A magical mishap sends Spike into the corrupted world of Mareth, trapping him there for one full year, separated from his friends in a body that isn't entirely his own. Will he last the year with his sanity intact?
First time I played that game, I drank a P. Succubus milk, thinking, "it will make me sexier, right? says bring out your inner.." and bam, my guys a herm. After I finished my "OHGODWHATHAVEIDONE" panic-rant, I laughed myself to tears. Liked the game. If this is even half as good, I'll like it too 5744710 I took it a step farther. No sex XD Make your background religious and only meditate. It takes forever, specially when you get stuck fighting bees, hahaha!
5758008 Ha! Nice! I've tried to write in at least somewhat realistic reactions to experimenting with things, possibly mirroring what a player might be thinking going into something like this blind.
Whether or not I succeed in this I'll leave up to the readers. Glad to have people interested in it at least!
Not bad. Since playing CoC, I've been waiting for a fic to be written about it! God, you sir are one of my new favorites! Keep it up. You earned yourself a follow. o3o
Just finished reading what you have up, and so far it's pretty good. Spike's not OP, like I know some people make the hero, so there's a feeling of struggle. I loved how you made him lose like that, brings him down a bit.
And remember, Spike, if you see a plant moving, RUN. FOR THE LOVE OF YOUR BUNS, RUN!
5758056 I see that you're using the armor idea and going for the femboy!Spike look. And if you up for some monsters ideas for your bestiary I can pm you a link so just ask.
5758601 Oh, but of course! I wanted the vampire gremlin to feel sort of like the basilisk in the game. It slowly drains one of your stats and is incredibly easy to lose to if you aren't careful. I just had Spike apply a bit of logic to his second encounter to keep things fresh. Can't let game logic dictate everything that happens, otherwise things don't make too much sense and aren't interesting to read.
Not gonna lie, I like this aspect that Spike has already started to become more feminine thanks to the Succubus Milk and Bat Gremlin items; the fact he's developed boobs is now making me hope that maybe he won't be able to resist and go full on female or herm at least. Guess I'll have to subscribe and find out!
The great thing about CoC was the potential its world offered. So much to explore and do. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Spike carves out a life here, and how his presence will affect the world around him. I mean, as much as he just wants to get home, he is a champion, and like it or not you will make an impression upon Mareth, whether that was your intent or not.
Keep on keepin on author, you have another watcher.
Good idea with the bestiary, it really expand the lore.
Otherwise great job.
instant upvote for CoC, will read in a bit.
First time I played that game, I drank a P. Succubus milk, thinking, "it will make me sexier, right? says bring out your inner.." and bam, my guys a herm. After I finished my "OHGODWHATHAVEIDONE" panic-rant, I laughed myself to tears. Liked the game. If this is even half as good, I'll like it too
5744710 I took it a step farther. No sex XD Make your background religious and only meditate. It takes forever, specially when you get stuck fighting bees, hahaha!
5758008 Ha! Nice!
I've tried to write in at least somewhat realistic reactions to experimenting with things, possibly mirroring what a player might be thinking going into something like this blind.
Whether or not I succeed in this I'll leave up to the readers. Glad to have people interested in it at least!
5758056 I'm hoping for that, actually, have him try some random stuff, just remember, he's already got "mutations"
Not bad. Since playing CoC, I've been waiting for a fic to be written about it! God, you sir are one of my new favorites! Keep it up. You earned yourself a follow. o3o
Loving it!
Just please keep going.
So many Mareth story's get cut short.
Please be the first to finish.
great story so far. Nice that you made a bestiary for us, though I wonder if Spike is going to ask the queen about the stuff he has after he wakes up?
Just finished reading what you have up, and so far it's pretty good. Spike's not OP, like I know some people make the hero, so there's a feeling of struggle. I loved how you made him lose like that, brings him down a bit.
And remember, Spike, if you see a plant moving, RUN. FOR THE LOVE OF YOUR BUNS, RUN!
5758056
I see that you're using the armor idea and going for the femboy!Spike look. And if you up for some monsters ideas for your bestiary I can pm you a link so just ask.
5758677 Thanks for the offer, I'll be sure to keep you in mind.
is ember going to show she is a dragon after all
5758763 I'm planning on at least referencing her somewhere along the way. Maybe give her a cameo, since it's established she does travel around a lot.
5758601 Oh, but of course!
I wanted the vampire gremlin to feel sort of like the basilisk in the game. It slowly drains one of your stats and is incredibly easy to lose to if you aren't careful. I just had Spike apply a bit of logic to his second encounter to keep things fresh. Can't let game logic dictate everything that happens, otherwise things don't make too much sense and aren't interesting to read.
Amazing, this story is just... I have no idea, its just too good for words!!!
Not gonna lie, I like this aspect that Spike has already started to become more feminine thanks to the Succubus Milk and Bat Gremlin items; the fact he's developed boobs is now making me hope that maybe he won't be able to resist and go full on female or herm at least. Guess I'll have to subscribe and find out!
This story is surprisingly awesome.
The great thing about CoC was the potential its world offered. So much to explore and do. I'm really looking forward to seeing how Spike carves out a life here, and how his presence will affect the world around him. I mean, as much as he just wants to get home, he is a champion, and like it or not you will make an impression upon Mareth, whether that was your intent or not.
Keep on keepin on author, you have another watcher.
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kinda wish they added the fire rubies in the game