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NIce.
What i read: "You’ve got potential, kid"
All i could think of: http://m.youtube.com/#/watch?v=qVCFV7jT9ho
Quite an enjoyable read
Is it bad that I liked this? I thought it was pretty well done for what might be one of the more obvious ships.
Aww shet this needs another chapter ASAP
i love it
here have some pony
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love it.
i totally loved this, you don't see many threesome or orgy pony stories
It was great yeah.
But I dislike it when the word "fuck" is replaced with "buck".
Other than that I liked it.
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Hmmm... pretty good, but you could prolly use a little more practice.
so MORE
Could we possibly read what happened at the party?
Saw two errors, but my enormous boner forced me to forget about them.
You should make another chapter for this.
O.O, Sweet Celestia that was spectacular! At first I thought the writing would be like but then as I read I was like . I would sure like to be dash and up Spitfire.
Of course now I wonder, Is she called Spitfire because she is so fast? Or is it because she refuses to swallow?
That's nice. Its been a while since I've read a threesome between DashxSpitfirexSoarin without Dash being traumitized.
I'd have to agree, not sure if gusta
loved it. The crowbar part was hilarious xD
THIS IS SOOO AWESOME this is the best thing ive read in a while
I loved it, but it needs more...
*Pomf* Very nice.
yeayy so nice to see a Dash X Wonderbolts fic which isn't physically or emotionally abusive, and that even has a happy ending!
Olawd, dat cover pic.
Apparently all it takes to make RD's brain shut down is for her to become the filling in a delicious Wonderbolt sandwich.
Finally some good SoarinDashFire that doesn't involve a generous plan.
Holy Celestia, that was hilariously cheesy!
A bit sexy, but mostly just funny.
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My thoughts exactly.
"could use her wings as a crowbar..." did gordan freeman write this?????? hahaha great read!
THIS.
This was much better than I thought it'd be. Dash was really cute throughout the entire thing, and the pre-shower scene was awesome.
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What errors? Haha!
This zipper is killing me but I loved every bit of it!
*clopclopclopclop*
Now THIS is how you do clop.
Liked and Faved.
YES!!!!! BUCK YESS!!!
Ps. A little ooc, slight over-use of him/her, but still very good.
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remove the "a" in seamen.
Hot.
Can a request a sequal, the scene is set for Dash to live her dream; maybe even romance (spitxdash)?
Thank you thank you thank you! Before this, the only RDxSoarinxSpitfire scene I had read was part of Rarity's Generous Plan... *shudders*
Thank you for setting things straight in my headcanon. This is totally how this scene is supposed to play out.
Well done sir, well done.
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Oh, man, Rarity's Generous Plan... yeah, some things are best forgotten.
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I'm considering a sequel. Maybe...
more more more O_O
1143560 After reading that, I had to find clop and romance stories for all the pairings in it, to replace the awful rapey scenes... And yours has become my new official DashxWonderbolts fic. Yeah. Actually a great little piece of writing you've got here. I wish I could create clop like this.
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Why thankee!
delicious...
>>You have been warned
why should i be warned about this?
I make bitches wet, see they just fall down… gushin' …
I almost forgot, STEPPIN' ON DA BEACH DO DO DO DOO. STEPPIN' ON DA BEACH DRRROO DO DO.
Spitfire's name should've been SKYHAWK MK XVI!!!!!
Yeah... awesome story... I just feel slightly odd having read it with a single thought running through my head the whoooooole time. And i'm sure you know what that thought was. Hahahaha great job man!
please do a sequel