In weirdest day, in strangest night, no bad mood shall escape my sight, let those who cry in lonely spite, beware my shippings, Bronyparasite's might!
A Displaced Human in Equestria story. A high school boy and his friends go to comic-con, he gets a Pip-Boy, and then they have a heart attack. Our "Hero" makes a deal with a being of darkness to give them a second chance, and things go down hill from there.
Edit: I forgot to put the ratings. It's T, not E. Sorry for the mix up.
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Possibilities. I'll follow for now.
I've thought of doing a story along these lines but I haven't come up with much better than the "Merchant" for the ball to start on its down hill trip and yeaah, heck no!
pretty good ill give it a like and fav
5509128 Wait, is that a complement?
5509338 Thanks!
Vender?
I think you mean Merchant if this is a Displaced fic.
Your should be You're
5521380 Oh, sorry. I thought it was both! I'll change it!... Changed!
He doesn't do shit and I don't need to read it to know that.
5665873 What are you talking about! Someone can blow his Factory up, Celestia can throw it, and him, into the sun. And Pinkie... The Mirror pool is a scary thought. Plus he'll get bored.
5665883 Exactly. He's weak and probably at some point your going to have him bend over and love them like his very soul depended on it.
The...Same...Shit...Everywhere...
5665889 No. He has the Mirror Pool. He has most of the ability's of a Sith. He is powerful enough. And has Scootaloo, preventing Celly and Lulu from killing him! But he is smart enough not to go at her head first. He will, and has already, weakened her. Why do you think her guard are STILL stupid. And I have NO intension on him turning soft, I'ma fix his nice side soon.
5665909 I read it but it always turns out the same as any other HIE story, we'll see soon enough.
What sort of power are we talking about here? Is he like Naga Sadow and able to command fleets with only his mind? Is he like Nihilus and able to kill everyone by just being there? Or is he about a medium amount of power? If you could provide a comparison it would be appreciated
5753237 I'm not that good with comparison, but he might(I'm not spoiling it) be medium, but to fight Celly, he'd use his mind, weapons, underhanded tricks, and Nanites to win. So think... I don't know... I'm sick, cut me a break...
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5862014 What?
5862199
ok I get the story line changes but did you have to have picike have a doush of a dad and said dad be unicorn.
She is an Earth pony, so how is she able have a unicorn for a dad. You polt line does not make sense to me.
5862596 What? Oh... I forgot, time difference. She's a Pegasus, her mom was one.
Also, I'm filling in the blanks. Shadow's the first apprentice, and this is how he met her.(I'll fix the description later. I didn't think I needed to, with me already describing her in Folteren. And His Apprentices.)
5862628
ok but is it pinkie pie or not. You did make it look like it was
5862909 No, an oc. How does red, black, and purple mane sound like Pinkie? I even named her Shadow!
I just keep hearing the name pickie or things related to her at that sean. Thanks for clearing that up.
that was a funny cat picture
5863212 Yeah... oh, did you get that he is related to Pinkie?
It feels like there is a huge chunk of story missing between chapter one and two. Also, you need an editor. So many typos and improper word usage.
5869346 Yeah, I'm always in a rush. But the time is changing.
I can't wait to see what's going to happen next! But I believe that it'll be worth reading. Keep up the great work.
5869479 Thank you! I'll try m-
Yoda: Do, or do not. There is not try.
good
fuck good.
I actually only read the first chapter before i liked, faved and tracked
5894233 Wow, thanks!
5940651 no problem because its just that awesome
True that
^I don't see an anthro tag
Eeyup perfect indeed
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Sequel? Yes Plz
Heh, I remember this one guy who said Folteren would turn good and love the mane six like his life depended on it.
Well...
Looks like its the other way around!
5953889 Thank you. I didn't even see them.
And yes, a sequel will be made after two or three chapters.
5521385 dude. it's sentry. not century.
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Just remember that tia has kept Equestria as near a technological stand still and yet more or less safe because of the threat of a well placed solar flare for at least eight hundred years and all but a few jedi are near mindless drones in their beliefs and when they can't get their will imposed they get more insidious than the Sith
Displaced anyway?
Please do a sequel please I so love this fic pelase make a sequel
5961484 Dimensionally misplaced
5961617 Ah.
Tell me more about it.
5961625 Not much to say actually it's only that the Merchant sells you something and then you get teleported to a equestria and then you are a Displaced
5961707 Almost like, I get turned into a pony?