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Evil tree is Evil. What are you gonna do?
Twilight is, once again, BAMF.
This chapter seemed a little short. But that's okay, Twilight beat the shit out of ExDeath.
"Twilight made sure the crystal she'd prepared to transport Sweetie's soul was safely tucked in her saddlebag" Don't you mean Apple Bloom's soul?
Other than that, another excellent chapter. I look forward to reading more.
What a great chapter the hunt begins and as I thought Twilight has a army. I do wonder who might be in the cloak with the pink fur. I really enjoy ready this story I think I have gone trough it three times now. Well keep up the great work.
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TWILIGHT'S CAPTURING SWEETIE'S SOUL! WHAT A TWIST!
Nah, t'was a typo, but it's fixed now, thanks for pointing it out.
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She has an army at her disposal, but only five volunteers. The rest are combing the Hedge for dangers and guarding Sweet Apple Acres.
Hmm forshadowing of twilight and luna????
Bruce Camble would be so proud.
Buck yeah, another chapter! Will the Knight in shining armor save the Night Princess? After Applebloom's rescue of course.
WOO HOO! Lack of sleep is awesome! I just read the entire story, and I like OP twilight! And now I am a sad panda, for this is the last part of the current story. I want, nay, I NEED moar, for it fills me with delight to read a good story. And so the waiting game begins once more, and I am a champion.
Oh, and I would very much like to see an awkward scene with twilight appearing in public with full armor and flaming hair all flame-y, and have her freak out the general public and her friends. I'm a cruel person.
It's almost a shame that only the changelings can fully appreciate her changed appearance for the most part. Can even the Princesses see it, without exposure to the Hedge and lands beyond?
Also, I predict the reason the armor works so well is that Luna had the Crown of the Element of Magic integrated into it. The Royal Canterlot voice could be bestowed by an enchantment, or it could just be another aspect of Twilight's awesome power that anyone could develop of they were so awesome they could take a God in a fight.
I'd say "I like OP Twilight too!" except I don't feel she's overpowered. Even when she's strong enough to demolish an army of normal ponies with trivial effort, there are creatures in the lands out there which are probably terrifying beyond comprehension. Eldritch abominations older than Equestria itself, hiding in the blackest holes in the universe, waiting for something to wake them up and just tempt them to tear reality apart.
Twilight needs to be ready to face them, if they come knocking.
Just wanted to say that I've largely enjoyed everything that's been written so far though I do feel that there are times when you seem to move the plot forward a bit too fast. It would have been nice to hear Twilight talk to the others about her experiences when she spirited away into Arcadia or even the discussion between her and Celestia after the later had woken up about what had really had happened.
@Jiopada
Slow down with the writin' there buddy, it's a good story and all but try and CONDENSE and SUMMARIZE. They will help. Oh, and @Rusty, you convinced me to get an account! I still want an awkward moment.
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Hooray!
And that may be in the cards, you never know.
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The Princesses can perceive Twilight's true nature, through the virtue of their connection to the very primeval forces that Twilight's power comes from.
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Talking chapters are incoming, with the raising of the Castle of the Pony Sisters. I just like writing action is all.
It's been 11 days since an update, I need MOAR! =P
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... Wow.
Fortunately, the next chapter's almost done, I just haven't had as much time to write what with finals last week, holiday shopping and relatives arriving.
Sorry about that :P Got a little carried away. I understand though. Don't worry about it.
Trees should Never anger Fae Queens.
DM rules this to be a fair representation of a Blackhaw tree. Good show. Lol! Eee hee hee, they are one of my favorite kinds of hobgoblins, so deliciously creepy!
I don't think anyone has ever made Twilight more badass.
Ever.
.....Pinkie?
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Well, there was "The Immortal Game," but there's a lot more assholes there and almost made me want to burn something down. The main reason I stayed was because the Combat System the author built up was seriously awesome. He gave Twi a gravity powered (thinking with portals) molten metal laser and cut Celetia's father (also an asshole) in half with it. Didn't kill him, but seriously hurt him. Also massive blades of magic and gems.
4585266 Mother, actually; Titan dodged when she tried it on him. Either way, TIG!Twi was the very definition of OP... But in a way that was awesome and not overdone. BTtM!Twi has a similar vibe.
But yeah, interesting how Twi never noticed that Pinkie was a changeling. I guess all of her mutations were inside her head.. Or inside her mane.
4640561 Although it is posible for someone to be taken by the fae and make it back to reality after a long enough time that they are officially a changeling but not long enough that they where physically 'changed', personaly I don't think that is the case with Pinky. As I understand it in changeling the lost a changeling doesn't need a physical deformity for another changeling to recognise them as such, it's not so much a sight thing that sensing the wyrd (the 'wyrd' [get it? Get it? No? Ok I'll stop now] magic like stuff of the hedge, the fae and other stuff to do with all that) that you are now both a part of. I suspect Rusty had (has, I hope its a 'has') something else in mind for her backstory.
4640561 it's pretty easy to hide changeling-hood from mortals. Unless you run out of Glamour, or purposely reveal yourself, there simply isn't any way for unenchanted mortals to figure it out. And pre-durance Twilight was nothing if not unenchanted.
I too am pretty sure it's pinkie pie, Also that The Pie is a changeling... would explain MANY things