Sombra's daughter

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King Sombra has a daughter, nopony knew. All but Princess Celestia were clueless, she knows who it is and she keeps an eye on her, to make sure she doesn't make the same mistake as her father did. Unknown to the daughter she have powers no pony should ever have, she is an earth pony and her name is Applejack. And it's time to take the place of her father.

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Voices outside the nightmares · 7th May 2015 · 1,110 words
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Tenebris pupillam · 30th Jul 2015 · 1,070 words
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Sea_Swirl

Sea_Swirl #1 · May 11th, 2015 · · · Voices outside the nightmares ·

Yes!!! Yay!!! I've been waiting for this since the cover art came out!!!!!!

Fanskapet

Fanskapet #2 · May 11th, 2015 · 1 · · Voices outside the nightmares ·

well this was a bit too fast paced felt weird they would just say yeah you had a nightmare and you aren't kin

still awesome story idea and well written give thumb up

RavenFire2908

RavenFire2908 #3 · May 11th, 2015 · · · Voices outside the nightmares ·

5965756 I will make it better in the next chapters. I will slow the pase, promise!

Honest Wisdom

Honest Wisdom #4 · May 11th, 2015 · · · Voices outside the nightmares ·

Must... nitpick... summary...

King Sombra has a daughter, nopony knew. All but Princess Celestia were clueless, she knows who it is and she keeps an eye on her, to make sure she doesn't do make the same mistake as her father did. Unknown to the daughter she have powers no pony should ever have, she is an earth pony and her name is Applejack. And it's time to take the place ~~where~~ of her father ~~was stopped~~.

Edit: Interesting idea, I might give it a read but please Edit this... It wounds me.

Cascades