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mr lovecolt


“Saints have no moderation, nor do poets, only exhuberance.” ~Anne Sexton

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This was rather sweet, great job. :twilightsmile:

This is going straight (gay) to my faves!
This bad boy NEEDS to be featured!

3399511 Me, have a featured story? What madness is this you speak of? :yay:

3399545
The madness of an author who doesn't believe in sleep, but can still dream

I cannot express my satisfaction for this and still remain articulate, my friend however in the following transcript might

"Silver"
"yeah?"
"What are you reading"
"Nothing"
"Then why are you smiling?"
"Because its funny"
"Then why do you have an erection?"
*looks down* "oh. hello" *continues reading with bag over waist*

*by the end*

"are you alright"
"why"
*friend points out I am tearing up*
"Yeah, I have to get off now thats my stop"
*leaves bus and bewildered occupants*

3400328 Well that's always a good reaction to have.:raritywink:

Me gusta. ¡Yo quiero mas! ¿Por favor?:moustache:

3400557 This one was more of a gift, but if cloppiness is what you're after, then I have two sections of stories for that: the clopfics section, which will soon include stories of all 6 R63 stallions, and the apocrypha section, which will be like little clop filled easter eggs based off of the horror stories in my Empolemitheon Universe.

3400409
I'll tell him that, after I ask why he staring at my lap in the first place:twilightsheepish:

Enjoyable read. Could look into getting just another editor to fix up a few grammar mistakes. Maybe try to add more pacing, too. I enjoyed it, though.

very enjoyable read, good romance... don't care it's m/m :raritywink:

oc fics sure do seem to have the potential and often turn out higher quality fics than those of canon characters , even though this was super short for the amount of stuff that happened it was still quite good....

3400779 I truly hope that the portrayal of the two of you turned out semi accurate. I do seem to. Price a lot of constructive criticsm about my pacing. I will definitely start to work on that.

3402275

The only inaccuracies was the fact that my OC's eyes are actually red, and so is the aura of his magic. Other than that, it was almost spot on. Besides all the sensual sexy Spanish that we lack. =P

3402294

my OC's eyes are actually red

3edgy5me

3446023 I went ahead and changed that small part in the story. It didn't change the mood or anything. I simply had to change one line in it.

Very adorable read. :twilightsmile:

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