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  • E Winter Bells

    Can Nyx find acceptance with her extended family during Hearth's Warming, or will she find the holiday hymns are filled with nothing but hollow promises?
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  • T A Mug of Hard Cider

    Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
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  • E Trinkets

    In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
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  • T Drop of Moonshine

    A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink
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  • T Into The Depths

    Celestia must brave the depths of her old castle to save Twilight and Luna
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  • E Bureaucracy is Magic

    Can Ponyville survive when our favorite six mares have to fill in for the mayor?
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  • E Creeping Darkness

    Alan Wake must write a story where Twilight faces the Darkness of his world to save Equestria
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  • E A Zebra in the Bed

    Applejack must give up her bed to an ill Zecora
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Blog Posts101

  • 3w, 1d
    Life Pulse & Nevermind

    12 comments · 505 views
  • 9w, 3d
    Ice Bucket Challenge & Game Project Plug

    So, I was challenge by BronyWriter last evening, and so I had to squeeze this fun little bit of brain freeze in during my morning routine as I got ready for work.

    To reiterate from my video, I challenge Blankedmind, Gremlin Grenade, JustAnotherTimeLord, The Illustrious Q.

    The challenge to Kkat has been retracted. She isn't in a position where she can perform the challenge due to a lack of equipment & funds as well as her personal preferences about the internet.

    Also, on  side note, a project I contributed to is back on Kickstarter. Scott Easley's 3x3 Wildstyle Basketball, a mobile street basketball game. If you supported it last time, please go do so again. If you haven't, please go check it out.

    28 comments · 731 views
  • 12w, 5d
    Bronycon Day 2 Plan * Identifying Attire

    Day one was awesome. Met too many people to list off in these few minutes I have to write this. Today looks to be more awesome and my busiest con day since I have all three of my panels today. I'm wearing an Applejack shirt today and blue jeans. Hope to see you around. Best time to catch me is after my panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Quills and Sofas Hangout - 3:00 - 4:00 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    2 comments · 333 views
  • 12w, 6d
    Bronycon Day 1 Plan & Identifying Attire

    So, since there are folks wanting to meet up with me today, here is a rough idea of where I'll be and when. Also, such a late start today. I slept in, but I had a reason. Work made me stay up all night Wednesday to put out a last minute fire.

    0) 12:00 Float around the convention, likely checking out vendor hall

    1) 2:00 - Vendor Hall Shadow Box booth. Someone ordered something Past Sins related and they wanted me to sign it.

    2) 3:00 - 4:00 - I'll chill out at the Quill's and Sofa's room for an hour. Probably the easiest time you'll have finding me.

    If your looking for me today, I'm wearing a gray plaid long sleeve shirt and blue jeans.

    Hope everyone has a wonderful time at Bronycon today and I hope to see several of you around.

    4 comments · 361 views
  • 13w, 5d
    Bronycon, Shattered Kingdoms, & A Plug for a New Past Sins Movie Project

    Bronycon looms just next week, and I look forward to the fact I once again get to attend this year. So I hope to see lots of friends and to meet anyone new. One person asked in e-mail if I'd be willing to sign his/her copy of Past Sins while I'm there. I'm totally cool with doing that for anyone that asks, just be sure to have a pen since there is no guarantee I'll remember to have one.

    As to Bronycon itself, I get to be on three panels this year. The last one I'll speak about in greater length, but the first two are writing panels. I'll be returning properly to the panel I kind of snuck onto last year, the Do's and Don't of Fanfiction. I'll also be on the Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction panel, both on Saturday. In fact, all three of my panels are on Saturday this year it would seem. It makes for a very interesting day.

    Now, as for the last panel, it is for a project I've been contributing to as a partial-writer as well as a story adviser. That project is "Shattered Kingdoms" and I'll be on the panel with several other members of the development team. Shattered Kingdoms is a game project that has been going on for several months now. The team lead, Gremlin Grenade, has a blog post from Fiesta Equestria last year that tells a lot more about the project then I can really fit into such a multi-purpose blogpost.

    Now not only is the development team having a panel this year, but there will be a live demo of the game available to play. I believe it will be in the Baltimare Arcade room, since it's the only electronic game room I'm aware of, but I'm sure Gremline Grenade will post up a blog soon with more information on what the demo will contain and verify where it can be played.

    Also, the team is looking for more writers to fill out its ranks and to ensure the story is as polished and properly complex as possible. So if you have any interest, drop Gremlin Grenade or come see us at our panel. The time and place are below, along with the time and place of my other two panels.

    - Do's and Dont's of Fanfiction - Hall of the Sun - 10:00 to 11:00 AM

    - Worlds Beyond: Crossovers in Fanfiction - Hall of Stars - 1:45 to 2:45 PM

    - Shattered Kingdom Game - Hall of Stars - 5:30 to 6:30 PM

    Again, I hope to see a lot of you there, and I'll see if I can't do something to make myself easily identifiable. (Besides the fact I basically wear the same outfits to every convention :P. Saturday I'll be sure to save my Applejack shirt and red, plaid short-sleeve button-down shirt.)

    And to wrap up this blog post, a commenter on Past Sins point out a new animation project that is starting to get underway. Someone new has begun a project to make Past Sins into an animated feature. It takes a lot of effort for someone to get far enough to even have a teaser trailer for something like this, so go give these guys some love and get hyped. (Especially because their design for Night Stone Castle looks pretty amazing!)

    TLDR version:

    - Going to Bronycon

    - I'm on three panels (check the list above for times and locations)

    - I'm a member of the Shattered Kingdom's dev team

    - We're having a panel and live demos at Bronycon

    - We're looking for writers, contact Gremlin Grenade.

    - Watch the video above for a Past Sins Movie Teaser Trailer, and give the creators some love.

    EDIT: To clarify some misconceptions in the comments, I am not doing the movie. Just giving a plug to the guys/gals who are.

    26 comments · 1,409 views
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==Originally written spring 2011== Equestria Daily Post==

GLaDOS is free of Chell, free to continue testing, when she discovers a portal gun Wheatley tried to repair with duct tape. When the portal gun catastrophically fails, the enrichment center, GLaDOS, and Chell are literally dropped in the middle of Equestria. The mute test subject soon finds the world of ponies far more welcoming than the human world. But GLaDOS sees possibilities. Let the testing begin... for science.

First Published
25th Apr 2012
Last Modified
25th Apr 2012

Read this on EQD. Excellent work!

Ah, the very first FiMfic I ever read. I daresay it's the one that got me addicted to the fandom in the first place. Lovely to read it again.


Yay now I can think with portals and ponies!

Ok time to read this again. :pinkiehappy: God, I loved this the first time it was published.:heart:


The amount of Internet win that comes from this fic can be described with one word: WIN.




This is my FAVORITE FANIC EVER. :pinkiehappy:

... And now its on FIMFICTION?!  :pinkiegasp:


YUS! One of the best fanfics out there is now on Fimfic! AWESOME! And RIGHT when I wanted to reread it, too! Thanks! Hope everything's going great with you and Batty! /]

~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria

OMG Penstroke is now on Fimfiction.


Oh hey, this finally made it on here. I might just have to re-read it now :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::yay:

:pinkiegasp: AH LOVE THIS STORY!

Penstroke, you might want to include the argument/fight between Celestia and GLaDoS.

Oh hey look! I love this one! What a great excuse to reread it!

By the way, the cover art is awesome. I don't remember seeing it the first time around, even though I read it at least four or five months after it was published (I think). So I guess it's new for FiMfic?

OH YEAH! Read this on EQD!


[img]C:\Users\Public\Pictures\Ponies\Vinyl Scratch\LET+S+SPIN+THIS+SHIT+_c33c0cb4ff7e37c8c40b00a68a461273.gif[/img]

Oh lord it's the first fimfic I ever read :pinkiegasp:

  I still love it :pinkiehappy:

it's here! read it all the time on DA.  why did it take you so long to make it here?

wow, my first fanfic is finally on my fimfiction...



*le sees new stories*

*looks at authors*

*sees pen stroke is here*

*le insta read all stories for the 4d time*

and still havent had enough of the good stuff

ೋೈಾೇದಸಾ ಹಸಸಸ, ಸಬ ಮದಸಸಾಲೂೇ ೋೀಾ ಗಲ ೇದಸಾ ೈಾಗೀ್ ೋೀೋವಗಮ... ಘ ುಹಾೇೇ ಗಟಸ ಸಹೂಾ ತಗಕಾ ಮಪಾತತ... ಗತತ ರಹೇೂ ಾಂಜತೋಗಲ ಗೂ ೈಗೂಪ ಾಸದೂಾೇ ೂಪಾಲ ಗ ುಹಾೇೇ.. ಪಾೀ ುುದಾೇಛ :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

ಓಸೋೆಗಲು, ೋ ತಗೂೂಾ ಮಪಾಾಾೇಬ, ವಹೂ ೋಸೋೆಗಲು

This? Here?

There are not enough words in any language to describe this story's sheer win.

This is a pretty.... SUPER AMAZA-AWESOME STORY!

Everything about it; Astronomically epic win.

And it should totally be a mod for Portal, or a model pack for Gmod. Actually, both. 100% yes. :pinkiehappy:

This story was very well-done, I especially liked the added challenge of GLaDOS being given a "body" to use in a true boss fight (and just like a true boss fight, the friend you brought along was almost useless!).

Very well written, staying a fave here. :twilightsmile:

Look, i know we both said things you're going to regret, but i think we can put our diffrences behind us. For science. YOU. MONSTER.

you got GLaDOS spot on... its so... maniacal. manically funny, but maniacal.

Thank you for coming up here! You don't know how much this made my day! If it wasn't 11:06 I would be screaming like a filly in my room! You are a god among writers!

Prepare yourselves, the portal jokes are coming... THE CAKE IS STILL A LIE!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:

Ok, im done with the cake jokes, for now... Anyway, are we going to see wheatley and the space core?

Why is this fanfic the first fanfic ever to everypony (including me)? BECAUSE ITS AWESOME!!


I really hope wheatley retuns

Oh GLaDoS, you are so mean, but it is soooooooo funny!

Also... Triple first

YES! The great Pen Stroke returns!!

Where is the credits song? There must be one somewhere

Ah, heh, now I'm wondering if you did this just because I suggested that you should... I'll assume not.

First! I like being annoying


me too!

....wait, are you me?! :pinkiecrazy:

but in all seriousness, this was the first fan fic I read for the story (rather than "so bad, I cant't turn away from this horribly funny train-wreck), it's what made me seek more pony fics.

So thanks Pen stroke! :pinkiehappy:

I see now why Gabe Newell admitted to enjoying ponies--he must have discovered this fic at some point.

This is easily one of, if not THE, best FiM crossover ever written.


:flutterrage: Just when I thought my favourite .gif could not be any more perfect, you post THIS.

Have an internet, my friend :rainbowlaugh:

Oh wow, so much positive review, I feel I must read now (why did I join the herd  :raritydespair:).

I now have a reason to set to my "Top 5 Stories* list. :yay:

Granted, it'll look rather sparse until Creeping Darkness and Past Sins gets posted, but still. :twilightsmile:

>>495009 :rainbowhuh: this is the first i read but it did not get me into the fan base R U MEH CLONE?

This was my first ever fan-fic :D


Great read

A Wild Pen Stroke Has Appeared!

>  Attack

>  Run

> [Hug]

I love this story, and Joe England's addition to it. Nice to see it here :D

Portals on Chell's flanks? That sounds dangerous for a sword fighter if he or she was to stab through the portal! Or at least lucky for Chell!

Oh wow. One of the first fics I read. That was SO LONG ago!

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