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Really hot.
But to me the dialogue seems off, and I noticed some other things, like "Espresso" becoming "Expresso" quite a few times.
6890199 First off, glad you enjoyed the story. And when I was editing it, I realized that it's spelled with an "s" not and "x." I knew I missed a few or so. I'll go back and make those edits where necessary.
But thanks for pointing it out and glad you enjoyed it!
Impressive story. The buildup dialouge's good, and the scenes really blend in with it too.
6890628 Thanks for the comment. Glad you enjoyed it!
6900916 no problem. If you get a chance, check out my clopfic.
I totally dig it. ARTL Approve'd.
7095320 Glad you enjoyed the story! Happy to hear!
Man, it's like a plot from a porno.......
Good story
7232997 Glad you enjoyed it! We had a fun time writing this one!
It's always the quiet ones....
Yeah...I don't think that's gonna work boys.
Eeyup, just hope and pray.
For you and Macchiato, it definitely is Espresso.
I agree with the brothers, Coco is just too damn adorable!
Great story, though I feel that chapter two could've been longer.