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Steel Quill


A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!

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aww, thanks :)

5135419 Well, you gave me the challenge! XD What did you think?

Damn, some challenge that was. I didn't expect it to be Maud Pie of all people; seriously, that poker face of hers is godlike. Getting her to switch ringtones or even gain bodily reactions from said indifferent mare, while simultaneously keeping track of her personality?

You're a first-class author already.

5135561 Thank you, you're far too kind :twilightsmile:

Written as a challenge huh? Well looks like a massive success. Can't be very easy writing Maud, especially in a romantically inclined way but I think you did a fantastic job. Story caliber is right up there with all your others imo, keep it up!:pinkiehappy:

5135479 Hmmmm, glorious. Makes me want to think up a harder challenge for you. (smiling evilly while tapping my fingers together) hee hee hee hee.

You know, maybe Pinkie could share. That would be just swell. Hint hint :trixieshiftright:
Either way, great story. I really like how you wrote Glass Sugar :D

Sounds like Glass got his rocks off

The sex was mind shattering

This story was ignatius-ly written

Let's not take it for granite

Thank you, I'll be here all week XD

5136734 ugh, seriously dude, lay off the jokes. you should be more focused on how the story, rocks

This was amazing perfect balance of sex and romance where it is actually realistic instead of most romance novel crap

5137127 Thank you for the praise! Did anything in particular stand out?

5137151 primarily that he actually took the time to get to know her and make her feel legitimately loved instead of just seducing her definetly want to see a sequel with them having a foal

5137059 That was stone cold bro. That was pane-ful and crushed my heart

5137196 I was never known for my puns, young grasshopper. However you insulted my femininity, therefore you must pay.
your mother was a bore and you smell like a cow's rear end.

5137255 My apologies, didn't know you were a girl.

5137397 that was kind of obvious. you elephants sucking shit spewing drag wearing moron. honestly, can you not see the bow in my hair.

5137488 My phone does not display the avatar you nappy-headed piece of amphibian shit

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Gentlecolts, mares, please! We are all here to be romantically seduced by my writing. There's no need for such jabs, humorous they may be! :twilightblush::rainbowlaugh:

About halfway through right now, but so far? This is really, really good. I love that you're in no rush, and are giving this the time it needs.

5137571 then clearly you can't read. You sorry excuse of a walking shit bag. You know what, I take back my insult. clearly the cows ass deserves better than to be compared to you.

5137654 Alright... ya know, I have a hankering for a pork dinner... but I'm afraid that you'll give me the Ugly. That being said, there's only one thing to do

5137679 then clearly I outsmarted you. You don't know who I am, you don't know where I live, you don't know what state I am in. face it, your little cute threat can't even touch me. but don't feel too bad, here's a video for you.

now if you don't mind, I have things to do.

Wonderful as always. Normally anthro isn't my thing, but so far you've failed to disappoint.

Did you originally write this in present tense, though? There's a couple of weird tense changes that seem to come out of nowhere, which is why I ask. Other than that and the flowery language at the beginning which could be cut down for clarity, this is a really solid story, and the sex is, as always, brilliantly written.

Well done. :twilightsmile:

The story was hot and sweet. Good job

5138662 I believe I did try to take it into a present tense to start with, but I realized that it wouldn't come out right and proper that way. Seems a few of the changes slipped through the crack still :twilightsheepish::rainbowlaugh: Thank you for your compliments though! :twilightsmile:

5139100 all right steel! I thought long and hard about your next challenge. Then I realize, it was almost Halloween. this should be special, as Luna would say

so why not pick your own poison. I give you two challenges, the red challenge or the blue challenge, you decide which one. However, I know you can't secede because I made it harder than before. BHA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!

5139787 Well, if I must, then I must choose. I could go the Matrix route, but that's not my schtick here. So I'll go with the Blue challenge, I suppose. Red's a bit overdone anyway. Whatcha got for me?

Favorited.

This was an extremely gifted story.

5141439 Gifted, you say? May I ask how so? It's the first time I've heard that word applied to my works. :twilightsheepish:

This is really something special
Have a like and a fav :heart:
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and hopes for a sequel :trollestia:

Really loved this. I think the first half was a lot better than the actual sexin', as it was all a bit by-the-books, but I REALLY enjoyed that you took your time and made thier attraction believable.

Nice!

5145401 Thank you very much. It's always been my belief that a truly good romance has an established "why", not just a how. :twilightsmile:

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Gifted as in worthy of attention and praise.

Believable, I'd agree.

This was really incredible. Up until now I've only seen Maud fics used for comedic purposes, yours was a perfect balance of romance and humor while still staying true to Maud's character. Even the sexy bits were played seriously and done really well (which is not an easy thing to do with this character) it's absolutely wonderful.

Three words:
So
Effing
GOOD
Oh my gosh that was the most beautiful clopfic I've ever read.
The way that Maud acted and the way the conversations flowed so beautifully... I give you a ten out of ten good sir. Keep up the amazing work. PS also loved the ending VERY Pinkieish (woohoo new word)

5186423 Thank you so much for your praise, you're too kind! :twilightsmile: Feel free to check out my other works as well!

I am rather shocked that you got Maud so well.
I enjoyed the how you built a whole love story into a short 12K words.

Characters were good.
story was good.
The some what awkward sex was fantastic.

9/10

Now I'm gonna go stalk your other stories. :trollestia:

Maud has no emotions really so how u were able to have a romance and clop with her AND do it very well is absolutely amazin
Great story I'll rate this 8/10

That was magnificent. Excellent wordsmith-ing, sir!

What I thought about every time they said safe and sound

wow, glass got her to smile, REPEATEDLYfor maud, that was repeatedly

In the first place I was looking for anthro fic with Maud because I liked her character and one episode was too short. So picked this basing on upvotes, looked at M rate and just hoped Maud won't be out of character and it won't be just sex all around.
The story was so good and so well written that I forgot it is a clopfic. Then suddenly sex happens. The sex scene was so juicy detailed and well described that I... Well, let's say if I was a Pegasus wingboner wouldn't let my wings flop.
Author wrote a great clopfic, and I strongly recommend to edit it and make it T rated, it would be as good as it is now.

5137166 Your avatar had me laughing for about 20 minutes straight.

Sooo beautiful :pinkiehappy:

MAN the stories you write are amazing!:twilightsmile:

Also, how do you get pics that match up so well with your stories? Do you. Have like a secret drawer or something?!?!:moustache::rainbowhuh:

6835958 I simply seek out pictures/artworks I feel reflect what I see or envision when I think of the character I'm writing about. :twilightsmile: Also, thank you for the compliment!

Dang nabbit!! I thought u had 1!:raritywink::pinkiehappy:
Oh N' your welcome!!!:twilightsmile:

Well this was deliciously well done, nicely done! :heart:

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