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Isn't that the name of Fluttershy's little brother which I'm still trying to fathom?
7492141 Yes, that is. I didn't realize it until after someone had pointed it out for me. Then again, who's going to know she has a brother in this story?
7492141 yes it is.
7492199 Yes, that's confusing, because it begs the question, "so why did Fluttershy choose her brother's name as her brothel name?" I think you should either edit it with a new name or explain it. Otherwise, it's confusing.
M-Make me your bitch puppy!”
bitch: female dog
M-Make me your female dog puppy...
7492381 Just clarified it. Should be better explained now. Thanks for pointing that out.
7492468 Thanks for pointing that out. Just fixed it.
nice story,
do you plan a sequel, with Twilight and Applejack as her new Misstresses
7494397 as of right now there are no plans for a sequel. But I would like to see more with sunblossom and Fluttershy.
7494397 Like Luna 117 said, there are no said plans for a sequel like this, though it would make for an interesting story so that Fluttershy can "practice" on them or something. We'll see what happens in the future.
Thanks for the comment BTW!
7534707 Thank you for the comment! We appreciate it!
Nice; I always do love an unimportant background character (or maybe another main character) telling someone off for talking to themselves dramatically.
Sometimes people will monologue about their motivations and goals whilst near other people, and everyone else will seemingly not hear it, as it's an aside. Having someone actually notice this short self-conversation makes me happy.
7534707 I'm sort of curious how you can say that; it seems like you'd need some actual, real-world experience working in a brothel to say that.
Eh, not my business anyhow.
As for the story, wow. I'm surprised this doesn't have more views or likes. Definitely getting a like and a star, that's for sure.
7879770 I know that STDs are really nasty for humans, but can horses get their own versions?
According to Kentucky Equine Research, yes - diseases that mostly affect foals and conception, neither of which sounds appealing for any mare, much less Fluttershy, the kindest and most caring pony known. Not to mention that "STD OUTBREAK" isn't exactly the kind of advertising a brothel would want, so the Lady in charge should've made condoms mandatory; 'an ounce of prevention is better than a pound of cure', or however the saying goes.
Funny how so very few fanfictions acknowledge this "fascinating"* factoid, and thus leave out horse condoms (or STD screenings) altogether. Then again, it is fanfiction, where we can say "oh hey, Twilight got shrunk after her magical overload" or make third-party characters appear, and STDs are unpleasant to even think about, so it does make sense**.
*By 'fascinating', I mean 'why did you even search for equine STDs, you bestiality sicko', which is pretty much what I thought when I looked at the webpage, bewildered by just how I came to be interested in the topic.
**Did I really just spend several minutes of my time rambling on about equine sexually transmitted diseases, and how fanfiction doesn't mention them? My god, I am an over-analytical, bored freak.