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Pen Stroke 154924

Joined November 2011
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    Pen Stroke's Stories (15)

    • Drop of Moonshine
      A thousand years is a long time to go without a good, stiff drink

      10,332 words · 17,471 views · 2,070 likes · 29 dislikes
    • A Mug of Hard Cider
      Celestia's thirst for good alcohol leads her to a pair of new drinking buddies
      12,433 words · 11,143 views · 1,215 likes · 17 dislikes
    • Trinkets
      In the aftermath of Past Sins, Twilight and Nyx go through the things from Nyx's castle bedchamber
      7,396 words · 13,259 views · 1,212 likes · 20 dislikes
    • Better Living Through Science and Ponies
      Not all is well in Equestria when a failing portal gun brings Aperture Science to the land of ponies
      39,979 words · 13,260 views · 1,885 likes · 35 dislikes
    • Winter Bells
      95,663 words · 11,905 views · 1,606 likes · 29 dislikes
    • Into The Depths
      44,185 words · 5,877 views · 630 likes · 10 dislikes
    • Fluttershy Wishes
      12,821 words · 6,508 views · 334 likes · 4 dislikes
    • Bureaucracy is Magic
      14,346 words · 3,417 views · 426 likes · 7 dislikes
    • Creeping Darkness
      63,186 words · 3,550 views · 473 likes · 10 dislikes
    • A Zebra in the Bed
      4,549 words · 3,888 views · 442 likes · 10 dislikes

    ==Originally written spring 2011== Equestria Daily Post==

    GLaDOS is free of Chell, free to continue testing, when she discovers a portal gun Wheatley tried to repair with duct tape. When the portal gun catastrophically fails, the enrichment center, GLaDOS, and Chell are literally dropped in the middle of Equestria. The mute test subject soon finds the world of ponies far more welcoming than the human world. But GLaDOS sees possibilities. Let the testing begin... for science.

    First Published
    25th Apr 2012
    Last Modified
    25th Apr 2012

    Comments ( 591 )

    #1 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · 4 · ·
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    Take it down, please! Its not your story! Wait... *looks at autors name* My lord! :pinkiegasp:

    #2 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    FUCK YA PORTAL

    #3 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · 3 · ·
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    Read this on EQD. Excellent work!

    #4 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ah, the very first FiMfic I ever read. I daresay it's the one that got me addicted to the fandom in the first place. Lovely to read it again.

    -Tricondon

    #5 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Yay now I can think with portals and ponies!

    #6 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Ok time to read this again. :pinkiehappy: God, I loved this the first time it was published.:heart:

    BR
    #7 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 1d ago · 2 · ·
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    The amount of Internet win that comes from this fic can be described with one word: WIN.

    #8 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    AND A MILLION MORE TIMES

    This is my FAVORITE FANIC EVER. :pinkiehappy:

    ... And now its on FIMFICTION?!  :pinkiegasp:

    FINALLY I CAN EXPRESS HOW MUCH I LOVE THIS MASTERPEICE!!!!!! :flutterrage: :pinkiecrazy:

    #9 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    YUS! One of the best fanfics out there is now on Fimfic! AWESOME! And RIGHT when I wanted to reread it, too! Thanks! Hope everything's going great with you and Batty! /]

    ~ Magical Trevor, Minstrel of Equestria

    #10 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OMG Penstroke is now on Fimfiction.

    FANGASM:rainbowwild:

    #11 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh hey, this finally made it on here. I might just have to re-read it now :pinkiehappy::twilightsmile::yay:

    #12 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    :pinkiegasp: AH LOVE THIS STORY!

    #13 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Penstroke, you might want to include the argument/fight between Celestia and GLaDoS.

    #14 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh hey look! I love this one! What a great excuse to reread it!

    By the way, the cover art is awesome. I don't remember seeing it the first time around, even though I read it at least four or five months after it was published (I think). So I guess it's new for FiMfic?

    #15 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    OH YEAH! Read this on EQD!

    ITS TIME TO SPIN THIS SHIT ON OVER TO FIMFICTION

    #16 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This.

    Is.

    Awesome.

    :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

    #17 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh lord it's the first fimfic I ever read :pinkiegasp:

      I still love it :pinkiehappy:

    #18 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    it's here! read it all the time on DA.  why did it take you so long to make it here?

    #20 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    wow, my first fanfic is finally on my fimfiction...

    :pinkiegasp:

    yay~

    #21 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · 1 ·
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    *le sees new stories*

    *looks at authors*

    *sees pen stroke is here*

    *le insta read all stories for the 4d time*

    and still havent had enough of the good stuff

    #22 · Chapter 6 · 60w, 1d ago · 2 · 1 ·
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    ೋೈಾೇದಸಾ ಹಸಸಸ, ಸಬ ಮದಸಸಾಲೂೇ ೋೀಾ ಗಲ ೇದಸಾ ೈಾಗೀ್ ೋೀೋವಗಮ... ಘ ುಹಾೇೇ ಗಟಸ ಸಹೂಾ ತಗಕಾ ಮಪಾತತ... ಗತತ ರಹೇೂ ಾಂಜತೋಗಲ ಗೂ ೈಗೂಪ ಾಸದೂಾೇ ೂಪಾಲ ಗ ುಹಾೇೇ.. ಪಾೀ ುುದಾೇಛ :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::rainbowhuh::rainbowlaugh:

    #23 · Chapter 8 · 60w, 1d ago · · 2 ·
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    ಓಸೋೆಗಲು, ೋ ತಗೂೂಾ ಮಪಾಾಾೇಬ, ವಹೂ ೋಸೋೆಗಲು

    #24 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This? Here?

    There are not enough words in any language to describe this story's sheer win.

    #25 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This is a pretty.... SUPER AMAZA-AWESOME STORY!

    Everything about it; Astronomically epic win.

    And it should totally be a mod for Portal, or a model pack for Gmod. Actually, both. 100% yes. :pinkiehappy:

    #26 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This story was very well-done, I especially liked the added challenge of GLaDOS being given a "body" to use in a true boss fight (and just like a true boss fight, the friend you brought along was almost useless!).

    Very well written, staying a fave here. :twilightsmile:

    #27 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Look, i know we both said things you're going to regret, but i think we can put our diffrences behind us. For science. YOU. MONSTER.

    #28 · Chapter 6 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    you got GLaDOS spot on... its so... maniacal. manically funny, but maniacal.

    #29 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Thank you for coming up here! You don't know how much this made my day! If it wasn't 11:06 I would be screaming like a filly in my room! You are a god among writers!

    #30 · Chapter 2 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Prepare yourselves, the portal jokes are coming... THE CAKE IS STILL A LIE!!!!!! :rainbowlaugh:

    Ok, im done with the cake jokes, for now... Anyway, are we going to see wheatley and the space core?

    #31 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Why is this fanfic the first fanfic ever to everypony (including me)? BECAUSE ITS AWESOME!!

    #32 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    awsome

    #33 · Chapter 3 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    First

    I really hope wheatley retuns

    #34 · Chapter 4 · 60w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
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    Double first!

    #35 · Chapter 5 · 60w, 1d ago · 2 · ·
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    Oh GLaDoS, you are so mean, but it is soooooooo funny!

    Also... Triple first

    #36 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    YES! The great Pen Stroke returns!!

    #37 · Chapter 9 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Where is the credits song? There must be one somewhere

    #38 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · 3 · ·
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    Ah, heh, now I'm wondering if you did this just because I suggested that you should... I'll assume not.

    #39 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · 3 · 8 ·
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    First! I like being annoying

    #40 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>495009

    me too!

    ....wait, are you me?! :pinkiecrazy:

    but in all seriousness, this was the first fan fic I read for the story (rather than "so bad, I cant't turn away from this horribly funny train-wreck), it's what made me seek more pony fics.

    So thanks Pen stroke! :pinkiehappy:

    #41 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · 6 · ·
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    I see now why Gabe Newell admitted to enjoying ponies--he must have discovered this fic at some point.

    #42 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · 2 · ·
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    This is easily one of, if not THE, best FiM crossover ever written.

    #43 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>495451

    :flutterrage: Just when I thought my favourite .gif could not be any more perfect, you post THIS.

    Have an internet, my friend :rainbowlaugh:

    #44 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh wow, so much positive review, I feel I must read now (why did I join the herd  :raritydespair:).

    #45 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    I now have a reason to set to my "Top 5 Stories* list. :yay:

    Granted, it'll look rather sparse until Creeping Darkness and Past Sins gets posted, but still. :twilightsmile:

    #46 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    >>495009 :rainbowhuh: this is the first i read but it did not get me into the fan base R U MEH CLONE?

    #47 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    This was my first ever fan-fic :D

    10/5

    Great read

    #48 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · 1 · ·
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    A Wild Pen Stroke Has Appeared!

    >  Attack

    >  Run

    > [Hug]

    I love this story, and Joe England's addition to it. Nice to see it here :D

    #49 · Chapter 1 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Portals on Chell's flanks? That sounds dangerous for a sword fighter if he or she was to stab through the portal! Or at least lucky for Chell!

    #50 · Chapter 10 · 60w, 1d ago · · ·
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    Oh wow. One of the first fics I read. That was SO LONG ago!

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