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Oh, I see what you did there.
And I love it.
This story operates purely on dream logic.... and I love it for that.
I'm enjoying it immensely. Thank you!
My god!!! this is an awesome story!!! please type more
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Actually, they're kinda both, since Twilight remembers their personalities and it's part of a psychoactive landscape effect.
Gotta say, this is pretty awesome so far. A fay adventure story, weaving through otherworldly landscapes... tell me, what are your inspirations? I'd like to check them out. This is exactly the sort if story I want to write some day. Your prose is wonderful, your imagery lush (love Twilight's apperance and the latest dream world, it really is top notch) and I'm really sucked into this tale. Bravo!
One thing I will point out is Blackboard seemed more interesting as a fox rather than a pony, and I feel that having him act snarky tarnishes the reader's perception of the mysterious spirit helper like you set him up to be. Now, I'm sure you've thought about his character well, I'm just talking about my perception of him during that chapter. His dialogue seems at odds with the tone of the fic before and after.
Also, why haven't we heard more about Celestia? I may be wrong, but we only hear she's still injured after Octavia informs Twilight. Wouldn't Twilight have inquired Pinkie further about Celestia's condition, considering she was nearly killed? She is Twilight's beloved mentor, after all (I'm a huge Celestia fan, so don't take this as criticism, take this as me wondering what your angle is with her).
I'm looking forward to seeing how and if they escape, and also Twilight's ultimate meeting with the princesses, particularly Celestia.
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White Wolf's roleplaying game, Changeling: The Lost inspired vast portions of this, including most of the Hedge, and thank you, I've been getting tons of support for this story and it's quite touching, since this is the first story I've ever put up publicly.
Blackboard is more of a background character, he's a very old character of mine from an RPG I played once a long time ago, but I can see what you mean. The whole story will be undergoing revisions once this large section is done for grammar and some smoothing of scenes.
Also you haven't heard more about Celestia because nopony really knows anything beyond she was injured, Princess Luna tries to downplay her sister's injury to avoid panic, and won't even divulge the details to the Elements of Harmony. Once again, I'll probably make that clearer in the revisions.
Now that I think about it, I'm curious as to how powerful Twilight would be if she used her Element too. The crown which represents the Element of Magic bestows great power on her in canon, but she never really uses it much outside of really important occasions. I feel like if she put it on now and boosted her already incredible powers, she'd honestly be a being on par with the alicorn sisters. You know, create a heavenly body and command a share of the day if she felt like it.
Now that I think about it, I wonder if they too aren't just ancient changelings who grew so powerful they marshalled their forms into something more normal looking.
Maybe I'm confused about the terminology, but is a Changeling someone who was replaced by a stick-pumpkin?
Because I thought the stick-pumpkin creature was a changeling. And if that was the case Twilight is most certainly not one
1225134 It's like this: the pumpkin creature was a puppet(or a homunculus, or something like that), a changeling is someone who's been taken and irrevocably changed by a Fae Lord.
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This story is using Changeling: The Lost elements in it. As such, the pumpkin-and-stick thing was a Fetch, an artificial being created by True Fae to take the place of whatever hapless mortal they kidnap. Fetchs are almost, but not quite, and exact replica but without a soul and often a little, (or very big) difference in some part of their personality. Twilight's Fetch, for instance, was a psycho-lesbian nutjob.
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So Twi is a Changeling now?
4553045 Yes, although a different type than the ones that occur naturally in Equestria.
Curse his sudden but inevitable betrayal