the ponies... thry tell me things... buetiful things...
Genesect. a Pokemon desinged in the same veins as Mewtwo, yet, inexplicitly more awsome.
And I've become one.
All because I bought some floppy dissk that looked like one of its Drives off this man named the Merchent, and tryed to run it on my computer.
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I await the next chapter
I had found a rythem
rythm
we beg of thee, bring us more of these chapters!
I already love it
What is the main characters name?
Hmm. There were grammar issues in both the description and the story itself yet... Hmm. I'll keep an eye on this for now.
6279636 Grammer never really was my strong point.
I like the "2001 a Space Odyssey" reference, very appropriate for that moment. Now all you need is a "It's full of stars", for every reference to that film that most people will actually get.
Hmm...color me intrigued. I eagerly await the next chapter
The story fells a little rushed, but still good. Just slow it down a little and you have your shife a gret story.
Love this! Genesect is one of my favorites!
Well this looks interessting, i am going to read more.
Not sure why i want everything to be a romance story, probably because it makes it look a bit more real, at least that shippings would be possible would make it a bit more real for me, but no need to do that.
Not sure if Genesect is well not able to reproduce, or if he is one of those rare Pokemon that has a gender, but i don´t really see why not, or it would not disturb me.
While i like mute Characters, or blind ones, i understand that most of them can´t be silent forever, however it would be interessting to see him making Fluttershy believe he would be an rare animal, long enough to get some food or something.
This isn't me being rude or anything but it's 'tried', not 'tryed'
just thought i'd let you know.
6278634
Actually, it's 'rhythm', one of the strangest words in the language.
The title of this made me think it was a metal gear story
6282772 Please explain the convulted train of logic that lead to that thought?
6282847 simple Snake Eater
Not original but enjoyable. Still, would it have been so hard to do a bit of proofreading? Maybe get someone to assist you? The spelling and grammar errors are incredibly distracting.
6282551 Everyone has their own typos they always do. For example I almost always type "were" as "where" and only notice AFTER I've posted the comment...
6287552 It's a universal thing, it would seem...
I don´t mind the Crossover, but you maybe should develop his own story a bit, rather than already make a Crossover as the second chapter.
aaahhhh so he was transported.
Well nice chapter, just bit to soon for a Crossover in my opinion.
eh?
last chapter in Medulla's story he had Omega help him kill a Genesect?
6327453 diffrent one, did you not notice this guy is Shiny?
more please!
6327502
well yes....however in his fight he mentioned the Genesect talking in ones and zero's as well
Interesting start! I like it!
Ha ha! Awesome!
Love the references.
SPONGEBOB REFERENCE! LOLZ!
That was okay, but i hope the next chapter isn´t a Crossover as well, to many after another aren´t that good for a Displaced story i think, and i know i am not the only one that thinks so, but that is only more a suggestion.
It was a bit to much for me, that they were like Super fighting robots, probably just because i know them otherwise, but it isn´t my favourite game anyway. I think the chapter itself was not bad, just not my thing.
NOPE FUCK IT ,IM OUT PEACE
~T.MC
FOXY:)! FOXY FOXY FOXY! I will calm down now.
6279014 Genesect
6916677 oh so no special nickname then okay
Can't wait for the next chapter.
I would like to learn more about him and his Equestria. And how he will handle the situation with the Princessess and the main 6.
I would like to have a new chapter please.
we await the next chapter wit open arms.
Or "Convince" the author to produce it.
What, no "diggy diggy hole"? I'm disappointed in you. Fortunately, I'm far more amused by the Lion King 1½ reference, so everything comes out at a positive balance.
That I would pay money to see
6327502
story is ded, not big surprise
If this story turns out to not be dead, will he just keep collecting tokens of other displaced until he just has a but load of them and lays siege to celestia?
this will be interesting if it continues.
*lol*
when will the next chapter come out
Update please?
Let me know if you wanna have a crossover with one of my characters