• Member Since 9th Jul, 2013
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Diablomuerte2


The greatest source of inspiration for the stories I write is my insane day dreams.

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YES! It is finally up! SoarinFire lives on! I can't wait to give this a read!

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Enjoy! and thanks for being a follower. I had fun being challenged to write something I am not used to. I hope it was worth the time I spent on it. Since I tried to make it as neatly written and presentable. :ajsmug::raritystarry:

Don't know if you want to have your named linked or just as I have it on the cover as is.

Comment posted by Pchurch692 deleted Jul 30th, 2020

I know I said it earlier, but still...
great read.:derpytongue2:

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Glad you like it and thanks for your help.

I hope to find another proof reader when I write your request fic. Since I don't want to spoil it for you :P :raritywink:

Very nice job I say, despite some grammar errors here and there, I liked it. As much as I love SoarinDash, I feel that SoarinFire deserves more recognition as well.

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What grammar issues? Please inform me so I can fix it. :raritydespair:

I am glad you liked it still :pinkiehappy:

SoarinFire? Instant like!

3064158 Nothing too minor, just some commas here and there really.

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Ah well hopefully it doesn't detract from the content. :raritystarry:

Alright, I gave it a read. Well done! It was definitely a different way of seeing this pairing come together. Now, I told you that I would be looking out for errors when I read this, and I noticed a fair number. I noticed some changes in the tense of the story as well as missing commas. There were also some problems with the use of "were" and "was" in the story. But hey, I still loved it. Great take on SoarinFire right there. I'll be looking forward to reading more by you later on. Keep up the great writing!

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Why thank you and sorry if there were many of them. I certainly tried ironing them out, so to speak.:raritydespair:

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Don't worry about it. It's nearly impossible to catch them all. I know I can't, but I try my hardest. That's all that matters.

3068051 Yeah well don't worry you will get your shot to help me iron them out with upcoming fics :P I don't plan on stopping my journey as an author. So as long as I have stories to write there will be chances for you to show me your Editing/Proof Reading powers. :rainbowdetermined2:

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Awesome. I look forward to helping out. I'll do my best. :eeyup:

You need more commas.

3154960 No offense but how does that help? The better comment would have been

"You need comma's here, there, and there as well." pointing out specific spots would help rather than make a vague statement.

You need tomatoes... that is my counter sir. :rainbowwild:

3156967You need potatoes also.
And I'm too lazy to quote all the areas, so I'll just say that you need them in the beginning.

3157079 Potatoes you have crossed a line. :ajbemused:

I will raise you lemons and a kitty cat.:raritywink:

3157084I shall call upon the powers of giraffes and make the birth of koalas, resulting in the birth of the internet and Ctuthulu.

3157643 That's it I call upon the spectral warrior Bashkar and also I use the infinite Mass ray gun that shoots peptol bismol from it. :applejackconfused:

3157663I then call upon the Aeon Illuminate to send their ACUs to launch pineapples from their Mass Accelerator Cannons, which eliminate the existence of coconuts and fruity pebbles. :rainbowderp:

3157678 NOOOOO! I admit defeat :raritycry::fluttercry::pinkiesad2::applecry:

3157805 Never I call upon EXODIA and MEWTWO.... and... umm.... GODZILLA.... and I ... idk... I am done with this I need some rest :P :pinkiehappy:

3157880K.
GG, tmrw, gl hf.
gn.

Haha funny comments.
Good flic tho

I just blitzed
good story though

Beautiful story, Soarfire forever!

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