Art Inspired
Joined 7th Jul, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- lunabrony · 3.1k words · 12 1 · 462 views
- Diablomuerte2 · 3.7k words · 188 12 · 6.8k views
- Steel Quill · 13k words · 240 11 · 8.1k views
- Warfire Writing Studios · 9k words · 113 10 · 4.3k views
- ChronicleClop · 3k words · 35 4 · 877 views
- GeodesicDragon · 2.7k words · 135 1 · 4.1k views
- MisterMoniker · 4.2k words · 35 1 · 994 views
Featured In20
Clopfics11,553 stories ·15,818 members
- All-OC Stories2,900 stories ·2,264 members
UK Bronies1,719 stories ·706 members
The OC Fanfiction Library1,803 stories ·1,405 members
- Bat Ponies164 stories ·538 members
Equestria After Dark511 stories ·2,100 members
Straight Shipping6,611 stories ·2,896 members
Bat ponies and Thestrals; stories of the night.875 stories ·2,668 members
Stats
Page generated in 0.212 seconds
Total duration
748 users online
948,602 hits today, 2,073,628 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Really enjoyed working on this with you. Thanks for giving me the opportunity!
5424569 We'll need to do it again sometime!
Now that was hot.
never read it but looks promising...... it been a long time art.... since you've written ( or co-written) any that iv liked in the past
Gramatically, there are a few things that need some work. Some sentences that don't make sense or are very clunky.
That being said, the story itself is good! There was enough background to make it stand alone WITHOUT the clop, let alone with it. The characters were not over the top and interacted fairly fluidly.
Keep writing, and practice every day. You're definitely on the right track.
5424581
5424569
Please do so! This was good.
Well, this should be interesting.
I was right. This did get interesting. Very quickly. However, I was left disappointingly flaccid. Better work on that.
Isn't MoonDancer the name of one of the ponies from the show?
She was mentioned in the first episode of Friendship is Magic.
there are like NO 2nd person batpony stories ;~;
Awww yeah! You never fail to please, AI!
Good work.
~TOOWC
5426464
Yeah, I'm aware. I forgot that she as mentioned in the first episode pretty much probably because it was literally a mention of her name, seeing as how Moon's character came into being about two or three months ago.
Uh-oh!! Someone's in trouble!! Run dude! Run!!
"Nothing like getting a blowjob from a superior officer...yeah, that's right, promote them all..."
I liked the story. Maybe there could be a sequel? Perhaps a slice-of-life version about them becoming more than just special someponies...?
I noticed a few grammar and spelling goofs, so I guess you might want to look it over again, but not enough to ruin the story, thankfully.
More clop.
Of course...
5425253 christ i hope not. that level of hell should never again see the light of day
5431610 Unlike most, there's an actual story that comes first. My clopfics always have a story in them. Assuming you haven't done so, perhaps if you'd read, you'd see that the first two chapters don't even have any sexuality in them at all. On a further note, based on the perceived snide 'of course...' remark, I take it you don't care for clop all that much. Or, maybe I'm just reading the wording wrong, or perhaps you're writing needs more clarification. Anyways, if you don't wish to see the mature rated sort of story that floats around here and there from time to time, quite simply turn the mature filter on. :L
5431615 If I didn't know you better, I'd consider that an insult.
5431663 I'll apologize for that comment. Apparently my little brother, who shouldn't even BE IN MY ROOM! thought it was funny to go pretending to be me for a while. I have to go on several other stories he;s been commenting on and explain the situation to them.
I do not enjoy clopfics unless there really is a story to them If a story has porn for the sake of arousing the reader I consider it a shitty story. I have not yet read this story, and I doubt my brother read it properly himself.
I apologize for the monumental fuck-up on my part. Rest assured that my laptop will now have a password lock on it from now on. Again, I am sorry. Now on to the next poor soul who got abused by the little shit.
5431663 Sorry, but I thought I'd just add again that I do not care for clop, but if the 'romance' is actually romantic, as in sex with development and feeling, it gets a good mark on my grading sheet. You claimed that your, um, clopfic actually has story to it? Well, after I apologize to these other folk I MIGHT read this as compensation for the incident. Again, my apologies.
5431713 Ah, siblings...
Anyways, nah man, I never write clop in a story just for the sake of clop. The story's always the focus point at the end of the day.
5431736 He's commented on ten other stories besides yours! I only went downstairs to let the dogs out!
Anyways, glad we're cool though. He didn't say anything else did he? I scrolled down but I didn't see anything, but I reckoned he might have sent a PM or what? He doesn't like Bronies, and he thinks it's funny to use me as a way of getting that fact out there.
I've apologized to the other. I just coped and paste the same apology to them. I really can't be arsed apologizing to everyone.
Since I'm here, I might as well see what other stuff you've got. I've seen that story cover before too. 'Left With A Kiss', the story was. Yeah, that was a good read as well. Used to be rated Mature but it got edited and made Teen if I recall.
Can't say I'm a fan of clopfics since i think they paint a bad image for the Brony fandom, but what you say is the truth, and I hope it is, at least you're making clopfics in a more respectable fashion...I guess? XD
Okay, you go ahead and suggest a story to me. Which of your tales should I read first since I've got some time? A quick reply would be appreciated. Might as well give you a chance, right? That wasn't meant to be sarcastic r anything so you know.
5431615 meh, to each their own.
Huehuehuehu...
I've always found it a bit strange that certain things must be present in porn/clop. Seems like an interesting story so far, even if I feel like it isn't necessary to be that detailed or to try and fit all those things in one chapter/scene/incidence. Luna probably ought to chastise them later for their poor job at watching anything but each other, though.
Good story, but the clop just didn't 'get me going'. Also, why is anal so popular? I would assume most people dislike it, but it seems most people like it.
Should be "when the mare's decided"
Little clunky at some points, but overall a lovely story. I hope the show explores the bat ponies/thestrals more in-depth sometime soon.
Benny hill theam activate
Did you ask to use BatPonyEcho's OC and art from Tumblr?
7750968 I don't recall, but I probably did. This was a placeholder for another piece of art made special for the story itself. Unfortunately, the actual cover art was never completed. I had to leave it as is.