I love to read, love to write, and love to draw, and absolutely LOVE My Little Pony!
After a terrible accident in Ponyville Library, Twilight's life hangs in the balance, but for Celestia, this is the perfect opportunity to carry out her plans to vanquish a growing evil . . .
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Thank you for whoever drew the cover art; I found it on Google and don't know who did it. Sorry!!!!! :( Whoever you are, again, thank you!
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Can't wait to see where this goes!
Cliffhanger? just as it was getting interesting?
This has some interesting potential. I don't know enough of the story yet to convince me to favorite it or give a proper sense of feedback on it, besides from being a good hook for readers.
Here is a link to the original picture
Ta da!
Well that was extremely dark... I love it.
I would love for this story to spark to life like the fire it describes. -Star
good story for a first.
it looks like it might have ponetial.
I have no idea what's going on, but I can't wait to find out.
Nice hook keep it up
Great opener can't wait for what happens next.
whens the next chapter coming out???
I have the next chapter almost all the way written, so hopefully it'll be up in the next week or so.
Sorry for making you guys wait like this! But I promise, it's going to be worth it.
I like it. It has potential. Keep up the good work!
If all goes according to plan, chapter three should feature Rainbow Dash.
And don't worry, I have the rest of the story planned out, and it should be pretty long by the end of it. Hopefully over thirty chapters.
I just can't wait till this story picks up pace. I've got an awesome scene (actually a couple awesome scenes) that I just can't wait to write!
i like the explosion not to many fics use injuries as severe as what you put and its a nice change of pace to see some pony actually in danger instead of a few broken bones and maybe a concussion and ill keep an eye on this also
God
im loving this story , So dark, So RD eh intrstresting ,will she have a bigger role? How will shining react? The suspence.
I hate auto correct.
4139756 I am so with you on that one. Auto-correct makes me want to smash my computer against the wall.
Or maybe burn it. Or both . . .
Weird. I have this story as marked on my computer, but no memory whatsoever of reading it. And a comment was left by me...
By Celestia, I'm going insane.
Guess that means I can read it and enjoy it again!
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Same here...
How would I forget this?
Good start so far, content-wise. Your imagery is fantastic.
There are a couple grammatical nitpicks I want to make note of, though: you have a fair number of instances of redundancy (notably, early in Ch. 1, you state that Twilight is going down the stairs twice) and a couple instances of spelling, as well as some weak wording in just a few points.
I don't think anyone has seen a mighty roar. Except for those with Synesthesia.
Oh, look, I went full nerd on you. Sorry 'bout that.
Overall, my biggest complaint is that there isn't more of it, but I do get that writer's block is a thing, being a chronic sufferer of it myself.
Liked and Faved.
4140912 Don't worry, I have the third chapter already written, and it should have (hopefully) a thousand words or more.
But I haven't counted or anything, so we'll have to see.
(get ready for some serious news in upcoming chapters that should really get the ball rolling)
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Don't worry, ya'll aren't alone in Looneyville. 
I think maybe both of you are going insane.
You've got to be at least a little off your rocker to watch a show filled with color-full pastel flying unicorns and like it.
Unless you're five and under. If you are, then that's totally understandable. Although, considering your avatar pic, I severely doubt that.
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Remember this chapter is just a buffer for thé next
Hi this is spein and it is soo sad
T.T why would you do this to me >.>
i didnt expect this TBH
the summary makes me think that theres more to this chapter than meets the eye
4145595 Indeed, things are not yet finished, me thinks.
Celestia, what are you up to?
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It might ne something to do with her injuries because in all she WAS burned by some mystic fire
I don't remember doing that comment where I apparently said it was sad . . .
Go figure.
Maybe I'm going crazy . . .
Sombras going to bring her back evil...
U know that comment I said down there where I said it was 'sooo sad?'
she stole my iPad and posted a comment in my name . . .
Yeah. That one.
I just found out that was my sister.
Just to let you readers know, if I post a comment and say I'm 'Splien' or 'Spein', that's my sister.
Okay... this still says it is incomplete, now you've left it at a place that it might be left if the story were a tragedy, but no in the description... you implied there would be more than what is already here... so please please please, don't give up on this story, I really really want to see where this story goes and what idiotic plan Celestia has that justifies telling everypony that Twilight is dead when she probably is not... exactly dead... Sorry, I don't normally get like this with other writers, because I know I wouldn't like my readers bothering me for an update. It's just that this story has such an interesting premise that I don't want to see it go to waste. So you get a gold star and my excited anticipation that you are working on the next chapter in this exciting mystery.
Are you going to continue this story?
5305444 At this point, I'm not entirely sure. We just moved, and I'm at a new school and I'm falling behind in a few of my classes, so this is pretty much on hiatus until everything gets settled down and under control.
Sorry.
5322062 Well darn I was hoping to read this, and I don't really like to start stories that may or may not be finished.
We can't stop here! This is feels country!
IRL comes first, though.
Does rainbow dash have dissociative identity disorder?
Is there going to be more?
Are you going to continue it? It’s been 4 years since you last published and I think that you should, this is a really good story. Don’t give up on it ok?
Wait, what?
Wait, BLUEBLOOD!? WHBAHDVSHSDHHVSUGV!!!
WHAT!? This was unexpected.
Jeez chill, the nurse is only doing her job.
......... What. I'm now depressed.
Did you seriously leave this story with Twilight dying? Judging by the story, title, and description she comes back to life or is never really dead and you just leave the story off LIKE THIS!? Please continue this.
April 8