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Pinkie, sometimes it's a smart idea to
DO YOUR FUCKING RESEARCH
Furious Twilight in 3...
Aww man, it's really sad even though I expected that already.
Go. Let Rainbow give 'em a piece of her mind.
Oh dear... I think those baddy parents are about to get their comeuppance.
I shall be glad. dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/yay_red.png
Pinkie's a moron, but other than that, excellent chapter sir, looking forward for the next.
Those ex-parents are... going to have an unpleasant time I feel.
Poor Lumi. But it is something she does need to confront and get past.
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hmm ... oh ..fluttershy i didn't expect you to bring so many animals whats the ocasion?
oh not much i just need to avenge the pain YOU GAVE MY FRIEND!
instantly the cloud house is destroyed and turned to vapor and then disintegrated in the wind by one of fluttershy's dragon friends then she calls the phenoxes to burn the pegasi's wings and then the griffons are ground bound for the remainder of their miserable lives.
i think either you planed this pinkie or you werent expecting the parents to be so high in the canterlot nobility that they would rather loose a daughter than be disgraced for having a unicorn rather than a pegasi daughter. and to be asses about her surviving not to mention being cruel about lunas return from discordial nightmares.
i have that lovely feeling when you just know someone's head is about to get put in the way of the proverbial overhead shit thrower.
Leave it to Pinkie to screw everything up.
Well accidents happen when ponies drink to much... they could fall down the stairs... or have their wings forcibly removed and tossed off a cloud formation.
Cue Twilight on a roaring rampage of revenge in 3... 2... 1...
Seriously though, Pinkie... how did you miss something like that!?
Great update Rusty... shows I do have an emotional attachment to the characters because I am mad at Lumi's parents. Hope they get what is coming to them...
Kinda reminds me of my dad, before I set him straight.
Anyway, dat cliffy!
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Or general rampage. Is it lynching if Luna approves of it?
Twilight will have to handle this situation very carefully.
If Lumi is as popular with the Changlings as it seems, then if word gets out about it, the parents won't make it home alive.
I kinda feel sorry for the parents as they are going to have a one pissed off general and princess and well every one on there hands
over then that they are evil.
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This is a mature fic, so a little toture is not out of the picture, no? Gods know those scumbags deserve it
This was a cruel way to end a chapter. You better put the next one out before the edits. I don't think I could stand the wait. I don't even want to guess what will happen next. I just really want the next chapter. Lumi sure has grown on us that takes excellent writing skills.
Magical Matrices in place! Actuality Processors running at full speed! Summoning Delusive Excrement!
Commencing in 3! 2! 1! STAND BACK, EVERYPONY, THIS SHITS ABOUT TO GET REAL!
Experimenters Notes: Methinks Pinkie Pie didn't realise Lumi's parents didn;t want her. Hell, I don't even think Pinkie'd even be Capable of such a thought. Oh and the experiment was a complete sucess... until it exploded. Back to scrubbing the walls...
knew what was gonna happen as soon as i saw the line about the parents dropping they're foal simply because it wasn't a pegasus. thats just heartless, and likely shows that they're at least a bit racist.
go twilight
712010 interesting
you know, for me, it seems like learning a old language like that could be easier than one of the numerous modern languages (would like to learn japanese but my reasons for that lie with videogames and its rather hard >.>). in the case of luna's typical speeck it'd be more a matter of getting used to the eth's thy, thou, and such.
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Heh, actually Middle English is an absolute mess to learn, though admittedly I find it easier to puzzle my way through than Japanese. Middle English is halfway between anglo-saxon and more modern English, and is the root for Gaelic spelling and grammar, and I always saw Luna as speaking in Old English style speckled with some Middle English. Admittedly, she's still technically speaking the modern language, since Old and Middle English are different enough to require translation, but her mode of speech slips occasionally back to Old English and Middle English turns of phrase and grammar. In this story anyway.
712157 yeah, i suppose if anyone could tell how hard learning a new language is it'd be luna as shes spoke that way for over 1k years, thats gotta be hard to adjust to :/
overall though, i know like a few words from at least 10 different languages yet nowhere near enough of any one language (aside from modern english of course) to get very far with it. i could read japanese romanji fine as its mainly getting the pronunciation correct on that but the kanji and other stuff i ain't got a clue where to even start on that. well, i'm sure i could figure it out if i kept messing around with it long enough.
I dearly wish there was a way to show just how much I appreciate such awesome stories as this. It seems to me that a mere like and a fav do not do this story justice. I await with bated breath the incoming wrath, NOBODY deserves the kind of treatment that Lumi's parents gave her.
wow...i wonder if twi's gonna be smart about it and deal out some discreet punishment or if we will get another fully powered angry twilight.
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Well, I would think it depends on how good of an example she wants to set for Lumi.
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yea, im thinking something like: comforting lumi -> go back and leave her at the party so her true friends/family can care for her -> take her parents far away to have a 'talk' -> teleport them 2km upwards and seal their wings -> let them fall to just before the ground
alternatively; she could always trade them to the beast for some gift to give to lumi...
but you never know, she might just teleport back to the party in all her fury and scream at them...(yes, that is kind of unlikely!)
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Giving others to the Fae risks insanity (so does murder, but it is less likely you will lose clarity). Option three is see if the royal gaurd can investigate... dropping a foal like that would be attempted murder after all.
I hope one result of this is Twilight adopting Lumi as her daughter.
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"I hope one result of this is Twilight adopting Lumi as her daughter."
i thought about that too, but wouldn't it be a little awkward being both twi's squire and her daughter?
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If there were other knights then she should be their squire; however, there are not so the point is moot. (And as a knight's scion she should be a squire)
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not really. being a squire is working for a knight, and lots of kids work for their parents.
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yea, both of you got a very good point, i guess i should have thought more about the meaning behind the role and not how she acts with twi...
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No, you are right that it would be unusual in our world, but the story is in Equestria where there are far fewer knights.
A: shit's about to hit th' fan. B: i think Twilight's gunna throw those two to th' Beast herself. C: I have one thing to say to those two: *WHONG* *WHONG* DEAN TO TH' HEAD FUCKERS!
'Dean' as in 'Dean Guitar'.
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Handing others over to the Fae is dangerous to a changeling's sanity.
779299 who died and made you expert?
besides, i know of several dimensions where that is not true. not in th' slightest.
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I have a copy of the rulebook for the game this is a crossover with. And given how important the clarity issues of changelings are to the game's setting, they are likely to be largely left intact.
779372 ...wow, you just ruined a large part of th' story for me. thanks a lot jackass.
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How does that ruin anything? It turn up thoughout the story (various crazed changelings, Twilight having issues during the time between the break up with Rarity though Hearths Warming Eve).
780567 because i diddn't know that part of it was already written out.
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Of course, it's important to note I'm departing the text significantly when it comes to Changeling abilities and such. Twilight's breaking points are already dealt with and planned out, but turning someone over to the Faeries is akin to condemning them to a potential eternity of torment. It carries the same psychological ramifications of giving someone to a torturer and knowing what's going to happen to them.
However, I'm trying not to stick to the clarity rules too closely, since they're a little silly at the extreme ends. At the highest, selfish thoughts cause a loss of clarity, and at the lowest, only mass murder causes a loss of clarity. Ultimately what constitutes a decrease in sanity in my mind is a major negative life change that Twilight is unable to deal with, or something that causes her to doubt the reality of her situation. Giving someone to the Faeries is something she would only do if she was so far around the bend already you could use her brain for a corkscrew.
781082 now THAT makes more sense.
dammit I just managed to find time to read and turns out that L's parents can give Lyra's parents in TER a run for their money... hopefully will maim them horribly after publicly humiliating them.
Two Pegasi that purposely dropped a unicorn filly to the ground from Cloudsdale, still dislike her because she hangs with the nicer half of the Nightmare Moon/Princess Luna scene, a bunch of changlings (for which I am sorry that the Cannon!Changlings pretty much shot your brilliant idea of the changlings down the shitter)that she help saved, and is the squire/apprentice to the most Badass Freaking Unicorn in Equestria and who is evidently fated to clean the Beasts clock with fire, pain, and plan ass-kickery, dood.
Badass Twilight will be angry, Changlings will be angry, Twilight's friends will be rather mad, Bright Watch and Cloudy Skies will shit bricks, dood.
I won't lie I have been entranced with this story while its been going.
Now while I wait anyone know any other good Twilight got REALLY powerfull stories? I have read all the ones in the Alicorn Twilight Group and a few others... This one is by far in my top 3 if not the top one.
833206 The Trixie that we see right now is the real one. The crossover element would be Changeling: The Lost and sometimes those who are abducted by the Fae are replaced by a copy(i.e. the pumpin Twi[though I forgot how those copies were called]).
Also it's kinda sad, the game seems interesting, but I know for sure that none of my friends would be interested, so trying to get one would be rather moot
Comeon its been 9 weeks :/
Are you planning to add like 10 chapters in a row ?:0
sooo... it's been a while.
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the copy is called a fetch
great story by the way, looking foward to the next update