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I enjoyed this story. Very much so.
That was awesome and well worth staying up a little more to read.
U should do a 2 chapter on this as a fallow up
Not bad. Well written with a decent story line.
Nice.
If there is sequel, i sense an INCUMMING orgy
Pretty good story
and a thumbs up 
Have a mustache
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moar?!?!?!?
I demand you continue to write this story and save the roast for Comedy Central.
didn't read it but... imma guess gang bang
SECCOND CHAPTER BROK SECCOND CHAPTER, I REQUIRE MOAR!!!!!!!!!
1340009 Well, when you put it that way... otay.
1339094>>1338603>>1332811>>1329086>>1323924>>1323113>>1323060>>1323044>>1322960>>1322939 GROUP HUG GUYS!!!! HE SAID OKAY TO MOAR CHAPTERS!!!!!!
1340413 He did? Then why does the status still say complete?
1340413
BROHOOFS FOR EVERYBODY!!
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1340607 I'll change that. My original intention was to do a one-shot. But on the other hoof, i feel like writing moar. I add a second chapter asap.
1340987 Great!
1340607 he must have yet to change it
The story started off like this
then i was like
but as like 
then i 
and lastly i 
its great to read a NON RAPE story yeaaa
That was hot as hell. Loved the Eiffel Tower on top of Soarin, and the cum swapping at the end. If there had been creampie eating, this would be one of my favourite fics. Prose was wonky in places, and there are one or two typos like:
But otherwise a fairly jizzable clopfic.
Oh Dark Luna, that was just mind-blowing! Left me satisfied, and all the while the story actually made sense. If I were to bet, I would say it would fit in the actually show itself if it were allowed. There was a few spots where I questioned the grammar, but it's better than most of the horrifically choppy and unedited stories I read from time to time. Most of those clopfics don't even fit well with character, or anything else. Just mindless sex. Another reason why Hentai is popular, because it gives a story. With this kind of story, it fit perfectly with the actually show. Character and all, aside from the dirty talk. (Which actually still fits because of personality and character reasons) A perfect short clopfic!
For satisfaction and 
For lust!
When's the next chapter
classic at least you explain why the wonderbolts need to clop that makes it better than mindless clop
Yo dude...no not u....the author of this story......
ITS BEEN 2. FREAKIN. YEARS!!!
and you STILL didn't continue the story
ARG!!! THIS OS TOO AWESOME TO LET GO!!!
PLZ continue or I'll hunt u down and assassinate you
Guys It says 'The End' At the bottom soooo...
what do you thing it means?
Excellent choice of words. Did you pay a lot of attention in college ela.
Jesus!