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LotusTeaDragon
I write the pone, I read the pone, I love the pone. I also accept Paypal donations if you like my stories: https://paypal.me/lotusteadragon
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for a first clop-fic this was very good, excellent 'plot' line, intriguing structure to the story, over all a good story and i believe you should do more
Aha, here is the forewarned clopfic that you were planning. I can't wait to give it a read, because I've been a huge fan of all of your work. Now you just got 9000% more viewers! (My math is nuts, but I think that's what it would come to.)
~SolidFire
3986599
Uh, did you not see the sex tag or the M/M Shipping group tag?
Very nice. Most authors go for straight up horse sex, but you chose to put in a backstory, which was an excellent idea. The clop was written well, and it wasn't completely out of the blue, either. You had some trouble with sentence flow around the middle, but it was quickly corrected. Now that I've read this, I find myself wanting more.
3986599 I don't understand.This story is rated mature and has a sex tag.How could you not notice these things?
3986059 - Thank you, XshadowwriterzX! I rather enjoyed writing this story, though I must admit it was a bit more difficult than I thought it would be. Apparently, reading sex is easier than writing it.
3986128 - D'aww! I appreciate that, SolidFire! I did my own calculations using a protractor, a compass, a bottle of merlot, and a handful of magic beans. The math is sound, as are your calculations. I hope you like the story.
3986599 - I'm sorry the sex turned you off, Dr. Vodka. I do appreciate your fair mindedness, however, and thank you for taking the time to read my story.
3986792 - In his defense, Keatosimo, I didn't have the M/M shipping group tag up until a few hours later. I was waiting for approval before I did so, since I don't like to count my chickens before they hatch. As for your other comments, thank you! Yeah, I don't usually write clop, and so when I do, I like it to be something more than just a quick sex session. I like to build up to things, maybe add a little more heart to the story. If you have any suggestions for fixing the sentence flow issues, I would welcome them. I'd like to make any future stories as smoothly readable as possible. Thanks again!
3986896 - Thanks, Foodmaster234. You know, I thought at one time there were actual tags one could add to stories to show that they were clopfics, or something. I could be misremembering. Anyway, I hope you enjoyed the story!
3987197 This is my opinion regarding your story:
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Edit:
Love The Shining reference.
Plz write moar stories like this.
3987240 Well you can always read the story and skip the sex scenes if they make you uncomfortable.
though this is a clopfic so you can't really avoid that here. 
3987251
The group tab is adjacent to the main story box. Like, an inch away. Besides, why would an erotic gay scene tick you off?
3987219 - Rufus!
Thanks, Foodmaster234. I'm glad you loved the story, and I'm REALLY glad you caught the Shining reference. I like to toss in references like that every now and then, just to see if people are paying attention, or possibly old enough to read said story.
3987547 The only reason i caught this reference because the shining is one of my favorite movies.Your story is well written but you use the word cock way too often during the sex scene,just my little bit of criticism.Love the story regardless.
3987590 - Thanks! I noticed it. There was one paragraph where I used it 3 times, and that annoyed me, but I don't really know that many adjectives for penis, at least ones that would make a whole lot of sense.
3987606 Yes using the word penis would be kinda awkward
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3987630 - Well, it sounds a bit clinical to me. I mean, I know phallus, penis, cock, shaft, dong, dick, meat (blech), pole, johnson, manhood, knob, peter, prick, pork sword, skin flute, tallywhacker, tube steak, hose, and crank. Most of those would take someone out of the story. Most of them would take me out of the story, so it's difficult for me to fit it in there (ha!) without overdoing it.
3987677 Regardless as i said previously great fic.
3987754 - Thank you, again. I really appreciate that!
Someone asked me why I wrote a male/male clopfic, and it's because there are not enough M/M romance stories on Fimfiction. You can count them by the hundreds, and most are less than 5,000 words. There are some wonderful M/M fictions, like "Winding Roads," "Love's Many Forms," and "Brushed Away," but there are literally thousands upon thousands of other romantic fics. I feel that the M/M community is under-represented, and so I'm sticking my toes in the water to see how I like it, and to be honest, I like it a lot. I'm hoping many of you will join me on my mission to make M/M a more common story, or at least more available.
3987677 meatpuppet is possibly my favorite out of all the different ways I know how to say penis.
3994097 - Hmm, I didn't think about that one.
Oh my....you know, normally I don't read these.....but heck I would lie if I'd say that I didn't liked it
Who am I trying to convince anyway? I didn't liked it. I LOVED it! This was pretty awesome. There is a searious lack of M/M stories, clop or not. And this must be one of the best I read.
Backstory? Awesome. Build up? Awesome. "Action"? God damn awesome
Have, once more, all my respect and love. Maybe you should do some more.....you know....just for gaining some experience....
/) brohoof
3995867 - Thank you!
I have two more that I'm working on, making notes about missteps I might have made on this one, and eventually they will come out. For now, shorter stories, with quick resolutions, will be my short term goal.
3997233 - Brohoof! (\
3997637 EEEEEEEEEEEEE! *glomp* please be my friend?
3997693 - Sure!
3997909 yay!
Honestly, I'd be interested to see a non-sexual multichapter story about these two. We need some more M/M shipping, more so than MxM slashfics.
But by all means, continue clopfiction. I have no qualms with that.
4027800 - I was considering it, dekkonot. I'm one who doesn't leave well enough alone, so if I think I have enough of a story idea there, I will develop it further. I do like them, and I've been brainstorming it out the past few days, so who knows.
4145925 - Thank you, Saito.
I decided that I shouldn't be ashamed or embarrassed about my stories, and that means all of my stories. I have requested this story be restored, and it was. I have also fixed a few minor issues in the second half of the story. I hope you approve of the changes.
-.Lotus