The apple trees at Sweet Apple Acers are not normal, not only the zap apple trees, but every tree and plants at the farm. Only one pony can control the trees. But when Granny Smith looses the farm to the Flim Flam brothers, they need to seek help... Or die.
-set after the super speedy cider sqeezy 6000
A "Poison Ivy" Applejack? Intriguing, do go on. I look forward to seeing where this goes.
Now then, from the top:
"Congratulations, the cider business in Ponyville...is yours. Come on Apples, we better pack up
areour things." Applejack said as theholewhole family went to packthatwhat they had left. She looked up from the ground for a second, none of the towns ponieswaswere doing anything. She sighed, "Comeanon ya'll its okay..." As she finished she could hear Pinkie Pie bursting out crying behind her, but sheceptkept walking.A lot of grammar and a few spelling touch ups will help the story excel. My advice? Get an editor. I think there's a group for that here.
goodness love this story!
"Elderfree Forest."
isn't it, "Everfree Forest?"
Meh, great story, anyway.
wait so aj just commited murder with plants im cool with that good to see pony using the natuarl magics not just unicorns