Hmm, well, A bit fast. But then again, Not all stories need to spend ages and ages on developping a relaitionship. My interest have been gained, and I shall continue!
no feedback necessary , this was great , took me as long as it would take to read a 1k word chapter as it did to read this 5k one cause i was liking taking it nice and slow to enjoy everything that was happening....
im not one for literature so i don't know how to make something good better , but this was good enough for me.....
If I was Winter, I would say "I'm done." And just walk away.
Hmm, well, A bit fast. But then again, Not all stories need to spend ages and ages on developping a relaitionship.
My interest have been gained, and I shall continue!
From reading the first chapter, it appears that sometimes your battle buddies can be exceptionally wonderful jerks.
This was a sweet first meeting.
no feedback necessary , this was great , took me as long as it would take to read a 1k word chapter as it did to read this 5k one cause i was liking taking it nice and slow to enjoy everything that was happening....
im not one for literature so i don't know how to make something good better , but this was good enough for me.....