscle then a normal female. I like it!
5854568 Yep, that's the basic idea behind his design right now.
And you can send me ideas if you want. Just know I make no promises (and if this is about Gideon's bestiary, I looked into it, not what I'm looking for at all.)
5854787 I wonder how Spike would handle the "Your vagina is now slick and ready to fuck, and always will be" that the succubi milk gives you in the game after becoming a squirter, now that he has a vagina that he didn't have before.
If the fire rubies deepened his cunt, one would think that the fire emralds, with their boosted power and possibility for more TF's, would make his cunt more moist...
you could make the crystal golem he banged it is companion
5857114 Glad to see I wasn't the only one who thought about that... Though to be fair, they can't really have much of a story to them.
Well, it is a steal... I swear, half the damn shops in Mareth would charge five times that even if it was a totally normal hilt...
So, during that brief time he had with humanity (Note: I don't remember humans being mentioned in story yet...) would he happen to look a little bit like Granberia?vignette3.wikia.nocookie.net/monstergirlquest/images/d/df/Granberia.png/revision/latest?cb=20120313190438