• Member Since 13th Jun, 2014
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RavenFire2908


Changed my name cus, I found out that I love ravens. And I got a new main OC

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The apple trees at Sweet Apple Acers are not normal, not only the zap apple trees, but every tree and plants at the farm. Only one pony can control the trees. But when Granny Smith looses the farm to the Flim Flam brothers, they need to seek help... Or die.

-set after the super speedy cider sqeezy 6000

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 4 )

A "Poison Ivy" Applejack? Intriguing, do go on. I look forward to seeing where this goes.

Now then, from the top:

"Congratulations, the cider business in Ponyville... Is yours. Come on Apples, we better pack up are things." Applejack said as the hole family went to pack that they had left. She looked up from the ground a second, none of the towns ponies was doing anything. She sighed "come an ya'll its okey..." As she finished she could hear pinkie pie bursting out crying behind her, but she cept walking.

"Congratulations, the cider business in Ponyville...is yours. Come on Apples, we better pack up are our things." Applejack said as the hole whole family went to pack that what they had left. She looked up from the ground for a second, none of the towns ponies was were doing anything. She sighed, "Come an on ya'll its okay..." As she finished she could hear Pinkie Pie bursting out crying behind her, but she cept kept walking.

A lot of grammar and a few spelling touch ups will help the story excel. My advice? Get an editor. I think there's a group for that here.

goodness love this story!

"Elderfree Forest." :unsuresweetie:

isn't it, "Everfree Forest?" :ajbemused:

Meh, great story, anyway. :raritywink:

wait so aj just commited murder with plants im cool with that good to see pony using the natuarl magics not just unicorns

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