Love takes the sea

This story is a sequel to The Pirate & the Royal

The once royal Applejack now live her new life with her wife Ranbow dash, but now they meet some of Rainbow Dash old friends. They want what Rainbow once wanted, treasures. But of first sight of Rainbow's biggest treasure, they want it. And to get her treasure back she needs to take big risks, especially since her treasure is now two.

Chapters (4)

Piracy and pregnancy (edited by:ponyfan30) · 24th Nov 2014 · 1,340 words
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Old enimes (not edited) · 14th Dec 2014 · 1,181 words
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Love is a challenge (not edited) · 31st Dec 2014 · 2,068 words
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Plain and not simple · 10th Jun 2015 · 1,049 words
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Sea_Swirl

Sea_Swirl #1 · Dec 11th, 2014 · 1 · · Piracy and pregnancy (edited by:ponyfan30) ·

YAY THE SEQUEL!!!! O.M.G you have NO idea how much I like AJ's look it's... wow, I really like the story so far! Keep it up!!!

ICantThinkOfAGoodName

ICantThinkOfAGoodName #2 · Dec 12th, 2014 · · · Piracy and pregnancy (edited by:ponyfan30) ·

I have never disliked an AppleDash story. Or at least I don't think. I usually ignore the one's I don't like. But the grammar here, yesh. You need a editor. The idea's good, production, bad. Sorry.

RavenFire2908

RavenFire2908 #3 · Dec 12th, 2014 · · · Piracy and pregnancy (edited by:ponyfan30) ·

5374775 I know i am bad with grammar and stuff... I have a edited werson, I just need to get it up...(when I wake up, its like 22:37 am where I live, so when I wake up)

ICantThinkOfAGoodName

ICantThinkOfAGoodName #4 · Dec 14th, 2014 · · · Piracy and pregnancy (edited by:ponyfan30) ·

Changed to an upvote, grammar is much, much better. Just a few mistakes, like no comma before dialogue and spaces, but great anyhow!

Sea_Swirl

Sea_Swirl #5 · Dec 15th, 2014 · · · Old enimes (not edited) ·

So awesome I forgot to fave it so I missed this chapter until I saw it up in the stories with a new chapter

RavenFire2908

RavenFire2908 #6 · Dec 15th, 2014 · · · Old enimes (not edited) ·

5386561 guessing wild here! You dont like Flim and Flam?

Ponyfan30

Ponyfan30 #7 · Dec 17th, 2014 · · · Old enimes (not edited) ·

Will edit soon!

These stories are soo great!!! I'm a big fan of them!

RavenFire2908

RavenFire2908 #8 · Dec 17th, 2014 · · · Old enimes (not edited) ·

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Sea_Swirl

Sea_Swirl #9 · Dec 31st, 2014 · · · Love is a challenge (not edited) ·

Wow... AJ against the flim flam bro's, good luck to both (more AJ then them but even if they do win, they are totally going to get put into wheelchairs while doing it )