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Wing Dancer


I like hanging stuff on cliffs. They dangle so nicely till the next chapter arrives.

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involuntary kiss.

If I was Winter, I would say "I'm done." And just walk away.

4744500
One can get easily swept by the moment, especially when approached from the right angle :ajsmug:

This... this is pretty good. :eeyup:

4745000
Thank you! :pinkiehappy: That means a lot to me :ajsmug:

Please write more. This is SO good <3
Great writing :3

4745911
Thank you! More on the way! :pinkiehappy:

I've been a lurker for awhile now on Fimfiction. But then this story enticed me VERY hard, for some unknown peculiar reason. After my positive thoughts on this fic, I decided in turn to make an account to tell you, "I liked this story very much, I hope you write more!".
So thanks for this, and thank you for helping making me make an account. For some odd reason. Cheers.

4753498
Welcome to the site, and I'm really happy you like it so far :pinkiehappy: I'll upload the new chapter in just a few hours or so, as soon as I check it one last time :raritystarry:

Such gay, so sex, wow hotness.

4754125
Ikr? Stay tuned for more in the future~ :raritywink:

i like this, nice M/M :pinkiesmile:

Palms sweaty, mind ready, anticipation steady.
;u;

4758183
I'll be trying my best for bi-daily updates - I think I wond't spoil much when I say I got to the hard part of it, where stuff went down and mistakes were made :U But hopefully you guys will be more than enough compensated with the following hot make-up sessions :pinkiecrazy:

4764942
I kknooow :applecry: It was such a pain to write this...and the next chapter too :raritycry:

4764991
:applecry: now i have premature feelz :raritycry:

4764991 yeah, but this really cements the audience's attention. I mean this guy is figuring out his sexuality. although I don't feel sorry for him, right now I feel like shoving his own words in his face. 'Every action warrants a reaction' ahhh, the irony of that statement.

4765297
I know! What started out as me just wanting to write some sexy times turned out to be quite an in-depth take on how a person thinks about his/her sexuality.

Aww, thats sad but this story is really good right now. Keep it up ^.^

4766036
Thank you! I most certainly will :yay:

4766044 out of curiosity, will you be putting a sad tag on this? :duck:

4767675
Should I? I thought a Drama tag would work, but I didn't find one :twilightoops:

You promised me feelz!!!

4770387
There were none? I'm sowwy :fluttercry: I failed you :fluttershbad:

4770478
i was expecting :raritycry:
but ended :fluttercry:
no liquid pride was spilled today :ajbemused:

4770574
Do you really want them to have it that bad? :ajbemused:

EDIT: Coz I can just throw one under a wagon and have a funeral scene, it's not like I didn't do that before in any fic :pinkiecrazy:

4770702 no... not really
but last chapter was hard on the feelz, i felt wings pain
this was less

4770777
I think that Wing moping too much would make him a wimpy and uninteresting character, and in the end incompatible with Winter. :raritywink:

4770955 besides that, I like it better like this. winter is now a shell of himself, it's a satisfying feeling when a jerk gets a slap on their face. I know this sounds pretty cold but, sometimes we all need a little life's bitchiness to realize ourselves.

4770702

No no no, that's not necessary! Good end! Good end!

Oh god, don't you dare kill any of them D:
I swear, if you make me tear up, I'll hunt you down D:

Not my Wing ;_;
Not my Winter ;_;

4775664
You should read My Little Changeling by me. It's not healthy to give me ideas or challenge me :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:
(Nah, don't worry, I wub them too much :fluttercry: Plus, this IS a clopfic~)

>> Wing Dancer
Thank god x_x
Dunno if my heart could handle it if you killed them off xP

Hmm, well, A bit fast. But then again, Not all stories need to spend ages and ages on developping a relaitionship.
My interest have been gained, and I shall continue! :pinkiesmile:

4779278
One night stands usually happen quite fast xP

Oohhhh... Cock... :rainbowderp: No! :derpyderp2: I mean Bollocks! No! :derpyderp1: I didnt mean-
Ah Fuck it.
What I meant to say was that it seems that things are rising...
...
Thats what he said- Celestia damnit! :raritydespair:



In all seriousness, this is really interesting, and I am still reading on with determination and glee!

Well, This one certainly has taken my attention! Fav and Thumbs up. I cannot say that this is a perfect masterpiece, but its damn well enterntaining and cutesy enough for me to want more! :pinkiehappy:

4779648
Care to offer what you found wrong with it? I do enjoy correcting any mistakes or improving my style :eeyup:

4779678
I would like to, Though In my Current (Sleep deprived) state, I dont think my critique would be the most insightful :derpytongue2:
However let me do my best:

While I find the story interesting, Very good even (Already faved it after all), I sort of feel like maybe things go by a tad bit too fast. Maybe I am being too stubborn, or maybe I have missed things due to my state, but I occationally felt like the action just went "AND DAYS PAsSED!" and sometimes characters feel a bit like they had been simply thrown in there. Dont get me wrong, now that I have gotten to the end, i feel like ponies like Rising Star truly is part of the story, because now he has done something. However, at first I almost forgot that Rising star Existed because I mentally had named him "Plot device to start the story".

So, Well, I guess what I am trying to say is that, I am being incredibly nitpicky, and am most likely wrong. So feel free to ignore this entire section... :twilightblush:
I will try and remember to check up on this entirely again when I have had some more sleep. :scootangel:

4779752
Nothing is ever really perfect, and I love constructive feedback <3 I'll make it a point to slow down a bit now, as we are getting to the point where their falstarted relationship will begin proper :twilightsmile:

Expect much more sexy times (with a bit of magic maybe :pinkiehappy:)

4779854
Ooooouu You Saucy Minx :derpyderp2:
All polite and then gives promise of more sexy time!
Are you comming on to me? :raritywink:

In all seriousness, I am going to look forward to it. Both from a fun persepctive, and to see how the story unfolds :pinkiesmile:

4779920
I-I, you know, I don't, heh :twilightblush: B-But I barelly even k-know you~

I always try and be respectful and friendly, especially to readers who are kind enough to help me improve :twilightsmile:

4780021
Oh Dont be so shy, We´ve just me-.... Wait a minute, :derpyderp1: *Flashbacks of story*
Uhm.... :rainbowderp: *Awkward Silence* ... So... do you cum here often?.... COME! :derpyderp2:


And I am glad you are! You really seem like an awesome writer, and I really look forwards to seeing your continued work. I might end up nitpicking it to death, but so far, even with nitpicks, the large * of: "Its still great." Hangs over the story :pinkiesmile:

You don't know how cute that scene was x_x
Why is this not a movie xP

Great work ^_^
I look forward to more : 3

Also, why come onto Skrive and not me D:
Im so offended by this.

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