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Steel Quill


A pony with too much time on his hooves and too much plot to work with, in more ways than one. Porn Pope (TM). Also on FA!

Comments ( 42 )

A great story, i enjoyed it immensely and will have to go over a few other of your works. Keep it up.

Ah yes, I agree, can never have too much Octavia. And Octavia without Vinyl with that! It gets so tiring always seeing them together in the stories. Something like this feels so nice and fresh.

4386731 Thank you so much for the praise. I hope my other stories bring as much enjoyment. :pinkiehappy:

4386829 Indeed, I often feel that Octavia can stand separate from Vinyl and have pairings with other characters. I had thought of adding Vinyl in some way, but it just didn't fit right. Thank you for the compliments.:twilightsmile:

This is truly the best clop fic I ever read. Everything about it was absolutely divine. The words, the story, THE FUCKING MAGIC!!!!!

This story is ten outta ten.

4387753 Oh, you're too kind! There are much better stories written than mine! But thank you so much! Did you have a favorite part? Or anything that particularly stood out? And thank you for the fave as well! and the watch! Thank you for all! :pinkiehappy:

4387836 This is the first tine I read such a beautiful fan fic. The wording was so amazing. The whole stort itself was amazing!!! I only speak the truth when I say this. I honestly wish I could write like you. I'm officially a fan of your work. My favorite part would beeeeeee.... the whole thing. You kept the story going, I admire that greatly. I saw no errors in the text whatsoever. No grammar problems. Nothing. It was perfect!!!

Is this strictly clop or does it build up to it? I really love Octavia and am gonna read it probably either way. Some of the comments make me nervous though.

I really enjoyed the story! The character developement progressed smoothly and understandably, while still maintaining the brisk pace of a simple clop.

Not to mention that cover image being gorgeous. A friend of mine is certainly going to like it :P

4388425 this is a romantic piece that builds up towards the clop. Take your time reading it and you'll hopefully find it just as enjoyable!

4388468 haha, well I'm glad you enjoyed the story so much. I hope to continue to entertain just as much later on! :twilightsmile:

Well, I rectified my first mistake after reading your last story. I followed you, and it was long overdue. This story was very well done. The story leading up to the sex was incredible and a pure joy to read. Then the sex... that was top notch. You're gonna become a pretty big name on this site, I can feel it. I'm strapped in for the ride. Can't wait to read more by you.

~SolidFire

4389246 Oh, that would be so cool! But I just love to write, so the more who enjoy it, the better! Thank you so much for the praise though. I will continue on, no worries. :twilightsmile: Now its just a matter of selecting my next character or pairing.

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I personally find the lack of good Lightning Dust stories on the site to be sad. Oh! And Fleetfoot. I've only ever read one erotic story with her in it. What do you say? Two of the sexiest pegasi in a rather steamy encounter?

~SolidFire

4389448 Hmm...Lightning and Fleetfoot, huh? It's worth some thought, I just need to think of a good frame for the two to sensibly meet and find that "spark".:raritywink:

Beutiful!!!!the writing!!!!beutiful!!!!

4397156 thank you, you're too kind!

4399007 hey!your pretty damn cool for writing romantic stories :D

4401331 It's nothing too hard to do, it just requires the right kind of writing, hehe. I've been learning for years, so might as well put it to good use, no?

(background music for comment, PINK FLUFFY UNICORNS DANCEING ON RAINBOWS...). I think this was great so far this is my second favorite fanfic my first one would have to be "lost highway" it took me two weeks to read the story and I read about a few hours a day

4401792 Awww, how kind of you! Thank you for the praise. I'll work hard to continue to earn it :twilightsmile:

I dont normally read OC clop. but this was featured on EQAD and had a high rating, so I gave it a shot, I do not regret it, this was one of the most romantic (and bucking hot) fics i've read in a while. well done!

4407698 Well, I'm glad you took a chance on me, hehe:twilightsmile: I hope to continue providing more entertaining stories!

I love how you have built an OC that was, at least in Equestria-terms, believable. It's hard to come by a true gentleman like Gentle Breve. I found myself loving the character, but obviously not in a homophobic way (and if I did he's already taken so :derpytongue2:), after reading A Sweet Craving and this, I am more than ecstatic on the thought of reading Tangled Wings. Considering that I am an anthro fan and that you have pleased me so far, I think your magical writing skills shall shine in TW.

- The Watcher 509

4461818 You're very kind to give me such comments, ty! However, I should let you know that Tangled Wings is purely pony, not anthro. Still, if you enjoy it, by all means!:twilightsmile:

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I knew that, that is the one of the two reasons as to why I am very much interested in reading it, the other reason that it's written by one of my now favourite authors in this site. Might I just make a comment that Smooth Strings was beautiful enough without the clop, but with or without it is a wonderful tale.

This story was good, and I enjoyed reading it... Right up until this:

“Don’t worry, baby…I’m not letting go of you.”

From what I've gathered of Gentle Breve's character, I would assume that he would have the same sense of class about him and elegance as Octavia, and when I read that line... I cracked up... It just didn't ring true with his character that you'd established thus far. But no matter, it was still a very well written story, and I thoroughly enjoyed every second of reading it.

After reading A Sweet Craving last night, and this one tonight... I think tomorrow night, I'm going to have to give Tangled Wings a read. Also, I believe you might have just earned a new follower. Well done :twilightsmile:

Hi, I hope you remember me from the livestresam few days ago :)
I've read the story and like you asked, I'll try to give you some feedback.
I like how you played with words and used the... shall we say, more sophisticated language. It did change somewhat by the end, sadly. It broke some of the charm of this story. I mean, I had this feeling that both ponies stripped themselves of their clothes and their personalities. you put a lot of effort into defining their characters in the first half of the story, you described their relationship, you gave them some back story, but none of that seems to be reflected in the sex scene which should in my opinion be the culmination of those efforts. instead we have a pretty good, but generic sex scene.

What else... hmm... Mr perfect stallion might be a little bit too perfect. the same goes for Octy, actually. Why do they both have to be perfect, with supermodel bodies and insane talent. It looked very one-sided with perfect Brave helping incomplete Octavia find the lost passion for music. And it wouldn't require a lot of effort on your part to fix it, really. Making him afraid of closeness for example, that would do nicely. He loved Octavia's music, he loved playing with her but he wasn't interested in her as a person. well, not as anything more than just a friend, a partner to play with, but over time he developed feelings for her and he had to fight his anxiety to get closer to her. And Octavia, being the older mare and possibly more experienced (also, a little bit of a missed chance here to explore her past. I mean, I know this is a short cloppy one-shot but a girl doesn't just go full Sasha Grey on a guy without any practice) would be the one to guide him... just an idea. It would add some interesting and unique details to that scene making it more interesting.

All in all it is a good fanfic and I appreciate the effort you put in to make it more than just a sex scene with enough padding to make it readable, but I would really like to see that the first part of the story had any impact on the second part. I'll be watching you :D

Are you made of nickel, arsenic, cerium, and sulfur? Because you got a nice ass!
Get it?

About Author's note:

Octavia is one of my favorite mares too. Although her second name is actually Melody, not Philharmonica

Alright. I would have liked this if I had been looking for it. BUT I FOUND THIS IN THE OCTASCRATCH GROUP. SERIOUSLY WHY. Edit: I am only pissed off at the idiot who took one look at this and put it in that group.

5157560 I didn't put it there, so no idea what to tell you. :twilightsheepish:

5157692 I know that, I'm just pissed off at the person who did.

5157560 to whom ever put that there


You stupid fuck:facehoof:

Absolutely rubbish

5157692 Your story is really good, it's just I was looking for an octascratch fic late at night...

i could NOT be more impressed! honestly, i mean, they did seem a little too perfect, but other then that, this fic was sensational!
9 out of 10 moustachez for youz
:moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache::moustache:

Well this was a boring load.

.....The English language has failed me, but in a good way.

Very good story man.:twilightsmile:

And for some very weird reason, at the part where, u no, I couldn't think of them talking in their accents. :rainbowhuh::unsuresweetie:

You know; I don't think we got any canon confirmation about Lyra's cutie mark meaning.

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