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Again? Seriously? At this time?!
Ahhh! The story keeps getting better and better. Now it is shaping up to perhaps feature some TwiLuna? Huzzah!
Poor Luminous, I wonder what is going on with her... perhaps Twilight made a deal in regards to her without realizing it?
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You say that like updates are bad thing... even though I am reading this at midnight instead of sleeping... Nothing wrong with that!
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What? I usually post around 10:00-11:00 PM PST
It's when I have the most free time!
Besides, it's also when all my room-mates are asleep and I can focus on reviewing my story and making sure I didn't mess something up spectacularly. Otherwise people are opening doors, closing doors, talking on the phone... Very distracting.
550945 you deprive me of sleep! Again! And I love it, but... damn it!
Twilight Sparkle: Warrior. I love that detatchment from the typical bookish twilight.
Also, awesome to see you back in action and updating! still love the story.
Badass Twilight is indeed badass. That was very unexpected and had me laughing for it. Well done Mr. Rusty.
A wild wolf of the pack appears!
Luminous uses deathray!
It's supper effective!
Screw sleeping! I check my email for one last check and this! Awesome chap ……zzz
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I always saw Twilight as having the potential for being a warrior, and if anything, the season 2 finale only reinforced that idea, with her flinging blasting spells left and right fighting off the changelings. She's got a lot of power with that broad talent for magic, and is willing to fight for what she believes in. Even if the spellwork in that episode was relatively clumsy (she had to spend most of her focus disabling one changeling), I think that stems more from an unfamiliarity with the idea of offensive magic than a lack of skill, given her display with the Ursa Minor.
Besides, when you think about it, she already is a warrior: She's the head of an elite team that head-ons threats to Equestria. She directly challenged Nightmare Moon with nothing more than five ponies she barely knew and a vague hunch, and was hinge in bringing down Discord; without her memory spell, all would have been for naught.
I've always loved Twilight as a character for those reasons, and more, and that was actually the basis for the whole Backwards Through the Mirror image of Dame Twilight Sparkle. Twilight with the experience she needed to become the warrior in full, without losing her sense of compassion. Mix in a little Changeling-y goodness, a dash of crazy and bam! Instant story!
Altough i would not wish to intrude in any story you might have cooking up further but i was wondering.
Is there any myth at which this story has a base?
551611 look up changeling the lost by whitewolf entertainment that is part of the mithology the rest rusty could tell you if you read through the earlier comments you'll understand a bit more.
i love a good update its great to see you back rusty now to see the rest of the arc shape up undernieth your paws.
hmm i see twilight after a while going apeshit and slaughtering the whole hord from the beast after a while IF the threats keep coming.
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i usually dont read the comments, prefer the stories. But i`ll take up on your advice and will skim through them.
Whenever one of my favorite stories updates, I feel the urge to stab something and laugh uncontrollably. How concerned should I be?
Luminous explode's a puppy's skull and Twilight and Luna get what will probably equate to an awkward shower scene.
SOUNDS GUD TO ME BRAH
Purple glow-y eyes huh? Sounds like the beginning of a fun development.
And is pleased with the developments with sister dear I think.
Lead pipes... I wonder if that affects alicorns and if so if there is any lingering effects from it...
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If you can, look up the section in the Changeling book on 'entitlements'. It may be enlightening as to the current problem around Luminous.
And why wouldn't she be pleased? Twilight's been a brief prisoner of the Beast, same as Luna, they get along reasonably well, in a mutually socially awkward kind of way.
And I figure heavy metal poisoning is a mild annoyance to an immortal being. The other ponies living there though, well...
Fun fact: The Romans used to drink their very acidic wine out of lead goblets, which would sweeten the drink by dissolving a little with every sip.
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So another aspect of the game is emerging. I look forward to Twilight working out what it is them.
I only have a list of the entitlements from the wikia article for the game, but I would suppose that one of knighthood ones would make the most sense here as it is a knight and squire if you are using one from the game.
552615 Don't worry, that's perfectly normal.
Freaking ponies with freaking laser beams. Can it get any more epic?
I just noticed that Lumi has heterochromia. i seriously thought that her eyes constantly shifted from blue to green and back again.
i think heterochromia is awsome, hell one of my close friends in school had it.
Stupid sexy Twilight
554095 Speaking of entitlements (well, not necessarily speaking of, but related to), is Apple Bloom still owned by Twilight, or did healing her soul void the contract with the Beast?
Wait a minute! There's a clause in the Contract of Hours,a universal contract, that allows a changeling to restore anything that belonged to their family before their durance to its original glory. Celestia and Luna owned the Castle. Celestia and Luna are Cadence's aunts( by adoption, but I don't believe that matters to contracts). Shining Armor is Cadence's husband. Shining Armor is Twilight's brother. The marriage took place before her durance( her time in the Burning Library), didn't it? So Twilight could literally just magic everything back to perfection, instantly. Is she not aware of this or is she just ignoring it in favor of "honest" physical strength, like during Winter Wrap up?
*groans* did Twilight really not expect this to happen? Celestia contractually gave the Beast the Everfree forest. It belongs to him now. Celestia can't fief the Everfree to Twilight because it's no longer part of her kingdom. Twilight's gone from victim to invader now. Is she really blind enough not to see this? Invaders are always meet with bloodshed. She's a facts nut, she should know this.
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I feel like you're too caught up on facts and lore that May or may not apply to this story. This isn't a traditional Fae world and I feel like a LOT of the rules are different than you expect. That said, The celestia thing is something I am questioning too, Perhaps there is more to it then that? After all the beast is supposed to be preventing his kin from entering leaving the forest and instead he is encouraging it? Maybe the contract was voided long ago for some reason.
6117924 you do realise that, (and it has been said multiple times including last chapter) twilight sparkle is an only child in this universe